Penname: crocuslady [Contact]

Real name: Crocus Lady

Member Since: April 11 2011

Membership status: Member

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Single woman with way too much time on my hands and a vivid imagination.



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Eyes For Only You by meme
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 335]
Summary:

 

You have had life mapped out at a young age. Get into a performance arts college. Own your own dance studio and stay away from boys.... But what happens when you meet the love of your life?  Then come to find out he has a girlfriend? But, he has eyes for only you...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 181242
Read Count: 80216
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: December 24 2017

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Feeling You

It think that artimiss caine is right.  We get heavily invested in our characters and when someone keeps jacking them around we want it to stop and for our fav character to grow  pair and kick them to the curb.  I liked justin but with how he is acting its like an abusive relatiosnhip.  I want you when i want you but i don't want you to move on so I can keep my options open type of thing.

I hate that.  I think everyone with an objective point of view hate this.  Anyway, congrats that you made these HS kids not to be one deminsional characters. 

I think that when you finish the story for us and pick it up again a few months later with fresh eyes you will see that you could have removed some non plot moving or character developing scenes.  But you can only do that when you get distance from the story. I say this but I haven't yet got to that point with my own story but I hope I can get there. 

It is not easy writing out what is in your head. Congrats on your bravery and for giving us an entertaining and thought provoking story to read!!!

CL

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2012
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 You And Me And All Other People

I think that Jalena needs a distration from Justin.  he is giving me whiplash from how he goes between her and stacey.  he HAS to be with stacey FOREVER????  This is HIGH SCHOOL.  Jalena can't put her self on hold waiting for him to step up his game.

 

Go find that Big mac guy Jalena and have some real fun with an older guy.

 

BTW, glad Stacey got that beat down!!!  She had it coming with interest.   CL



Author's Response:

lol  Yes! it will be fun to see what happens with Big Mac guy!

No he doest have to be her he just doesnt want to hurt her and but he's seriously getting the point now sorry its taking forever is just my first story and mind keeps going back and forth with it lol... Thanks for reviewing :)

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2012
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Claiming Mina by crocuslady
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 332]
Summary:

http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/6536/claimingmina.jpg

                                                                                     (Banner by Missus James)

 

Lucas Spaulding waited three years before he could claim his woman his mother brought into their privilaged home. She swore that she would never leave, now it looks like she needs to be reminded who she belongs to. she's on notice. Lucas is on the hunt and he doesn't intend to play fair.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: The Alphas of Spaulding Inc.
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 41598
Read Count: 74122
Published: August 17 2011
Updated: July 26 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Okay so the much anticipated chapter 3 is up.  I  can't wait to into the other brothers so people can see  how they fit into the story.  We'll be going back and forth through time a bit but it will certainly explain how everyone got to where they are at the party.  I hope this chapter distances itself in peoples minds from Bondage.  Hope to put the pictures up soon and maybe another chapter tonight.

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed
Date: August 18 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Nothing is happening with Lucas or anyone else until she's over 18.  I promise.  If you'll note, she didn't even get a kiss from Luke because she's too young.  But thanks for the warning about possibly getting banned.  My next chapter which I should have up tonight will really advance to story and their age. 

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed
Date: August 17 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Thanks everyone for the love.  I'm not the greatest at  adding pictures the cast pic chapter.  I'll see what I can do in a bit. 

I know that pmgayles is leary of the age difference.  I completely understand.  This is why Lucas has to play the waiting game.  Mina has had to raise herself while her mother has worked long hours for the Spauldings. 

There should be no underage sex between Lucus and Mina.  But there are boys her age that Mina will want to explore with.

BTW does anyone want to help with pics or a banner?  Seriously. Anyone?

I thinking that  Lucas is that blond guy Phillip Winchester from Strikeback and Robinson Carusoe.  Not entirely sure about Renee Elise Goldsberry for Mina.

And I am working on the next chapter now.  Let's hope it works out.

 

Thanks for the support and feedback!

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed
Date: August 17 2011
An Arranged Marriage To Satan by EvaJaye
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 131]
Summary:

 

 

Arranged Marriage- a marriage arranged by someone other than the couple getting wedded, curtailing or avoiding the process of courtship.

It's 2009 and Thea Malebranche could have sworn the archaic practice didn't occur here in America. But Apparently, she was mistaken. 

