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It didn’t happen all at once. There were sounds and light—voices and then nothing.



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1079
Read Count: 3496
Published: 16/10/08
Updated: 16/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: What She Didn't Say

Awww, that was really nice.  Reading that really made me wonder how Van would be affected if she woke up from her coma (I only say "if" cause ABC acts like they refuse to get her back but will get all these boring 80's returns no one gives a sh*t about zzzz) I would love to see her re-connect with everyone (well, except Cris *gag snore*) and to definately see her and Todd re-connect cause he has been completely f*cked in the head since Van got shipped off the show.  I also loved the simple, "stay," and "ok."  Sweet, I miss Tangeline.

Author's Response: Hey bsbgirl. Thanks for reading this little drabble.  Yeah, it would be nice if the show had the presence of mind to write something like this, but we both know that would never happen.  Thanks so much for the review. As always, it's really appreciated.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 16/10/08

Rated: 17 and older
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One Life to Live 

 

Evangeline Williamson is a brilliant attorney with a pragmatic approach to life and who always tried to do the right thing when it came to her clients and her job.  But it all come crashing down after her most notorious client, Todd Manning, is found guilty and later exonerated of a crime he didn’t commit. Her career and reputation gasping at death’s door, Evangeline accepts Todd’s offer to become chief counsel for Buchanan Enterprises, a company he’s recently acquired through a hostile takeover.  

The pay is substantial and the perks keep coming.  But there’s no client more demanding than Todd Manning and two years later Evangeline has had enough of living his chaotic life instead of her own. She tells him as much and gives him two weeks notice to find a replacement, forcing Todd to realize just how desperate he is to keep her in his life—not only as his attorney but as the woman who’s stolen his heart.



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Categories: Daytime Television, Movies, All My Children, One Life to Live, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Kerri Reynolds, Lily Winters
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15412
Read Count: 15939
Published: 23/12/08
Updated: 14/05/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast and the Music

Yay, it's finally up. Great beginning, I loved it.  I thought it was hilarious Van was trying to have sex with Ryan *gags* and Todd kept interrupting by calling her phone to ask about cheese logs lol I can't wait to see how Todd gets Van back.  I liked the flashback and loved Todd and Eva's banter.  I definately can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Hey bsbgirl. So glad you liked it.  Update coming soon.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 23/12/08

Title: Chapter 3: Two

Ha, I loved how pissed off Todd was about Van quitting.  Throwing a cart at someone's car and the way he was driving.  Not a shock he came and almost broke Van's door down.  They are both in denial about their feelings, I can't wait till all that pent up passion explodes.  I also like Kerri.  I wonder what Todd has up his sleeve?  I also liked the titles of the sections contridicting what Todd and Van said lol.  Please don't take long with the next update, you leave me wanting more.

Author's Response: Hey bsbgirl. Yes, Todd was a bit pissed at Evagneline.  And they are in a bit of denial.  Glad you're liking Kerri :)  Thans for reading and will try to update soon.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 11/01/09

Title: Chapter 4: Three

That was a nice update.  I like that David could easily see Van loves Todd, and Kerri and David's banter was nice too.  Everything Todd did for Van's birthday was so sweet.  Lastly, I love the animosity between Eva and Lily and the fact Todd hired Lily cause he knew Van hated her lol.  I can't wait till the next chapter to see Van fuming about Lily working with Todd, so juicy.

Author's Response: Thanks bsbgirl.  So glad you like it and will update soon :)

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 23/01/09

Title: Chapter 5: Four

OMG, that chapter was great.  I love David calling out Todd's feelings for Eva like he did with Eva.  Also, the part where Todd was going crazy thinking he lost Van then told her to promise to never leave him, just awwww.  How sweet and cute.  Also, the scene at Ultraviolet was hilarious, I love jealous, territorial Todd lol.  I also loved the kiss but wish it was longer but Todd is screwing with Van.  I can't wait to see how Van will get Todd back and f*ck with him now.  More jealous Todd, I can't wait.  What a fun story lol.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 05/02/09

Title: Chapter 6: Five

That was a hilarious, great chapter.  I love how Eva got Todd back by wearing something hot that got him excited.  Mission Boner, lol!!!  I also like that he was jealous of Kevin and Eva and thought she would go to Texas.  I really liked the last part, it was so sweet how Todd stopped playing games, pulled her to the side, told her he is sorry, and kissed her.  Awwww, so cute and sweet.  I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 27/02/09

Title: Chapter 7: Six

That was a great update.  I loved Todd and Van's phone conversations with David, Neil, and Kerri.  Todd and Evangeline were hot as hell, I loved when Van stepped back he stepped forward, then Todd touching her before she kissed him.  The sex scene was hot too, I just wish it was a little longer lol.  One more chapter? *cries* I hope another Tangie story is in the works or how about the Jack and Lily story?  I miss the "Kiss" series badly.  Great update.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 21/03/09

Title: Chapter 8: Oh Wait! What Came After the Sexing.

