Penname: Sweet Pea [Contact]

Real name: Angela

Member Since: 02/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio: Just a lady with a healthy fanfic obsession.


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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary: Uhura had promised herself not to fall in love...and then real life happened.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon, General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Sexual Content
Series: Star Trek: Beyond TOS
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2592
Read Count: 4033
Published: 12/06/09
Updated: 12/06/09


Title: Chapter 1: Wayward Plans

Did he say a reeducation on sex. Spock is just plain sexy. Finally, they're a couple!!!!

Author's Response: They've actually been a couple for a while, but this is the closest they've gotten to...erm...yeah ;).  Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/06/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 114]
Summary:

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Evangeline is a woman uncertain of her future plans and her fledgling relationship with RJ is not going as expected. On the other hand Todd wants to break free from his destructive relationship with Blair. “Destined to be together” These two own this phrase but there are always obstacles to overcome before this becomes a reality.  

 



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Cannon, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 60419
Read Count: 13489
Published: 15/06/09
Updated: 07/10/09


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I will neven like Blair and I hate how she uses her kids to manipulate Todd.

Author's Response:

Congrats Sweet Pea on being the Champagne Reader of the Year :),

Blair doesn't have a lot of options with Todd. The body he once liked has been given away so much that it's lost emotional value so at this stage she'll use Starr to at least get some time with him. That belief the more the family is together the more those hurt feelings will dissipate. Thanks for the awesome review! 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/07/09

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

RJ would come alone at that moment and just ruin it. Blair is the worst type of mother. She left little Star in the car!! Can I slap her myself!

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet Pea,

Thanks Ms. Champagne Reader for the great review! You want me to write you in slapping her...LMAO!

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Date: 14/07/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Seriously, he better not try to stop her from going after her dream. She will hate him for it and they both will be miserable.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

Todd understands that it's deeper than her going off to NYU. He wants more than this sexual relationship - like she said before attraction is easy. He wants to go beyond the initial attraction and wants her to feel the same way too. Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/07/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

He just realized that he needs to do something about Blair!?! That woman, if you can call her that, has been messing up his chance of happiness since she first walked into his life.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet Pea thanks for the awesome review!

He needed her lions so now that he's found the right woman he has to do something about her..:)

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/07/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Poor Todd. Blair is such a bitch. What real woman uses her kids to hold on to a man that doesn't want her. Then she turns around and runs to his sister like some spoiled princess. Have you no self-respect Blair. I couldn't believe that this blonde bimbo had the nerves to call Evangeline a bimbo.

At least Todd's relationship with Evangeline is going well. They are well on their way to happily ever after. I just hope Blair's pregnancy doesn't come back to haunt Todd. He needs to tell Evangeline right now and be as upfront with her as possible.



Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

Blair is a spoiled, selfish beast that can't tell the difference between real love and obsessive love. When she first came across Evangeline she wasnt worried until Vange gave her the business. We'll see if Todd is upfront about this or not. Sometimes Todd's relationship with Blair factors into what he does. It's hard to do away with some bad habits. Thanks for the great review!  

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/09

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

RJ is such as sleezebag. I think he purposely followed Evangeline into the story. He needs to get on with his life.

The same goes for Blaire. Can you really get anymore deseperate than Blair. She's just down right repulsive now. 

I wonder what hurdles await this couple, and who on earth did Nore call. With a friend like that, who needs enemies.



Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

RJ mind's is finally starting to see what he had in Evangeline - and its worst for him because he lost her to TODD!

It blows Blair's mind that Todd is really with another woman and not coming to her.

Nora called Evangeline's mom...yikes!...LOL! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/08/09

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Nora called her mother, how childish. Vange is grown and can date whoever she wants.

