Penname: Penny [Contact]

Real name: Jenny

Member Since: 23/01/10

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Into The West by brookmeade
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 127]
Summary:

Into The West banner

"This time and place, as I look upon your face..remember as long as you live,

                                                       it was my love  to give"   

                     -except from It Was My Love to Give by Barbara LaBarbera

       ~//~

Sally Parker had heard talk of Indian or "Injun" attacks out West, but that was just talk from around town. Right? Wrong.

Sally embarks on an enthralling, and often dangerous journey when she is kidnaped and taken into the Comanche Tribe. However, the journey isn’t easy, between battles with the increasingly, dedicated, hard-nosed, "war chief," Nakotah Quanah, and trying to fit into a strange society which she feels she doesn’t belong.

Just when things begin to look up, what happens when an enraged mistress wants her servant back and will go through all costs to get her back? Will this kick-off the beginning of many battles for the Comanche with the Texan government or can Sally defuse the situation in time?

Either way Sally is going to have make a life-altering decision that will not only affect her, but maybe for the ‘ayashe’ as well.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8442
Read Count: 6595
Published: 23/10/09
Updated: 29/05/10

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love wild west stories since I was a kid so I was really happy to see this.  I was even more happy when I read the first 3 chapters and hope that you continue updating. 

Can't wait!!!!

 Reviewer: Penny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/01/10
Golden Bells and Serpent Gods by Candace
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

On an away mission to map a deposit of dilithium crystals, the crew is taken captive by a super powered being identifying himself as an ancient aztec deity. When Uhura is mistaken for his reincarnated consort, Uhura must take drastic steps to save the lives of her fellow crewmen that could forever alter her relationship with her commanding officer Spock. Sequel to The First Taste.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Constellations
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11619
Read Count: 28569
Published: 23/11/09
Updated: 30/01/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Golden Bells and Serpent Gods Part 1 of 3

Love this pairing so much!  So when I saw this story I couldn't wait to read it.  You wrote a well balanced story just like an episode in Star Trek - well done!

I hope you will be writing more.   Thank you.



Author's Response: Thanks! I am already imagining a mission based sequel but that won't be ready for posting for a while. I have too many other stories to finish :-)

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Date: 30/01/10
Beast by Onimosity
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419715
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Who they are

Hi, I've been enthralled by this story from the begining, so much so, I had to register to write a review, something I rarely do!  I love the way you've written and described the characters, I feel as if I've known them for ages!  Sunny is lovely a real sweetheart whose faith in people is to be admired.   I do have an issue with her which all other reviewers do not.  I can't believe she is that 'innocent' not to know what Nikki's business is.  She's witness firsthand her father's beating, the garderner not to mention all the 'darkness' in his eyes regarding any mention of men=Sergei & her ex boyfriend! I don't think I could forget that in a hurry.  Plus the money she receives/gifts are bought with the profit from his shady business, morally I feel this is wrong. Sorry I had to get this off my chest!!!    

Yes Nikki is absolutely sexy and loves her but I agree with 'Intospection' review (23/1) he has to 'explain his dangerous world' to her if he's so intent on being honest so she can make up her mind with all the facts.  Will he get out of the business for her? Start a normal life?  Can't see it happening. Will she continue to ignore what he does when he's not with her?  Can love really conquer all?  I would love to see this discussed between them bc if she returns to him it's not just her life but her brothers life and safety to take into account.

I  think Sunny was vunerable from the start and now she is 'free' should continue to explore her new found independence alot more.

 Reviewer: Penny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/01/10
Title: Chapter 27: Today Is a New Day

Hi, I've been enthralled by this story from the begining, so much so, I had to register to write a review, something I rarely do!  I love the way you've written and described the characters, I feel as if I've known them for ages! 

 Sunny is lovely a real sweetheart whose faith in people is to be admired.   I do have an issue with her which many reviewers do not.  I can't believe she is that 'innocent' not to know what Nikki's business is.  She's witness firsthand her father's beating, the garderner not to mention all the 'darkness' in his eyes regarding any mention of men=Sergei & her ex boyfriend! I don't think I could forget that in a hurry.  Plus the money she receives/gifts are bought with the profit from his shady business, morally I feel this is wrong. Sorry I had to get this off my chest!!!    

Yes Nikki is absolutely sexy and loves her and she him but I agree with 'Intospection' review (23/1) he has to 'explain his dangerous world' to her if he's so intent on being honest so she can make up her mind with all the facts.  Will he get out of the business for her? Start a normal life?  Can't see it happening. Will she continue to ignore what he does when he's not with her?  Can love really conquer all?  I would love to see this discussed between them bc if she returns to him it's not just her life but her brothers life and safety to take into account.  

I  think Sunny was vunerable from the start and now she is 'free' should continue to explore her new found independence alot more. 

I am hoping they can work things out and have a happy ending but they both have a long way to go.  

Looking forward to reading more of your work when this story is complete. Great work!!

 

 Reviewer: Penny Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24/01/10
Title: Chapter 29: I'll Be High Flyin'

Hi Ominosity, sorry you & your muse aren't well, here's to a speedy recovery.

 Well what can I  say about this chapter...it's so heart  breaking and sweet! When I read the back story of Nikki's time in prison and learning what he did to survive I felt so sorry for him.  It made me realise just how hard/tough he HAD to be.  It also made me realise that he was crying out for a 'father figure' and Stanislavsky filled that void. I have to admit to thinking of him as just another thug and nothing else but now......

Gosh, when spoke of his sorrow of the 'sins' he can never atone for my heart flipped! I'm glad he's admitting this but he still has much to say, however, Sunny must know of what he's talking about.  I can't understand why she wants to hear him actually voice the dirty deeds he's committed. It's not going to be pretty.

I loved the reunion in her flat, it was on the cards just a case of when in my mind.  You write so effortlessly and with such detailed emotion - I'm sooo envious of your talent, in a good way! 

So they are kinda back together. Sunny loving her independence and Nikki learning 'normal' behaviour LOL!  Good luck with that!

I'm curious as to how you are going to make things right between them so that Sunny's in a place where she can say the 3 magic words Nikki's desparate to hear.  Oh I nearly forgot, great touch mentioning Nikki's thick accent when he's talking from the heart. I know he's baring his soul.

So onto the next chapter, can't wait for Sergei's reaction when he finds out about the date. He's going to be livid I bet!! Then the 's**t' will hit the fan!

So take care of yourself and get well soon.

 

 Reviewer: Penny Signed
Date: 29/01/10
Title: Chapter 30: By The Time You Make Up Your Mind

Glad to hear you and your muse are feeling better.  I wasn't expecting a post for a while so I just wanted to let you know how much I (and your many fans) appreciate it the effort it must have taken.

This chapter had me reeling with all the love.  I am now a huge Nikki fan, love the guy he is 'sweet' indeed.  I practicallly drooled reading the breakfast scene and the conversation as they were having a stroll.  You know how to write girl!  While reading I could feel the tension when Nikki asked him about Boris and his relief as she accepted it.  I know that more has to come about his work and the big question is what are they going to do about it but right now I am enjoying reading S & N dating and really getting to know each other.  I'm not sure how you are going to keep them together, if that's the plan, or if this wonderful story is going to have a sad ending, either way you are an brilliant writer!!!! 

Much love.

 Reviewer: Penny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/02/10