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Crossing the Finish Line by wisedec4u
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214835
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014

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Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Loved it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 Reviewer: lacky Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2011
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

loved it!!!! Wonder what ryan will do?

Hope you will update soon ...will be looking forward



Author's Response:

Just posted the next chapter. I hope you'll have time to read and review.  Thanks

 Reviewer: lacky Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 28 2011
Victim of the Fall by Lililei
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 108]
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Here is the deepest secret nobody knows
Here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life
Which grows higher than soul can hope or mind can hide
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

A story about what it is to love that which you cannot keep.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 32843
Read Count: 66619
Published: November 17 2011
Updated: June 13 2012

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Title: Chapter 6: Edge

Well it may didnt turn out as you wanted it, but i liked it...hope to see a uppdate soon..



Author''s Response:

Thank you lacky! Update is on the way!

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Why is playing with Dana like that? So he finally admitted that he has feelings for Dana, what a punk.  Why did Dana run, your were bold enough to say what your were feeling and now your running.    I can''t wait to read what happens next.



Author''s Response:

Thank you so much pm, an add is on the way!

 Reviewer: lacky Signed
Date: May 01 2011

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