Penname: kvgurl [Contact]

Real name: KIERA

Member Since: December 17 2010

Membership status: Member

Bio:

SOUTHERN BLACK GIRL THAT LOVES THE CONTREVERSITY AND BEAUTY OF MIXED RELATIONSHIPS.




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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

 Denise is marrying the man of her dreams. She is determined to be a perfect wife, mother, and homemaker. Even if she has to get her apron a little dirty along the way. 

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2088
Read Count: 1546
Published: October 12 2015
Updated: October 15 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Daddy will fall

Wow wasn't how I thought it was going to begin that's for sure.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 13 2015

Retired
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Sometimes hurting the person you love is easier than showing them love, especially when you're hurting inside.

Saint-Luc and Naomi Adebayo-Roux aren't any different.

This is their story.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 46514
Read Count: 376172
Published: October 14 2015
Updated: July 15 2017


Title: Chapter 13: 13.

They love & need each other And shouldn't let a misunderstanding ruin what they've built. Saint needs to find her. He needs her & she needs him they complete each other without the other quaint is going to kill himself working & not taking care of himself & in the mindset she's in she's just going to committ suicide because of being in a deep depression & just not want to deal any more. both of them need therapy together & apart. It would be great for her to get to know his sister in law she could be a great friend keep each other company & bond with the kids help out with the baby so she can get practice in so when they have a child.

Love this story update soon Just my ramblings.

Author's Response:

Yes, they're both going through a lot together and apart and only time can tell how they deal with everything going on.

Thank you ever so much for reading :-)

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 25 2016

Title: Chapter 3: 3.

I agree with Jacqua. But I also think he should have hired her on as his personal assistant to handle his business & keep him company. They have a pretty good relationship that spending time would have turned more intimate. Didn't have to be so vulgar but I guess he is strait forward so but it makes her sound like a prostitute or courtesan.

Author's Response:

Saint most definitely does not mince his words, and why he's very much like marmite but there's a more to him than what meets the eye.

Thank you for reading :-).

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 22 2015

Title: Chapter 11: 11.

Wow she has no faith in their new found foundation & love. He should have included her into the conversation haven't they had enough with the secrets & misunderstandings before. She needs some deep counciling & both them together needs to see a therapist. But he better get to her fast before more damage is done & he looses her forever. Hopefully some clues of the damage she's already inflicted on herself is left for him to see & be alarmed. Both need to learn how to communicate with the other more effectively before it's too late

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Date: January 18 2016

Title: Chapter 4: 4.

This Ch.was kinda sweet. they are getting married.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :-).

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 28 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Once bitten, twice shy, Marrisa is one bitter lady after her husband cheats on her under her nose, with her sister. Bitter and broken heart Marrissa tells herself she is done with men, One little detail foils all of her plans and now she has to find out what happened to her on the night of her post break up drinking rampage.

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7204
Read Count: 6734
Published: October 31 2015
Updated: March 11 2016


Title: Chapter 3: How the great fall

I remember this story from a ways back & it leaving off with her finding out about her sister pregnancy & all the drama that followed & it bent a little longer in the story. Now this one seemed a bit more polished but I kinda stuck on one part. She blacks, the guy that was watching her is waiting for her but don't see her come out & her car is still there then sees the bar guy dragging something in the Alley that seems suspicious & leaves & he doesn't check but leaves I take it to because she woke up sore in an alley then drove herself home. That part kinda didn't fit & didn't make sense to me. Other wise great writing can't wait for the next update

Author's Response:

I don't really understand what you don't understand, but would urge you to be patient. If your concerns are not addressed later on in the story then we can say we have a problem. I took it down to rewrite and polish it up, so I am thankful that the effort is noted. Thank you for the review and I will try to clarify the problem areas, rest  your concerns and not render you too confused. Please keep reading.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 09 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 458]
Summary:

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COMPLETELY UPDATED


(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 113715
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018


Title: Chapter 10: Sunrise

Wow loved this update really enjoying this story. What a date so simple & beautiful. can't wait to see what's up next.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 24 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

"Obviously, you don't give a fuck about me! You just want me to stay at home and pop babies. My dreams mean nothing to you!"

"Is that what you think?" Yes was Ashley's immediate answer.

"I asked you a question."

"Does it matters!?"

"I guess you need to be reminded that you're moye serdtse."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2647
Read Count: 14518
Published: February 15 2016
Updated: February 18 2016


Title: Chapter 6: o4

Loved loved this short. Now can we finish Tommy & Rafeals story

Author's Response:

Yes. Let's end Tommy & Rafael's story - it's long overdue!

 

Thanks for reading & reviewing! 

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 18 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

So she hasnt accepted the promotion yet during the argument he only heard promotion, Hong Kong which meant leaving him. Which is what he thought. That was soooo hot wow. Those two. More please.

Author's Response:

exactly, kvgurl =) Maksim freaked out and shut down.

thanks for reading and reviewing! the last update is on the GO - will be updated soon!

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 16 2016

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Another story in the Todd Knows Best series looking at the Manning family. 

All publicly recognized characters and settings belong to their respective owners except for those characters and plot which belong to this author.

To chocolategirl thanks so much for giving me the heads up that my story posted twice and I'm happy that you enjoyed reading about my version of the Mannings. Yeah all the possibilities of their lives and love that OLTL were afraid to broadcast.


 



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Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Fluff, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2161
Read Count: 4300
Published: February 18 2016
Updated: February 18 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really love these two as a couple & wish OLTL had the guts to deepen their connection as you have Becaus the chymistry between these two were off the charts. Thanks for exploring what could have haopened if given a chance

Author's Response:

Hey kvgurl,

I'm in total agreement - ABC and OLTL did not have the guts to go there. They and their show were weak and I didn't shed any tears once it was cancelled because they blew off their true audience a long time ago because of a few bigots. They could have been a real power couple.

Thanks for reading, enjoying and reviewing. I'm so happy you appreciated my exploration :)

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 18 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

"Fuck you!"

 "That can be arranged darling" he says seriously with a mischievous glint in his honey brown eyes that were hooded with lust.

 It was only then when Abela understood she had made a mistake that will bite her in the ass later. But little did she know, later was going to be here a lot sooner.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 2999
Read Count: 3688
Published: February 23 2016
Updated: February 25 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

More more more really liking this story

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 25 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.