All I can say is wow this was very deep and emotional to see the love of his life basically hiding herself from him then not eat then really looking at her & seeing that she wasn't herself then confronting her after her near fainting spell that part was heart breaking because she didn't want to face her reality so she ran. Hopefully she's careful but she needs help I'm glad he sees that & told her she's beautiful & perfect just as she was & if she was being healthy that would be one thing but she's not she's depressed & not coping well & doesn't even realize it. Listening to outsiders like Toneys assistant & those wives she needs to get back to herself but she's got to open up & communicate with Griff & maybe see a therapist.

Well hopefully she doesn't shut her dad out like she had for all those years for not doing like she requested & letting Griff know she was with him & the reason he stopped calling. In his way he was trying to protect her not like he did with her step
mom & sisters. Glad Clare is there now she really needed her. She needs to learn that in relationships it's never equal & it's never the same at the same time because both Parties have their strong & weak points & one who is strong to love when love seems not enough. Thats where they are now & Griff is the strong one for her if she let him but if not she can be his destruction that's how much he loves her. If he can't be there for her & supoly that love & support she needs right now. yes she's flawed he is to because noone is perfect But they compliment each other perfectly & it's not like what happened was a secret to him he knew because they went through it in college; But the big ? Is who dug in her past to even look for something like the tape? I keep on landing on Rich & will be surprised if it was anyone else so evil to come between them.

I like it so please don't scrap it. But as we go along would like some flashes of Cloe when she was younger. Hopefully in this story she becomes to know both her parents in better ways. Jay needs to trust her but she also needs to talk to him so theycan have a better understanding of each other. Plus she's Tess daughter both her parents need to talk to her. It's about time especially the kinda guy Jay is very protective & have to work on not killing someone over his wife & daughter. While Tess needs a little mother daughter time it's past time to talk about boys should have done that at 10 but now she's 13 she needs to know plus how to protect herself to. Anyways like where this is going just rambled off some others pointers update soon

Well that went well. Like really Noah. But I thinks she needs to be patient with him because clearly he did it on purpose & is secretly thrilled. By his statement aline she should have vot hes in it with her. I think she needs to learn about his pas & understand why over everyone he chose her. Plus she needs to let go trying to get away she has nothing to go back to but has everything she needs or want with him. When he sees he can trust her I think he'll give her more freedom. I cant wait for the next update. This story just keeps getting better & better.

oh man She's definatelty preggers but what will Noah do. My oppinion is over the moon because he already sees her as his & this is a way to tie her to him. Plus I think he did it intentional trying to get her pregger but what now. Cant wait to read your spin on it.

I think she's doing the right thing by telling him who she is hopefully he take her explanation she didn't want him to treat her any different or be uncomfortable in his feelings for her regardless on who her father is he got to know her as herself

Author's Response:

Hopefully he'll be sensible and understand her. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

great update cant wait for more

This is very interesting Ilyana has only her father who is getting close to joining her mom who she lost 15yrs ago b/c no matter how much he loves her he misses & longs for his mate. Then fate step in the form of her mate her father tries to run away with her then realizes he reacted to hastily which intailed issued a challenge he had to answer which caused him his life which kinda of devastated her although she knew it was inevitable.now they are faced with giving in to each other her over coming her grief & him fight his wolf & base nature to give her time & not hurt her. They start communicating more & strengthing their bond when another pack is approaching their land turns out to be revealing in more ways than one . She learns she's preggers with triplets & one of them is the mate of one of the other packs. This is very interesting keep up the great work

I really miss this story. Dont know what's going on hopefully everythings okay. Please update as soon ad you can. Really done a great job with it. Love the mystery of who & what Thandie is just that she's very special, smart & gifted beyond anything & is very important to the supernatural world.

Quite interesting Please update I can hardly wait

Author's Response:

I just updated. I hope to hear from you about the next chapter.

Wow she really is special & not your typical she wolf but one thing what does Tiki know that no one else know. Is it some kind of lost or forgotten legend  or prophecy surrounding her birth or something. Thanks for the back story on her growing up.very insightful &. Interesting. Can't wait for what's up next 

Never saw that one. great surprise