Penname: jjazz59 [Contact]

Real name: Jacqueline Gilliard

Member Since: March 07 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio: Love reading and very much a bookworm. Really into interracial fiction. I like science fiction, romance and mysteries. Really like the show Fringe, Criminal Minds, all the CSI's. Enjoy the movie Takers. Listen to Jennifer Hudson, Jazmine Sullivan, and a fan of Halle Berry. I work in Human Resources.


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Summary:

 

You have had life mapped out at a young age. Get into a performance arts college. Own your own dance studio and stay away from boys.... But what happens when you meet the love of your life?  Then come to find out he has a girlfriend? But, he has eyes for only you...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 181242
Read Count: 80219
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: December 24 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Feeling You

Very nice start. I want to read more!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing I'm so glad you like it.

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Date: April 07 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Tryouts

Well, well, well, Justin made a mistake and likes Jalena. Wonder what he's going to do about it? Well done. Next chaper should be interesting.



Author's Response:

Thank you ever so much! yeah it should be interesting to see what Justin is going to do about it hmmm I wonder.... :)

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Date: April 26 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Tender Kisses

Good for Justin. Now she knows how he feels. I hope she likes him back. Good chapters!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! 

Oh yes she is definitely feeling Justin

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Date: May 16 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Butter Voice On The Phone!

You did really well! Justin and Jalena are going to be so cute together. Justin needs to break up with his girlfriend first.



Author's Response:

I love how everyone say's he needs to break up with his girlfriend first poor Stacey she gets no love..lol... without conflict where would we be.. There is loads of tension and temptation bewtween them... We will just have to see how they handle it.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing I just love it! I'm still nervous about writting and I'm glac your enjoying this I hope to keep you entertain and happy too. :)

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Date: May 30 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Lunch Time Disasters

I agree! Those two will be so cute together once he no longer has a girlfriend. I have a feeling there's some drama coming.



Author's Response:

What Drama??? lol oh got to have some drama will just have to see what happens... 

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Date: June 05 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Shenai always wanted to be with Jeremy but with so many obstacles in her way it was impossible. Now that Jeremy’s father has passed away he’s rushed the next girl that best fit his father description to the altar. Shenai sees her window of opportunity with Jeremy quickly boarding up and wants to take the nails off the boards that are going keep her away from Jeremy forever but she doesn’t have the will to do it. Shenai truly believes after Jeremy is married; her life will be over but little does she know it’s only the beginning of chaotic a life and just maybe she might get what she’s always wanted in the beginning.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 38343
Read Count: 37564
Published: April 21 2011
Updated: February 02 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Everyone Lies

I fell sorry for all of them. Shenai, Jeremy, Jeremiah, and Jade are all in pain. I like that this chapter showed that. Excited for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

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Date: May 08 2011

Title: Chapter 18: Letters

That's a lot of drama. Jeremiah and Jeremy are too old to fight like high school boys. Even though they are both with other people it's obvious they both still care for Shenai. How are they going to resolve this problem? Please come back and finish this story!

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Date: January 02 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Caught in the Mix

What a mess! How could Shenai be that blind? She hasn't figured out that Jeremiah really likes her too! Why bother with someone who is getting married when you can have his twin. I bet Jeremiah would do anything for Shenai. You are doing a good job with this story!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU !!! :) 

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Date: May 04 2011

Title: Chapter 3: In the rhythm

Ok, I'm hooked on your story already. I see they are both being stubborn. Interested in seeing where you go with this story.



Author's Response:

Glad you're hooked :) 

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Date: April 23 2011

Title: Chapter 3: In the rhythm

Are those two ever going to get it together. I rooting for them. Nice, nice chapter!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:) 

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Date: April 25 2011

Title: Chapter 5: The Best Shower Ever Taken

Uh oh, those two are so naughty. On his wedding day no less. I'm sure they both thought it was worthy it. I hope there isn't a pregnancy because I didn't read about them using protection. Also they are about to get busted by Jeremiah! Loving this story!



Author's Response: Thank you!!!!! 

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Date: April 25 2011

Title: Chapter 8: A Friend In Need

Damn Jeremy! You need to dump your soon to be bride and run away with Shenai. This is not going to end well for someone! Love the new chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

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Date: May 20 2011

Title: Chapter 11: After the Reception

Very nice chapter. Looks like Jeremiah got what he wanted. Let's hope Shenai doesn't change her mind. Glad you're back writing this story!

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Date: July 05 2012

Title: Chapter 19: Stick by my side

SMH at Shenai. So now she's in love with Javed. All I can say is good luck.

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Date: June 16 2014

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[Reviews - 439]
Summary:

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89295
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 12

I'm glad she was able to tell Nick what she felt at the time. They have a lot to work out but maybe with time they will. Good chapter! More and soon, please!

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Date: August 06 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 10 pt 2

That Marta is something else. Now she expects Ellie to come running after the  way she treated her. I not sure I feel sory for Nick right now. God chapter!!!

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Date: June 20 2011

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm disappointed in Nick. Didn't take him long to marry Juliette and then has the nerve to be demanding to Ellie. Delia should have minded her own business. Also what mother slaps her daughter in the face? Ellie is grown and her parents should have known Ellie isn't that type of person.

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Date: April 27 2012

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 11

Nick's sister could have at least asked to hear Ellie's side of the story before stubbing her. Nick is pretending he doesn't care any longer but it's obvious he does. Just like Ellie still cares for him. I feel for both of them. If only they would communicate with each other. Well done and waiting for the next chapter!

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Date: June 23 2011

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 pt 1

Oh, poor thing. Just can't get over ick even though he's an a-hole. Sounds like Nick isn't really over her either even though he is going about it a different way! Good chapter!

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Date: June 17 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Ok is Nick in the mob?! I have a feeling his family is not completely legitimate. His brother Gio and Nina seem nice. Update soon!

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Date: May 23 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Character photos

Beautiful Characters!

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Date: May 24 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

Well ok, looks like the real Nick is coming out. I hope she is prepared to deal with what's coming! Good chapter!

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Date: May 25 2011

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 12

Bring on the sex scenes I don't mind. Nice chapter I wish Nick would open up to Ellie. He knows he loves her. Men are so stubborn. Excited for the next chapter.

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Date: July 07 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 7

Nick is still hot and sexy but that lifestyle is very dangerous and if she stays the police will be watching her too. Being pregnant is really complicating things. She has a lot to think about. Love both this and the previous chapter!

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Date: June 08 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 8

How sad she lost the baby. This might make her harden against Nick. His reaction was so cold.  It will be interesting to see if they can get past this. Good chapter!

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Date: June 10 2011

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