Penname: Cherry [Contact]

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Member Since: 04/11/09

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Im a ACCLAIMED READER NOT A WRITER.




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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419720
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10


Title: Chapter 31: By The Time You Come Round to Me

As always thanks for a great chapter.

Sergei seems to not understand that no matter what he does Sunny don't want him like that.  He better hope that Nikki do not find out he back to stalking her again.  Hiss brother let it slip that more than one person is following her. 

I like the way that Nikki andSunny is funding they way.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/10

Title: Chapter 39: Or We Might Take it Differently

Great update..

Sunny-  I think she has a little incite from Stan about Nikki and even though Sergei try to tear them apart I think he made them stronger in a sense.  Sunny is very jealous of her Nikki the girl almost bite the heck out of the man jaw lol...

 

Nikki-He loves Sunny so much.. I don't think that he knows what Stan is willing to do for him and Sunny.  It seems Stan wants to get him out of the business.  

 

Sergei better hope that he live to tell a tale not.  

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Date: 06/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Carmen Santos is the only girl that will lay an eye on Jesse Carreon. They've been friends since Jesse moved there when he was seven years old. Jesse soon realizes that he is falling in love with Carmen, he doesn't want to. Carmen is goregous in his eyes but it's his bestfriend. He worries that he'll ruin yet another relationship in his life.

Fredrick Carreon is Jesse's older brother and being the popular guy at Forrest High School in Jacksonville, Florida. He gets what he wants and when he wants. His best friend Rochelle is the same way. He knows that she likes him but he only uses her for the goods that she dishes out.

When these four teens come to their epiphanies things between them will never be the same.



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Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2723
Read Count: 1394
Published: 30/12/09
Updated: 15/01/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Drama King

I like the characters Carmen and Jesse.  Can you please space the paragraph it would make it a little better to read. 

Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/12/09

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

A father's promise. A father's love. Chance made you my daughter; love made you my bestfriend!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: The "Picture Perfect" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3406
Read Count: 6007
Published: 07/01/10
Updated: 07/01/10


Title: Chapter 2: I Kept My Promise

That was a great one shot.  Very touching and teary eye for me.

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Date: 07/01/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Ethan “Dax” Daxton and his wife Dr. Zaire “Zhay” Daniels have drifted apart due to tragic circumstances. Dax awakes from a coma and has a case of amnesia not remembering his wife or current life. But, the minute he looks into Zhay’s eyes he falls in love all over again. The love that Dax and Zhay once shared was honest and sweet, but of late, it proved not enough to cure the hurts of the past, that they need in an effort to move forward.  Both must learn to forgive and love each other again, and that life is to short and precious not to include those whom you hold dear.


They are given a second chance to rediscover their love and what they do with it is completely up to them.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 47806
Read Count: 58026
Published: 19/02/10
Updated: 13/01/11


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Thanks for coming out, man....

I am glad that you updated.  I really enjoyed the chapter it is starting to answer some questions from the start of the story.  Update again soon.

Author's Response: I will; chapter 7 is up and I am working on the next 2 - enjoy and thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/04/10

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Loved the update. I am glad that they are talking.  This is the opening that both of them need.  After all the heartache that happen in their lives and think this is good for them to start over and build something new. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! And I agree, this is the fresh start that they both needed.

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Date: 14/01/11

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Does it say, I miss you lover...

I know youre going somewhere  thanks for the back story it is definitely needed.  Great update

Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Working on the next chapter.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/04/10

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - How do you know when you’re in love?

First I must say welcome back.  This chapter filled in a lot of blanks for so many of the charcaters and I am over joyed Ethan open his eyes.  Now the thing is what did he hear and what would happen when he wake up.  Would it be present day or would he be stuck in before the tradegy.  I vote for present day with love in his heart to give and forgive.

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Date: 28/10/10

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Not today

This was a great update.. Wow Dax was a all time Dummy.  He really hurt his wife.  Eventhough from the conversation with Rosie something else happen that made him really angry.  His behavior reminds me of the original Todd who plays the character Paul on ATWT. 

 

I am patiently awaiting next update.  



Author's Response: I appreciate the support. Yes, Dax has been a complete ass this year; but he loves his wife and wants to make everything right again. Working on the next chapter. Thanks for reading.

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Date: 23/02/10

Title: Chapter 1: 1-The Intro

Hey Kelly this was a great start and I am looking forward to see how this advance.  Please update soon.  The flow of the story is very good and I am very interested in Zhay and Dax story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I am working to bring you more of their story.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/02/10

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - I have nothing left to give

wow what a update..

Now we know some of what happened between Dax and Zhay relationship to cause a rift..   That was so sad them loosing they kids in one day.  That was a very painful experience that what send her over the edge and the guilt.. it can set a person crazy



Author's Response: yes...their grief had done more than test theur relationship. But has it pushed it beyond repair? stay tuned to find out. thank you for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/06/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Thank's Mom

Dax really hurt Zhay really badly no wonder she did not want to go to dinner with him.  What could she had done that made him so angry.  Off to read the next chapter.  BTW great chapter and story.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Dax did hurt her but in love there is always some degree of pain. Not excusing his behaviour but we'll learn why he has been behaving so badly. Stay tuned.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/02/10

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - I get it, you love her

Wow alot of secrets coming out of the closet.  I see how Rosie is so important to Dax he wa to Barron to.  I am starting to think that Zhay even had an Abortion, miscarriage and he did not know or had an affair with her Dr. Friend that is in Haiti.  But what ever it is I am still waiting to find out. 