That was a nice ending.  I loved Todd and Eva in the shower, that was hot.  I also loved the end, the way Todd proposed was funny and sweet at the same time.  I hope you write another story with Todd and Evangeline, or maybe a Jack and Lily story? lol I liked this story, it was very funny.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 14/05/09

Rated: 17 and older
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One Life to Live

She’s gentle as she guides his hands to the headboard.

My response to the My Number One Challenge



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: My Number One
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1639
Read Count: 2236
Published: 02/06/09
Updated: 02/06/09


Title: Chapter 1: For Her

OMFG!  Holy sh*t!  lol!  That was great and one of the hottest Tangie smut stories I have ever read.  Evangeline was like a dominatrix in that with Todd at her mercy.  I also can't believe Nora was there while they did all that, lol!  Great one-shot.



Author's Response:

Hey bsb. I'm glad you liked it, I had fun writing it!

Nora wasn't in the room with Todd/Van while they were having sex though. It wasn't stated which was first and which was after, but they were different scenes. 

Again, thank you for reading it. I'll try to do more smut fics in the future ;)

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 02/06/09

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A brief look into where I might be going with my next Tangie story...I hope you guys like it! 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1744
Read Count: 949
Published: 08/06/09
Updated: 08/06/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay, a new Tangie story!  That was a good update, I loved the sexual tension between Todd and Evangeline, it was very hot.  I see alot of pent up passion coming in this story.  I also like that RJ is involved as well.  I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm thinking back on some of their scenes and I can still imagine the sexual tension between them. Those two had mad, mad, chemistry that daytime soaps only get once in a blue moon. Too bad TIIC blew their opportunity because of the HATAHS! I hope there will always be authors writing about them to the last drop! Thanks for the review bsb!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 08/06/09

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Evangeline is a woman uncertain of her future plans and her fledgling relationship with RJ is not going as expected. On the other hand Todd wants to break free from his destructive relationship with Blair. “Destined to be together” These two own this phrase but there are always obstacles to overcome before this becomes a reality.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Cannon, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 60419
Read Count: 13489
Published: 15/06/09
Updated: 07/10/09


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I can't believe Lisa sent Layla there to break up Todd and Van, are you serious?  She is acting like a five year old in this story, ridiculous.  I hope after what Layla told her she stops this noncense but I'm not holding my breath.  I'm glad Van told Todd to get full custody of Starr cause that looney bitch Blair definately shouldn't be raising her, and I'm also glad she wants both Todd and Starr to live with her in New York.  Oh man, that part where Todd had RJ caught and then Van scared the piss out of him (literally lol) by shooting at him then he passed out was so funny and cool.  He deserved that after he got physical with Van in the last update, haha.  Todd and Van make a great team.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

In the beginning it wasnt the case but she thought that one up when she was leaving Llanview since her motherly tactics didn't work. Of course Layla accepted it, giving her a chance at her dreams of going to Cali. You can't believe the amount of times I changed the ending but I'm glad you liked it!

Todd and Evangeline always make a great team in my book. Thanks for reading and leaving your reviews!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 14/09/09

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was great.  I can't wait till Todd gets his hands on Evangeline, he wants her bad.  Thanks for the shower scene, Todd masturbating in the shower?  Yummy, after Reese, you are the second to give me that hot goodness lol.  I can't wait to see what else happens.



Author's Response:

Hey bsbgirl

At this point I believe Evangeline will swat it away and slap him...LOL!!! Yeah I adore Reese's writing so I'm glad you are placing me at second but I know Black is way ahead of me but thanks for the flattery and the review...LOL!!!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 15/06/09

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love Todd in this story, he is sexy.  He wants Evangeline bad and he won't stop until he gets her.  I can't wait for that and get her away from RJ, ack lol.

Author's Response:

Hey B,

Could you imagine how many ways these two could have been written if TIIC would have allowed this relationship between them to flourish and when REG got pregnant WOW! Damn Idiots! Back to the fic. Yeah Todd is sexy and it takes a strong, beautiful woman like our Evangeline to tame him a bit...LOL!!!Thanks for the review!

 

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 22/06/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, what an update.  I was very suprised Todd and Evangeline had sex after RJ was stabbed and in the hospital.  I thought Todd would reject her since she was vulnerable and hurt but I'm not complaining, that scene was raw and hot.  I can't wait to see what happens with them after that and what RJ will think, uh oh lol.

Author's Response:

Hey bsbgirl...Thanks for the review!

I debated that issue but I didn't see Todd as the "normal guy" He has been known to do things that make us go hmmm...Besides Evangeline was being pretty presistent in her quest to get him to do what she wanted...LOL!!! RJ is as cocky as Todd so we'll see how these two work things out..LOL!!! 