Definition Courtesy of Wikipedia && Banner Courtesy of the lovely Minx

 

 

 

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6105
Read Count: 9625
Published: November 14 2011
Updated: May 17 2012

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I still love it.  Thea needs a guy interested in her besides Julian.  He's got options and she should have some too.  Does he have a hot long lost brother or does she have a hot client crushing on her.  Not trying to cause trouble, just even up the score.

 

Looking forward to the update.

 

CL

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed
Date: May 04 2012
Children of Avalon: Book II by Anastasia_G
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

Arthur, Gwen, with Merlin, Mordred, Morgana and Morgause in the background.

 

Two years since their meeting in Eirinn, Arthur and Guinevere are reunited in Camelot to celebrate Morgana's return. With war on the horizon, their passion draws them irresistibly together, even as duty pulls them apart, and the future of Albion hangs in the balance.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Guinevere
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Gwen/Arthur (Merlin)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 35499
Read Count: 138592
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: June 16 2012

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 "Mist and Shadow, Cloud and Flame"

Wow!  That was wonderful and I usually hate this story.

 

Can't wait for more... but I suppose I will if I must. :(

 

CL



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Can I ask, why do you hate this story? Im curious :)

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed
Date: May 05 2012
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Fatal by Quila Cole
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 70]
Summary:


 


Leaving well enough alone should've been a saying Darren Hayes lived by. Unfortunately for him, her leaving him was never an option.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Me I’m Crazy
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12451
Read Count: 17302
Published: April 26 2012
Updated: June 02 2013

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Title: Chapter 5: A Matter of Trust...

Why is Darren so blind.  So Fallen is beautiful.  She's also kooko coe CoCo Puffs.  Her Elvis has left the building.  If he says its not serious, he should try to see another girl and watch what happens.

Looking forward to the update.

CL



Author's Response:

Her elvis has left the building lol! Thanks for reading! 

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 05 2012
Mystic Falls 1912-A Tale Of Two Witches by PriscillaPal
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 42]
Summary:

When best friends Bonnie Bennett and Greta Martin find themselves betrothed to men named Salvatore and Winchester, respectively, Greta comes up with the idea to switch potential husbands. But Damon Salvatore isn't fooled so easily.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Damon/Bonnie (Vampire Diaries)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 38260
Read Count: 14379
Published: April 30 2012
Updated: July 02 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So Damon saves "Greta" and I have to wonder why just like Dean.  Obviously Bonnie is the stronger witch so I don't see why Damon would let her spend any more time with the Winchesters than he has to. 

I love Sam.

CL

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 05 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Go get your woman Damon!!!  I love this story!!!!

My guess is that Sam isn't going to take this too well.  I wonder who the the warewolves were that Damon killed or will we find our when someone is a no show at the Council meeting.

I need more!!!!!

CL

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Date: June 03 2012
Something Different by DeepPurple
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Don Draper has a late night at the office and decides he needs a drink and ends up with something entirely different.    



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3741
Read Count: 2809
Published: June 07 2012
Updated: June 07 2012

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I could totally see Don doing something like this.  Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thanks

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 08 2012
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The Better Life by FindingMyself
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 424]
Summary:

She despised celebrities, maybe even hated them. That was until she met him. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 88706
Read Count: 297370
Published: June 18 2012
Updated: April 23 2013

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't believe that Jason is ok with her just being his assistant.  Did he think that he could keep her so busy that she wouldn't have time for anyone else.  He hasn't been doing anything to keep the home fires burning so why is he upset about carter.

Carter might be more mature that Jason gives him credit for and a real run for his money with Keyisha.  So thumbs up for him.

BTW, wow is Dad an ass.

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 11 2012
Noah's Orders by Kmaj
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

Noah Bianchi has been in lust for his new secretary Eliza from the moment he met her, but how will he introduce her to his dominant lifestlye? By bending her over his desk of course.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7176
Read Count: 8082
Published: July 26 2012
Updated: August 10 2012

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Title: Chapter 2: Said the Spider to the Fly

Oh my!  That was so hot!  I am so glad you did an update.  I haven't read 50 shades but if it is anything like this then ... wow.

Please keep this story rolling!!!

 

CL

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10 2012
Twice The Fool by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 282]
Summary:

 

Cara Nightingale had made the same mistake twice.  Could she recover from past mistakes and get her life in order?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66737
Read Count: 81064
Published: August 07 2012
Updated: October 15 2012

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Visit

I like Anja.  She was really looking out for them even though she had to knock a few heads together to get them to see what they really had in front of them.

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 10 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.