Author's Response:

Hi Sweet,

Yeah Nora called up 'Big Momma'. She's afraid of two things. Todd being a bad boyfriend of course and influencing her decision to go tthe University. She has never trusted Vange's judgement when it comes to men especially bc of her past relationships. These two are certainly going to buck heads over this one bc of the obvious...love. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/08/09

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Did Layla really just do that!?! That was just plain dumb.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

You'll have to excuse her. She is young and Lisa was a part of setting this up. You'll see why in the next update! Thanks for reading and the awesomer review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/09/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 81]
Summary: He was lonely, she was desperate, maybe they will find solace in each other.

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Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 21312
Read Count: 5342
Published: 17/06/09
Updated: 19/07/10


Title: Chapter 4: For the love of Angela

Was she raped? That's the impression I'm getting. She definitely needs counseling. I hope she quickly realizes she's acting worst than her mom by abandoning Angela. Angela didn't ask to be born, but she's here now.

Author's Response:

Sweet Pea, I'm not sure she's ready to get better, she's still in pain and some wounds just wont heal even with time, we all know about those kind of wounds.

There are some battles that she cant win alone and the sooner she realizes that, the better for everyone. It might take more than a few trips to the shrink's couch. She doesnt feel like facing her problems so she wants the easy way out, in life, there is no such thing as an easy way out all she's doing is running in circles.

Maybe leaving Angela isn't a bad idea for now because she needs to re-invent herself before she can be a good mom.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary: Spock is unsure when enough is enough. Uhura helps him figure it out.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon, General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Sexual Content
Series: Star Trek: Beyond TOS
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3709
Read Count: 1909
Published: 18/06/09
Updated: 18/06/09


Title: Chapter 1: Enough

Loved the playful banter in this piece. These two are so cute and good together!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading! :)

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/06/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

 

Our family never shared the same last name / But our family was a family the same /
(And they say) Blood is thicker than water / Oh, but love is thicker than blood

-Thicker Than Blood, Garth Brooks

 



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 20994
Read Count: 18092
Published: 30/06/09
Updated: 30/06/09


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Applauding

This was such a sweet, tear-jerking story. You did an excellent job with the details of this Supernatural tale.  I felt the raw of emotion of each Winchester man, and Missouri's love for them all.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/06/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Cold Case fanfic.  My take on that delightful scene from 6.11, "Wings," where Kat brings Scotty coffee.  One-shot, complete.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2524
Read Count: 2564
Published: 01/07/09
Updated: 01/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet and playful! Love these two together.

Author's Response: Thank you!  They're so much fun to write.  I'm working on another story featuring them, so look for it soon!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/07/09

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

 Four-year-old Leeah plays alone a lot. Well at least it looks that way to the untrained eye. Really, she spends her time in a lush jungle of her own imagination where she's the leader and always has playmates, except the one she really wants.

Thanks to BlackMamba for the banner!



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2536
Read Count: 3095
Published: 02/07/09
Updated: 02/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: Lions and Tigers and... Pears?

That was so cute. I think it is a awesome short story for adults and kids to read!!! Sometimes, it's the simple things in life that are the most entertaining and exciting.

Author's Response: good, that was the plan. thanks so much!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/07/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

In the wake of a tragedy that nobody could have forseen, Kat struggles to come to terms with her place in her daughter's life.

Warning: This deals with the aftermath of violence. 
Pairing/characters: Kat/Lilly, Veronica Miller

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Slash
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 707
Read Count: 3056
Published: 02/07/09
Updated: 02/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: Monsters

Poor Kat. I felt the guilt mixed with the anger.

Author's Response: That was one of my intentions; to strike at the emotions of the reader.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/09

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

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Two people meet, not an unusual story but...



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2404
Read Count: 1691
Published: 05/07/09
Updated: 05/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think this awesome story expressed how most women feel with they first me a potential love interest. You're so busy noticing the sexy things about him, you forget what's going on around you. The humming thing did have me laughing, there is no way to explain that to a guy on the first date without blusing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and understanding.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/09

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary: As a mother, Amanda isn't afraid to use certain privileges.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon, General
Genre: Fantasy, Friendship, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: Star Trek: Beyond TOS
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2754
Read Count: 3789
Published: 05/07/09
Updated: 05/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Rights

She passed the mother test, which hard no matter what century!!!