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 30/06/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That was great.  I love that Evangeline couldn't get Todd (and his junk lol) out of her mind.  I also liked that Todd gave her that gift, it was sweet of him.  I liked what Todd was saying about chocolate ice cream with chocolate syrup and sprinkles (it's obvious what he was talking about lol naughty) RJ is a prick flirting with the nurse right in Van's face then giving her the hint to leave.  So Van shouldn't feel THAT BAD for sleeping with Todd the other night, I wouldn't be suprised if RJ is sleeping or starts sleeping with that nurse.  As for Blair, her old ass needs to get a life.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

Like I told Megumi certain beliefs have a way of being blown away. Mr. Charming strikes again. He can do a lot of crap to people but Evangeline does something to him. Well RJ will argue and say that he didn't lay a finger on that nurse (we wouldn't believe) whilst Evangeline lcheated on him with one of his adversaries. For now Blair is a necessary thorn in Todd's side...LOL. Thanks for the review!  

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 07/07/09

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great update.  Blair is such a bitch to her own daughter.  "I told you to stay in the car?"  Dumb ho.  I liked the scene with Todd and Evangeline during their date, but RJ had to come in and ruin everything.  Todd kicked his ass good though, don't start what you can't finish dumbass lol.  I don't think this will keep Todd and Van apart that long though.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

Starr looks exactly like her father and so it stresses Blair out that Todd is blocking any reconcilation. Todd and Evangeline had some of the best moments in daytime history and enjoy when they get together and talk even if he's getting to her....deep down she enjoys the banter...LOL!!! RJ would argue that he wasn't a 100% or it would have been so on...LOL!!! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 14/07/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That update was great.  I'm glad Van dumped RJ, he was being such a prick and I love that she kicked his ass when he showed up trying to get back with her.  I love Todd and Van's bickering, their so cute and silly.  I also loved their little food fight and Todd taking her to a museum.  I thought it was sweet Todd asked Van if he could kiss her (that is so hot) and their lovemaking in the car was hot too.  I hope Van gives Todd a chance but she will probably give in once he takes her to his apartment lol.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

Believe me I didn't really want to write RJ as a prick but it just turned out that way...LOL!! I found that whoever wrote that on OLTL for them to be great because it added to the great chemistry they had with each other. Todd is determined and so is Evangeline so we'll see...LOL!! As always thanks for reading and adding your prospective!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 21/07/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That update was great.  I loved their tub scene, that was hot.  My favorite part was Todd convincing Eva they should have a real relationship, his words to her were so sweet and genuine and I'm glad he convinced her to go for it.  Blair is pathetic and needs to get the hell over it.

Author's Response:

Hey bsbgirl,

Todd's voice mixed with words and that sexy body makes any woman melt including a stubborn woman like Evangeline. This is the reason Blair can't get over it ;) When she's not getting that hotness she misses it a great deal. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 27/07/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Todd and Eva were so cute in that chapter.  I love the way Evangeline handled Blair, she put her old, raggedy, senile ass in check and Blair couldn't handle it.  She is so pathetic.  Blair better not be pregnant but I don't think she is and if she is, I bet it's not Todd's.  She has been very jealous of Todd and Van, probably had sex with another guy, got pregnant, and is now trying to pass it off as Todd's, WTFever.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

I wonder if the OLTL Todd looks back on the way the writers have written his relationship with Blair. He'll probably be nauseated. When I look at those old T&E youtube vids you can see how TSJ was expanding his acting prowess. The interaction between the two was so refreshing and natural and showed their comfort level.

Blair is crazy obsessive with Todd. Vange has an idea of what she does to keep Todd circulating in her orbit. She'll use anything or anyone. She cant see that this is driving him further away because she has gotten away with it in the past. Like I said Evangeline is a huge threat to that assumption. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 04/08/09

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That update was so good and my favorite so far.  I love Starr in this story, she is so cute.  I love the way she is with Todd and Van.  I also like that they wanted Van to go to that house with them for the weekend.  My favorite part of the chapter was Todd and Van saying they love each other *swoon* I especially liked their dialogue in that scene leading up to the ILY, the way Todd said "say it" was so sweet and hot then Van saying it slowly, I loved it.  I also liked their love scene, that was hot as hell too.  Lastly, I love how they handled their exes in this chapter.  Todd got Blair's crazy ass arrested and Van told RJ's stalker ass off, haha!  I just hope Blair isn't pregnant, loved this update alot.

