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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 298]
Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69611
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I'm totally up for some drama between Elle and Katie. Elle needs some competition. But please, don't let Katie turn in to the cliche obsessed psycho woman who will do everything to get the main hero of the story. Its always the same thing. Not all woman gets obsessed with a man. Besides, that would also make it too easy too root for Elle. She has to earn it. I still think that Dean deserves better then her. Not sure if its Katie, but Elle is definitely not on top of the list though.

Also Deans needs to learn to open his mouth and voice what he wants. Its because he is so quiet and never gives his opinion and what he really wants that Elle treats him this way and walk all over him. He needs to be more firm and communicative and stop doing what Elle wants every damn time.



Author's Response:

Katie’s getting mixed reviews, but everyone is still kind of here for her being included. I think they want to see some drama too. I’m not really here for the cliché psycho chick foolishnesses, so no worries. But I do have a few alternative ideas in mind. I’ll have to test the vibe and see how it works for future chapters.

Dean is definitely overly passive. Readers are actually starting to pick up on it. I wanted this, just to show he’s far from perfect. He has flaws, which include his lack to communicate. His other ones will be revealed in future chapters.  Thanks a bunch for reading and reviewing Msroos.

CG

Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: December 23 2014

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I honestly don't know what to think about Elle or Dean. As the story progress I'm realizing that Elle and Dean don't fit together and that their relationship maybe won't work. Both have problem with communication. Dean seems like a yes man who will go along with everything even if he doesn't want to or agree with it. Elle is still dumb and clueless as to what she wants. At this point I don't think she will ever figure it out. I honestly don't understand why this is so difficult for her. Her relationship with Justin or any other failed relationship before that cannot be use as an excuse anymore. Its getting old and Elle is a grown woman. Its either she likes the guy and is at least willing to try to date him and see where it goes, or she doesn't. She needs to stop with her pity party, move on and stop sending those stupid text. I'm guessing Dean will go with Katie as his date, Elle will think that he had moved on stop contacting him. Months will go by again without contacting and what not. I do think that Elle should be the one who takes the first step. But Dean needs to also learn to speak up and stop being so nonchalant. 



Author's Response:

Interesting analysis. Thanks for reading and reviewing Msroos.

CG

Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: December 24 2014

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Wow, This was HOT!!! Dean does not play. He put it down on her. He practically knocked her out. This was an intense scene. I mean lets face, the poor guy waited years to finally get Elle, so of course he wasn't going to be easy on her. LOL. I really like this dominate sexy side of Dean. I hope to see more of it. 

I like the sweet, caring and shy Dean, but I like that he is also being a little more sure of himself and dominate. He doesn't have to be over the top dominate like an alpha male. But with a woman like Elle, he has to be firm and sometimes even wear the pants in the relationship. She is a smart woman, but when it comes to her relationships she slow, clueless  and a little dumb. Especially in the beginning. But there is progress and she is changing for the better. But I still feel that if Dean gets to lay back and wait for her to initiate about things or decisions in there relationship, that it won't happen. But I like how things are so far.

Now if only pervert Randall can disappear.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think Dean handled that accordingly. I’m especially glad to hear you’re enjoying this new side of him. Just know you’ll probably be seeing it again.

Progression comes with revelations. Some are good and some are bad. They’re still getting a feel for each other as a whole. So with that comes seeing different sides of one another.  Hopefully they’ll keep things going in the same direction.

And doesn’t everybody wish pervy Randall would disappear?

Thanks for reviewing Msroos.

CG

Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: February 24 2015

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 82]
Summary:

With the help of her boyfriend, Luciana embarks on a new adventure in Madrid working as an au-pair. With this move, it forces the previously horribly insecure and low esteemed Luciana to be pushed outside her comfort zone and reach a new awareness of herself. But by doing so she must deal with the consequences of a long-distance relationship and possibly heartbreak...
Miss.Carter can't have it all or can she?

For anyone who feels unworthy of good things - this is for you.

Please be aware that this story is a sequel of the first book, "The Untitled Girl" which is available for purchase on Amazon.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Spritualism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 40843
Read Count: 75981
Published: August 30 2015
Updated: May 11 2017


Title: Chapter 13: -- 11 --

Angelo most of the time had to walk on egg shells to not hurt Luciana because of her insecurities issues. Luciana has always been insecure and had low self esteem. Its difficult to be in a relationship with these type of people because a lots of time they are actually the ones who ends up screwing you over and Luciana did not disappoint. Being young is not an excuse. And knowing that when you are involved in a relationship with someone you shouldn't cheat, doesn't count as a "mistake".  Hopefully Angelo won't just forgive her easily and maybe even move on. I feel like she just doesn't deserve him.