Author's Response: Oh, yes, there is much love between Amanda and Uhura!  Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/09

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary: The beating of Uhura's heart reminds Spock of another.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon, General
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: Star Trek: Beyond TOS
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1225
Read Count: 3725
Published: 05/07/09
Updated: 05/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: Heartbeat

I am such a girl!! I made all the typical girly sounds while reading this story. It was so cute and sweet! I can only imagine Spock's response to that!

Author's Response: :) Spock can be a sweetie, can't he?  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary: The beating of Uhura's heart reminds Spock of another.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon, General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Star Trek: Beyond TOS
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2853
Read Count: 4362
Published: 05/07/09
Updated: 05/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: Claimed

I just noticed that in the pictue both Kirk and Chekov are looking at Uhura, and not that book, yet it is Spock who stands beside her.

Spock is one strong dude. It's about time that he 'claimed' her as his own. I'm not going to lie, I was a little grossed out by the Bones-Uhura kiss. My mom loves the orginial show, and I grew up watching the reruns with her. I always thought that Bones was old and creepy. I didn't think he was a perv like the guy in "Lost in Space," just creepy. 



Author's Response: I LOVE BONES! *snuggles him*  Bones is definitely not a perve, though, just...he and Uhura are close. ;) Just a warning, there might be more interaction between them as I love him to bits.  But yes, Uhura brings ALL the boys to the yard--why else do you think Spock's wearing his screwface? :-P.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/07/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Rachel finally has the courage to say those three little words to her husband.

 

A late entry to the "I love you" challenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1435
Read Count: 3135
Published: 06/07/09
Updated: 06/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

For a second I thought he was going to push her away from him, but I'm glad he didn't. At least now they can work on making that child, and it will be child created out of love.

Author's Response: I hope they do.  Thanks so much for your review Sweet Pea!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/07/09

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

A series of vignettes from the point of view of Spock, Spock Prime, Sarek and Tuven, a male OC, about the illogical women at the center of their lives.



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Categories: Movies
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Film)
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 21283
Read Count: 35017
Published: 09/07/09
Updated: 18/02/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Weddings

I love me some Spock!!! His face may not show emotion, but the eyes always give him away.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Births

12 months!!! No thank you, lol!

I love that Spock is unconventional, as far as being a Vulcan,  when it comes down to his family. 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/08/09

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 133]
Summary:

Love and Prejudice

A Pride and Prejudice spin off. Five years after their marriage, Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam Darcy are made the guardians of Mary Caroline Farthington, a free black woman and the  heir and adopted daughter of Lord Matthew Farthington. When Colonel Fitzwilliam returns from Louisiana, fresh on the heels of a hearty defeat in the Battle of New Orleans, he visits the Darcy's for the Christmas holidays. When the soldier and the heiress fall in love, will love be able to overcome prejudice?



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Categories: Books
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 93045
Read Count: 100748
Published: 09/07/09
Updated: 18/12/10


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Reading Lord Farthington letter made me go through so many different emotions; admiratio, anger, and disgust to name a few. I admired that he took this child and raised her as his own. But I couldn't help but feel anger and disgusted at the fact that race was such a negative factor back in those days.

I really have no idea how I would have survived back then, but I'm happy I was born in 1982, instead of 1882 or even 1942.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I completely understand. As much as I love the Regency period and squeal over period movies and attire, I am very glad to be a black woman today than to have been born a black woman or even as a white woman back then.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/09

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I don't blame Mart for her concerns with Mr. Brambles departure. Who knows what news he will bring with him when he returns.

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Date: 11/07/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Little William is so cute and I love how he calls her Princess Mary. He is not going to like Fitzwilliam coming along and stealing his girl!

The flashback was such a heartbreaker. I could see her with her little bag trying to travel with her papa. 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/09