Penname: JoiousMaye [Contact]

Real name: Joi

Member Since: December 11 2010

Membership status: Member

Bio: Just an eager reader. Thought it was high time I become a member, but I'm not a writer. 


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Like A Bee To Honey:The Immortals by Junebug66
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Summary:

 

 

Like A Bee To Honey

 

Ares, The Greek God of War meets Irene Hart a woman who brings fire and her own brand of peace to his life. Can he win this battle and convince Irene that he's more than a fighter and a lover but a man to keep for all eternity?

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 141131
Read Count: 14563
Published: November 29 2010
Updated: January 21 2012

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well geez Irene, people have "strange" dreams all the time. That doesn't make you crazy. Alright trying to "clean" Ares' face, getting bold are we?

 

Great update!! 



Author's Response:

Hey JoiousMaye that dream was strange because it was so real. Imagine a dream so real that you could smell the man you had been dreaming of when you woke up. Unless he had been sneaking into her room while she slept that should not be possible. The man is pretty hard to resist and those sexy lips couldn't go around adorned with cream all day now could they? She was just making sure that Ares was up to his usual standard good looks.

Thanks for reading, enjoying and commenting.

 Reviewer: JoiousMaye Signed
Date: January 12 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

What is Stone up to? That is my major question. The guys and gals are so precious. Awww

Author's Response:

Hello JoiousMaye, you mean you don't have a guess? You are normally so good at the guessing thing. Neither Ares or Damon have ever met women like these who treat them like regular people and Irene and Percy aren't used to men who treat them like queens.

I appreciate your continued reading, enjoying and commenting. Thank you.

 Reviewer: JoiousMaye Signed
Date: February 17 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMGoodness!! I've missed so much, I'm so excited about everything buzzing around at the new homestead. I really wonder who the mysterious "aunts" really are..hmm

Great writing. Hope to read more soon.



Author's Response:

Hey JoiousMaye I hope all is well in your world. Yes there is a lot of stuff going on both in Olympus and Attica and we are getting a little closer to finding out who the ladies are.

Thanks for reading, enjoying, commenting and reviewing, I appreciate it.  

 

 

 Reviewer: JoiousMaye Signed
Date: September 21 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

they're so precious. i can't say that i'm all that surprised that Irene is a virgin, she just seems so tense around Ares, but it does seem like she may be a little more so because she likes him and doesn't know what to do

Author's Response:

Hello JoiousMaye

Can you imagine all of that hot hunky man focusing on you? I'd be tense too, but yeah Irene does like Ares a lot and she has that letter from her mother stuck in her head making her very cautious more so than Percy.

We aren't going to say the 'L' word yet but considering that she only just met Ares she is reallly feeling that man.

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it very much. 

 

 Reviewer: JoiousMaye Signed
Date: December 20 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Who are those Blonde women?!? And is that vibe Ares gets from them milling around or from Irene?? And hmmm what's the deal with the sudden dizziness are they trying to pry into Irene's mind??

 

Great update 



Author's Response:

Hi JoiousMaye, the blonde women are some interesting characters who will be explained later and the vibe is coming from them. Irene and Percy have both had dizzy spells but I don't think it is from them trying to pry into their minds.

Thank you for reading, enjoying and commenting I really appreciate it.

 Reviewer: JoiousMaye Signed
Date: January 30 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2

Alright, let me give it a go. I can't remember whether or not you mentioned som past interaction with Stone and the Pappas men, but it seems like he's holding some grudge against them. Maybe he's the guy that Theo thwarted to get to Gloria, or was there a 'mysterious' accident with him.

I've gotta go back and read over that.

I feel like there is something there that I'm not exactly picking up but he wants to find out "the truth" about them and expose them. . .or something.

How'd i do? 



Author's Response:

Hey JoiousMaye, there is a definite grudge being held by the Pitts. Theo had no real competition for Gloria because her fiance had been killed by lightning before he had even met her, although remember he was still married to Hera/Rhea at the time.

A mysterious accident you say? You have a very good imagination and you are on track.

The Pitt men are very interested in finding out what the Harts know about the Pappas men and will be making a move to do so shortly.

You did very well JoiousMaye. Are you sure you aren't a writer in disguise yourself?

Thanks for reading, enjoying and commenting and I'm glad I could intrigue you with my story.

 

 Reviewer: JoiousMaye Signed
Date: February 21 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

RED ALERT!!! It's time for somebody to BOP Morgan and shapeshift to replace her, LOL. 

Love that update!

And on the subject of me writing, I've tried my hand at it before, but as you said I have a pretty active imagination, but sometimes it's too active and i can't settle it to think about one thing at a time. 



Author's Response:

Hey JoiousMaye, no shapeshifting going to happen with Morgan sorry she is who she is; mad, bad and dangerous to know at least in her on little mind. She doesn't know what she's gotten into with the Pitts though or for that matter with the Pappas men. Glad you enjoyed it.

That is my challenge to you then grasshopper. Find your focus and hold on tight to it, somehow I think if you can do that you will be a good writer.

As usual I thank you for reading, enjoying and commenting.

 Reviewer: JoiousMaye Signed
Date: February 26 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

And WHY doesn't this club actually exist?!?! It sounds SOOO awesome and I imagine I would actually enjoy the place. The night sounds eventful so far, but [queue climactic music] I know Snake and the gang isn't too far around the corner! [GASP] 

I hope everyone's ready for the ride. . .

I amd SUPER stoked about the updat and cannot wait for the next. YAY! 



Author's Response: Ah JoiousMaye I wish this place really existed too I would definitely go there. Snake and Stone are literally around the corner waiting to pounce. Love your enthusiasm for the story and appreciate the comments. Thanks for reading I appreciate it.

 Reviewer: JoiousMaye Signed
Date: March 16 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh em gee, what's going on??

At this point I'm not really paying attention to Irene and her doubts, but what is this anomaly?!

Who are China and Brittany?

Such intrigue. . .Great update. 



Author's Response:

Hey JoiousMaye, Irene is really keeping Ares on his toes and not in a way that he is used to. He's got his work cut out for him with her and it's just what he deserves; poor guy.

China and Brittany are ... let's just say they are part of a group that prefers to remain under the radar, wielding their power in the background. It's so interesting how they are never in the presence of the Pappas men. Thanks for reading, enjoying and commenting JM as usual it is really appreciated.

 Reviewer: JoiousMaye Signed
Date: April 04 2011
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

OMGoodness, I have yet again missed so much and I am n=more than excited to have had this much to catch up with. I'm so excited for them, and I can't wait to see what is going to happen when the aunts come to Attica...even though they talk in riddles. 

Happy writing!

Joi

 Reviewer: JoiousMaye Signed
Date: February 13 2012
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

 It's been so long since I've had the chance to read the story and it was very refreshing to come back to it, but I sincerely hope that you will update it in the very near future. Both Hart stories are amazing and I hope to see them completed.

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Date: March 31 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.