I am a 25 year Texan that currently resides in California. I have been married for two years and I am currently emloyed as a teacher. I find myself pron to being lazy, but I always have the intention to finish what I start.
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For once it is Jack Sparrow who wakes up in bed alone...and he finds he does not like it one bit.
Great story! I love when people take small scenes that could mean nothing to the majority, but then they turn it into something amazing. You have done this with an amazing story that stays true to the series. Bravo!
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After the hostile takeover of the world by fairytale (and nightmare?) creatures, Roxanne doesn't have much of a choice but to go with the flow. She does have one major problem, though. There's this guy, see...And he thinks that she is destined to be his mate. What's the problem, you ask? Well, for one thing, he can't touch her without doing her bodily harm...
This chapter was my favorite. I really enjoyed the detail and the dialog. The main character Roxanne does seem a bit conflicting as far as her personality goes. At first she seemed smartly obedient, but weary and now she goes back and forth between rebellious and submissiveness. Also maybe its just me, but the vamp is not likable. Are they sharing her? Its weird and their seems to be many loose ends that have me wondering.
Reviewer: Fatal Mars SignedHum it was a little weird that she was suddenly so into mod. Her emotions seem to shift with every chapter. It is a bit hard to grasp her character.
Reviewer: Fatal Mars SignedI don't like her master. I hope she goes with Mod or I might be sad. I usually don't read story's that include forms of abuse or domination,because it bothers me, but I will continue to give this one a shot.
Reviewer: Fatal Mars SignedShe was a normal sixteen girl, with an excessive amount of problems. She practically supported her mother and herself, while her mother was either passed out on the floor or out working on getting her fix. Her life was changed, when her mother's debt caught up to her. Instead of being beaten to death, her mother offered up her most precious item, her virgin daughter. She was sold into human trafficking. While her journey is better than most, it's still a tough one. Sometimes, things happen for a reason. You must endure the darkest of hours before you can see the sunshine.
A/N : I will work on getting a beta and finishing this story in a way where I can be proud of it. Be patient! :D
I must admit that this is one of the few stories I have read that actual seems original. I am interested in seeing what you have in store for the next chapter. I do have one request. I am not a fan of the banners with celes that everyone here seem to be so found of, but I do appreciate character descriptions. If you can add one that would be great so I can use my own imagination!
Author's Response: you're right... i should get to working on that! thanks.
Christie deals with the rumors circulating about her.
Hum I am a devout Jin/Xing fan, but this was interesting. I always wondered if Christie was 'asking' for it by having the skaniest wardrobe in Tekken history!
Reviewer: Fatal Mars SignedWow that was something else! I am not big on the vampire shows, but I got into the story. He seems like a self absorbed bastard, but aren't they all? I enjoyed her resisting him the most. Her inner conflict was admirable and made you understand why she gave in. Well not really giving in, but just accepting things for what they were. Great job.
Author's Response: YAY! I'm glad you liked it, especially since you're not a fan of the show! I love their banter, it's so funny. Thank you for reading!! :)
A New full story by Thespiandiva
Valerie Valone is a stubborn girl about town who has been celibate for two years. when a friend suggests a very popular... ahem escort agency, valerie is aprehensive. but when she does call, she is pulled into an addiction that is bigger than she ever would imagine.
I thought this was off to a great start. I am interested in learning more about Valarie since she comes off a bit vapid and insecure. I di d have a couple of laugh momemnts which were definitly good. I am interesed in seeing where this could go and I like not knowing fo rnow.
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