Author's Response:

Hey bsbgirl,

Readers deserve one of those great chapters. I'm so happy that it was your favorite. Todd certainly swept Evangeline off her feet and she couldn't hold back on her feelings. Little Starr loves her daddy and as been around her mother's moody behavior so if daddy says its over then its over. What can I say about RJ and Blair...left behind ish that couples have to deal with from time to time...LOL! Always thanks for reading and posting a comment.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 12/08/09

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Blair is a pathetic wackjob.  Lisa and Nora need to mind their own damn buisness, Van is an adult and can do what she wants.  I can't believe RJ was hitting on Layla, I hope Layla doesn't fall for or give into his BS but she probably will, apparently Layla's ungrateful and unloyal ass likes getting a piece of Van's ex boyfriends.  I really love Starr in this story (nowadays, I can only enjoy and like Todd and Starr in fanfiction otherwise, both can go to hell for all I care) White stallion and white chocolate LMAO, their so silly.  Todd and Van are so happy and so in love, it's great to see.  I was also glad Todd was honest with Van about his past and that Van didn't abondon him.  Even though many are trying to tear them apart, I'm sure no one will succeed.  Their love is strong.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

You know in the past before I would step out of the house my mom would tell me everything that could go wrong if I didn't take something along with me...lol! Hard for Lisa to realize her baby is growing up. Layla doesn't know about RJ. Vange didn't want to mention that she had a boyfriend in Llanview bc she knew that Layla would probably spill to Lisa although Nora beat her to it.

When you have that first feeling of true love...nothing else matters but the two of you. Thanks for posting your reviews!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 18/08/09

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Lisa is such a bitch in this story, what is her problem?  I can't believe she slapped Van and made her choose between her and Todd.  WTF?  She needs to calm the f*ck down.  I'm glad Todd stood up for Evangeline, Lisa was acting childish and again, Van is grown and can do whatever she pleases.  I loved Todd and Van in this update though, the massage part was hot and Todd giving Van a necklace was so sweet.  I still hope Blair isn't pregnant.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

Like I told Megumi in some ways I can defend Lisa's actions (although way over the top) She didnt expect her clean cut daughter to come to Llanview and get involved with a reformed criminal like Todd. She has used her will to control her daughters over the years - the influence has wained on Layla but she still thought Evangeline could be controlled. Todd hopes Blair isn't pregnant too..lol! Thanks for sharing your views.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 25/08/09

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow!  What a chapter, that was great.  I love that Todd proposed to Van, it was so heartfelt and pure, and the ring sounded so pretty.  I wish I could see a picture or something lol.  Blair is F*CKING CRAZY, god damn.  I didn't think she would take it that far, to pull a gun on Todd, shoot at him, then put the gun on herself.  Who knows what she would of done, and I'm glad Van knocked that crazy bitch out with a vase.  I'm so glad Todd went over there and got Starr cause who knows what Blair would of done to her as well.  I guess Blair is going to the nuthouse and Todd and Van will get custody of Starr.  I'll miss the story when it's gone but I loved it.  I can't wait for the finale chapter.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

I wish I could have too but I didnt have the time to photoshop everything together and give you guys a great pic...work...work...work...arghhh! Obsessed Blair can take it that far when she feels like her world is falling apart...if Evangeline wasn't involved with Todd maybe a different story. It was great writing it and enjoyed giving you guys a good Tangie story...Thanks always for giving your opinion.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 02/10/09

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm sick of the haters, they need to f*ck off and mind their own buisness.  Todd and Van are grown people and can do what they want but whatever, their bitchiness won't stop Todd and Van from being together.  I loved Todd's talk with Van and Jessica.  I'm glad Jessica supports him being with Van just like Starr does.  I also like scenes between Todd and RJ, I also like the animosity between Todd and Layla lol Even though Layla acts irratated with Todd and might go after RJ, I hope she doesn't get any ideas about Todd (like trying to seduce him, she is obviously jealous of their relationship IMO) nice update.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

They will have a lot of haters especially bc of Todd's reputation. Todd has three women backing his decision which is fine by him. I think he values Vange's opinion the most. As far as Todd and Layla goes you need to stay tuned..;) Thanks for giving your views!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 01/09/09

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That update was great.  I'm so glad Blair isn't pregnant, and that crazy slut needs help.  Pretending she is pregnant, bitch please.  I loved the confrontation between Todd, Van, RJ, and Layla.  I like that Todd beat him up and Van jumped on his back after he attacked Todd lol as well as Layla getting some hits in as well but RJ is nuts, he hurt Van hitting her against the wall, what an assh*le!  I hope Todd gets him back good.  As for Layla asking Todd those stupid questions, back off.  She better not be thinking of seducing or getting inbetween Todd and Van, and after that fight too?  Immature little bitch, ugh.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

Yeah Blair needs help even if she doesn't realize it as yet. Todd's involvement with Evangeline has really messed her mind up and again Starr is stuck in the middle. Todd drives some people to do some crazy things but he sure didn't expect to see Todd there. Layla attempted to make a really bad incident work out her way. you'll know what I'm talking about in the next update. As always thanks for posting a review!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 07/09/09