 

Dax and the 12 pills a little scarry but also I feel that they love each other so much and do Fierce that something is worth saving.  Can't wait for the update.



Author's Response: Oh yes, bit by bit, hints here and there; the secrets are coming out. Thanks for reading. Rosie is very important to both of them. I promise to end the suspense really soon.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/02/10

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Happy Thanksgiving this was a great update.  Gave so much insight to mom and dad relationship.  Now with Ethan awake and no memory I know that gotta hurt Zhay.  Now I guess it give her time to start and rebuild they relationship but when the truth comes out.  oh boy.

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Date: 25/11/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 113]
Summary:

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Jonathan Denson isn't what you'd call the life of the party but when he enters a room, he commands attention. The only problem is, the attention he craves isn't the attention he's getting. It's just too bad that the only person he ever truly wanted isn't ready for what he has to offer. Left with no other option, John decides that he's sick of leaving romance up to fate and takes his love life into his own hands.

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended    

Huge shout out to KKMonroe, formerly CPM09, for my title. This story would have been called something I wasn't completely satisfied with if not for her genius. Thank you, lovely lady :)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 12160
Read Count: 25909
Published: 03/05/10
Updated: 22/12/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast of Nice Guys Always Win

I am glad that John got his own story.  Loved the pic of John he is cute.  I hope that Rochelle do get a clue if not my boy deserve someone who is going to love him. 

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/05/10

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

well worth the wait...

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Date: 20/06/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I am glad that Kameron told Rochelle off she needed to knock down a peg.  I like what happening between J and K they have chemistry and they should go with it.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/12/10

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

After reading this chapter I am sorry but rochelle is playing games.  I don't think she even feeling John like that I think she is doing it because she must alway be best at doing everything and I think that is her motive here.  I dont think she want John just the fact that Kalessa shows an interest she all of a sudden here she come.  That just selfish.  Sorry for rambling.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/12/10

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

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It's for better...and for worse.

For the "Less Is More" Challenge 

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.

Shout out to my girl, KKMonroe. She encouraged me to share this with the world. She thinks I teach her, but really she teaches me I have much more to learn :) 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 94
Read Count: 3084
Published: 05/07/10
Updated: 05/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Papers

I must say that Less is more.  I read the author note first and then slide my cursor down and I saw what you meant by it is hard to write under 100 words. 

 

Good One Shot.   LOL



Author's Response: Girl, yes! It is sooooo hard! You'd think that because it's so extremely short that it wouldn't be that difficult to get a point across but then you have to think about who these two people are, and what has brought them to the point they are. Now that I've done it, I think it'll be a little easier because I have so many great critiques to work from :) Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

It's Jack's Birthday and Jill wants to celebrate. . .

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.   

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Drabbles , General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: Movie Night
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 862
Read Count: 1461
Published: 07/07/10
Updated: 07/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Hungry?

Very interesting glad for the visuals. lol Im convince for now less is more

Author's Response:

Yeah.  I didn't realize how fun challanges are.  I enjoyed seeing if I would keep it under 1000 words. It was so hard lol.

Thank you for the review!  I really appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/10

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Noelle and Trey are two individuals looking for the same thing, in Washington D.C.'s highly competitive social scene, where power and money are king. Though they are both from different worlds they both want... An Unconditional Love.

    

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I would like to send a big shout out to JUNEBUG66 for all of her help getting this story off the ground. She was a literal Slave Driver. But because of her drive and commitment, I finally got the beginning parts off the ground. So THANK YOU,  Sister girl. For helping a newbie like me :0). Hope to do us proud.

Disclaimer:  All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9393
Read Count: 23583
Published: 14/07/10
Updated: 14/11/11


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I much say this was very good.  I like how you introduce the charcaters. 

Noelle stood there in a daze with her mouth agape she had not seen such prime beef cake in a long,long time.

This line was so funny I did a double take.  Can't wait for next chapter

 



Author's Response:

I have encountered a few pictures were I HAD TO pick up my mouth from the floor. I thought it was a good response for such a SHOCKING moment!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/07/10

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great update can't wait for the meet and greet

Author's Response: I really can't wait either. Thank You.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

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 People say that you’ll love only once in your life but that’s not true. Soul mates do not exist, true love doesn’t exist, I’m not even sure that love exists anymore. All I know is that love has hurt me. It has slapped me in my face, push me down a flight of stairs and worst of all, love has broken my heart.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 13035
Read Count: 2864
Published: 22/07/10
Updated: 24/07/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That police officer act like she messing with Kevin.  I like the subtle chemistry between kyle and Tonya.  Keep them chappters coming

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/07/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great update.  I am glad that one of the twins gave him a chance but they long road ahead.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/07/10

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow very exposive chapter.  I don't know how it feels to be in an abusive relationship but I know it shakes you to the core and cause you to make choices that are not valid.  Grayson is mad and fuming but he shouldnt take her kids.   Yes Kevin could have harm the children more but Thank God she survive and know she needs to change and move on with her life in a different manner.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/07/10