Author's Response:

I don't think there's been a time Angelo has had to walk on egg shells for Luciana. Though he cares about her feelings and has helped Luciana deal with her insecurities, Angelo is pretty straight to the point even when he knows it could cause an argument.

Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: February 09 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

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Emery and Nicholas have been friends forever. But when Nicholas finds out he's sick he asks for something that could change their friendship forever



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4365
Read Count: 5809
Published: April 13 2016
Updated: August 21 2019


Title: Chapter 2: Requests

Nicolas is a disgusting human being. I get that he has cancer and its sad, but that doesn't mean that you get to have a free pass to sleep with your brother's wife. And Olivia is even worst of she accepts to go al long with it. In a way this will be a test for Emery to see if his wife truly loves him and RESPECTS him and his marriage. Just because Nicolas is sick doesn't mean that they have to grand him all his wishes, especially if its something disgusting like this. Olivia had already lost all of my respects because her answer should have been a BIG FAT NO straight away. Not thinking about it or what ever. Just No. Plain and simple. They should let Nicolas know that they will be there for him all the way and support him, but going as far as to let Olivia sleep with him is too much. At least now Emery knows how selfish his brother is and how much he loves and respect him. Which is NOT much!!!!!


I will stick around and see how this will go. But if it gets too much I don't think I will be able to continue reading it. Both Olivia and Nicolas are already working on my nerves. Nicolas for not having any morals and being disrespectful with his request and Olivia because I have a feeling that she will end up sleeping with him. I hope that if that is the case that in the end Emery will have his happy ending with a woman who truly loves him and will respect their marriage. 

Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: April 20 2016

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18591
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Maybe a the story progresses Charlie will grow on me. But a for now I still don't like her. If she was having some type of mental problems, she should have opened her mouth and tell Alec that. He is not a mind reader. Instead she chose to leave her husband and children behind. What type of mother leaves her children like that. You mean to tell me that during all those years she couldn't have even called them, email or send letters? She could have at least keep in contact like that. If she was healthy enough to work and even take a man as a sex buddy, she also could have find a way to keep in contact with her husband and children to at least let them know that she was alright and that she needed space and what not.

If it wasn't because Oli was sick, I wonder if she would have even came back. I would have sympatize more with Charlie if she went away in some type of facility for her mental problems, kept in touch with her family sending at least some type of letters/email to let them know that she is alive and that she just needs some time away and if she HAD NOT taking a lover who she travel the world with. Instead she left her husband, alone with to kids, with no news of her whatsoever. You don't do these type of shit to the people you love and respect. 

As for Alex, he is an asswhole. He only used Vanessa to ease his pain and loneliness. I'm probably the only one who feels sorry for Vanessa. No woman should be used and treated like that. She was only useful when it was convenient for Alex. But now that his wife who left him for three years is back, he just kicked her out of his life as if she wasn't part of his life for 2 years. Its like "my wife is back, I don't need you anymore, byeee". What a dick.  



Author's Response:

Hey Msroos,

Thanks for the review and it's cool not liking Charlie, some people don't. Shame can make people do things they otherwise wouldn't even consider, and once you fall into a cycle of shame, certain people can find it difficult to escape. I will say that I think there are other readers who feel for Vanessa like you do. Her character isn't one meant to be the villain, she's hurt and being hurt like that can rightly make a person react with anger. It's not my intention to make these characters into caricatures, and the following chapters will be touching on Charlie's issues. The relationship between them all is quite messy and you can be a nice person, yet still be a dick sometimes. Hope you get some form of enjoyment out of my story. (maybe picturing Vanessa sticking pins in Charlie's eyes???) 

K. 

Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: June 20 2016

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Instead of at least starting to like Charlie as the story progress, its like I like her even less. I feel sorry for Alec sometimes and wonders why he loves Charlie so much since it doesn't seem that she respects him at all. She still going to work for Sean knowing Alexs feelings about it but its like she doesn't care at all about that. Don't let me even start about the way she is raising their kids. She and Alec is supposed to be a team when it comes to the upbringing of their child. Instead when Alec says "no" she contradicts him amd say yes to Olli whitout even discussing it with Alec first. Parenting is not supposed to be like that. She seriously need to stop making decision about her sons welfare without talking to Alec about it. They are in a marriage. Were is the respect?? I'm also still waiting on her being honest with Alec about the affair she had with Pier. She may have been sick and left her family according to her because she wanted better for them. But she was still well enough to travel with a other man over the world. I'm not trying to judge her. But her logic sometimes just doesn't make sence to me. Its sad that I even like Vanessa more the her.

Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: August 03 2016

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 241]
Summary:

The Universe has a funny/morbid way of completely turning your life around.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 92790
Read Count: 32403
Published: December 29 2016
Updated: June 21 2017


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

What type of therapist is Dr. Shannon. Her advice was VERY unprofessional.  I quote : "He wasn’t doing you any favors by ending your friendship. He made a rash decision without consulting you and I believe it will backfire. "?????? How does she know this? Based on what did Dr Shannon come to this conclusion?? She never even met Clark personally.  A PROFESSIONAL therapist would NEVER say something like this.  She is not a relationship counselor, even them won't say something like this, nor is she a motivational coach.

A therapist should always stay neutral. Dena is her patient so she knows what is going on with her. But when it comes to Clark she doesn't know anything about him nor does she know what his reasons for ending his friendship with Dena are. Therefore Clark is a individual who has every right to end his friendship with Dena if he wants to.  He has the right to withdraw himself from any situation if he feels uncomfortable or feel that it won't end well. If I was in his place I would have done the same thing. If my friends relationship was suffering because of me and to top it of, me also having strong feelings for him, I too would have walked away. And if he too is my friend, while it may hurt him, as a friend, he would also understand it for me.  

 

Then again If Dena did not want to end her friendship with Clark she should have discuss it with him instead of breaking in to tears, insulting him and calling him a disappointment. Her abandonment issues and low self-esteem is something that only she can help herself with. She needs to stop getting attached to new people quickly and realize that she and only she is responsible for her own happiness. Hopefully this trip/therapy will help her realize that. So what if Clark was doing only himself a favor. He likes her more than just a “friend”. Why should he have to suck it up continue being her friend, while hurting because she is with someone else? His feelings and reasons don’t count? Dena clearly has some problems, but I also realize that she is a little selfish and want things to happen how and when she wants. When it doesn’t she cry’s, accuse people of abandoning, disappointing or not loving her.

 

The same goes for her situation with Gabriel. If a man was the one getting upset because the girl doesn’t want to or is not ready to have sex with him, then he would be called all kinds of “asswhole”. So why is it okay if its the other way around. Dena is thinking about herself again and wanting to “scratch her itch” instead of taking Gabriel’s feelings and thought also in to considerations. While he should have been more vocal and explain his reasons too Dena for not wanting to have sex yet, I for once think that when it came to this, he was right. He probably doesn’t wants to be a substitute for Clark and wants to have sex when he is sure about Dena’s feelings for her and that she wouldn’t be thinking and fantasizing about Clark when she was sleeping with him.

But even soo I still don’t trust Gabriel and I think that Dena did the right thing by breaking up with him. She wasn’t that in too him and Gabriel seems to have some issues too that were a little too creepy.

 

 

 

Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: February 21 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 58]
Summary:

Hey, a casual affair

That could go anywhere

And only for tonight.

Take, any moment 

Anytime

A lover on the left

A sinner on the right.


Just lay

In the atmosphere

A casual

Affair


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 18347
Read Count: 4481
Published: November 25 2017
Updated: November 11 2019


Title: Chapter 8: Bella

I truly hope that as the story progress that Phoenix will at least get some back bone. Because right now she is working on my nerves. I get that she may not like confrontations.  But she is passive and lets people walk all over her and does nothing to stand up for her self. Being a sweet girl is one thing. But letting people disrespect you and treat you like crap is a whole different thing. 



Author's Response:

Yes, she is very passive. I know people in real life who behave like Phoenix. But you never know. Maybe it takes someone to hit rock bottom for something to finally change. Thanks for your review!    

Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: December 05 2017

Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 239]
Summary:

Ethan West has never been one to control his wolf, he let his instincts rule and they never failed him. Until his wolf insisted on marking Mia Kane as his mate. Maybe it wouldn't have been so bad if Mia wasn't a human. Ethan despised humans and taking one as a mate was the last thing he wanted to do.

Mia Kane should be living her best life, her music career took off, she won a Grammy for best new artist and she was selling out arenas all over the world. Life was perfect except for the fact that she tragically lost her family in an accident the night of the awards show. When the whirlwind was over her best friend and manager Elizabeth Jones forces her to take some down time at her parent's bed and breakfast. When Ethan shifts and bites her, her life takes an unexpected turn for the worst.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 28478
Read Count: 67159
Published: January 22 2018
Updated: July 08 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Fresh Air

Every story needs some drama. Their wouldn't be a story if there is none. But its so unfortunate that the main male character always has to be a as-whole , especially in the beginning. Doing some things to the female main character that are unforgivable and still end up having the girl in the end. I get that Ethan may have been trough a lot. But his behavior towards an innocent woman, who didn't even ask for this  is on acceptable. At this point I could really care less what he went trough that made him this way. He is not likeable. Nor do I think that anything will make me like him either as the story progress. Shawn I like. And I hope that he and Mia's friendship will turn in to love further down the line. 



Author's Response:

I totally agree but stick around and we'll see if Mia is so forgiving! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: March 11 2018

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.