Penname: Mary P [Contact]

Real name: Mary Paeroa

Member Since: June 03 2011

Membership status: Member

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Summary:

 A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

 One night in Vegas changes the luck of two strangers.

Grace is a good girl to the bone, though she loves her job as a teacher she wants some excitement and for her twenty-fifth birthday she wants to shed that good girl image. Not be predictable Grace but a sexy wanton vixen,so her friends take her to Las Vegas, where her life is changed forever.

Kevin is an NFL all star and all around player. He is in Vegas because he was told to lay low after sleeping with the wife of one of his team mates, he has to figure out a way to change his image and quick.

 Sometimes what happens in Vegas shouldn't stay in Vegas and in Kevin and Grace's case it wont.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 14996
Read Count: 61679
Published: June 07 2009
Updated: April 27 2013


Title: Chapter 11: Meet the team.

oooh can't wait.. any updates soon? love your stories



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 150]
Summary:

 

Natasha Roberts is a paediatrician with a healing touch and warm smile at 30 years of age, she is a beautiful woman with a broken spirit which she keeps hidden. When with her group of friends she is the listner, understander and the one her friends depend on for all the answers. Her secret is she that is unable to have children which is the reason her ex-husband gave her for their divorce, she lives to heal children even if it reminds her of what she can never have.

Angelo Luciano Salvatore is a mob boss and the head of the Salvatore Crime Family. He likes to think of himself as a business man when most would call him a ruthless bastard. The day his wife died he become a heartless shell who begins to neglect his son turning to his business for comfort. Until his son is taken to the hospital for a simple check up and is found to have the very disease that killed his mother Polycystic kidney disease. which in time would have killed him if not for Natasha who falls in love with the Christopher’s loving soul and finds herself as a match to donate one of her own kidneys to save his life. When Angelo meets Natasha he is cold and hurtful , Natasha in turn gives him a piece of her mind. Hands on her hips her eyes spitting fire she tells him off then walks away leaving Angelo to reflect on her words and the beautiful woman that Saved his son and made him whole once again.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4521
Read Count: 11988
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yep enjoyed enjoyed enjoyed! Loved it so much that I keep checking back... pretty please update...



Author's Response:

 thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ooohhhh will there be an update soon... sparks are flying and I'm bouncing around waiting to see Docs reaction to Mr Salvatore...



Author's Response:

 thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ohhhhh... wish it was longer... looks like there's gonna be some major sparks flyin around... can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

lol thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13 2011

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Summary:

banner

 

Can a chance meeting at an airport, a wedding, family and friends bring about love lost? Possibly, Maybe?

a romantic comedy

Banner by me.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 33261
Read Count: 48256
Published: December 27 2010
Updated: May 03 2012


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six

More please...



Author's Response:

There is now more! Thanks for reading and the review! I appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:  banner

In the left corner is Tanya Rodriguez, a woman that has it all. A great business, the best friend in the world and a mother and father who love their baby girl. But the one thing she's always wanted but never had is love. True love.

In the right corner is Jaycee Cristoforo. He's at the top of his profession as a sports entertainer. He's sexy and with millions of adoring female fans Jaycee knows he can have nearly any woman in the world but feels he is still missing something.

When these two meet will they find what they are looking for?

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 47718
Read Count: 19329
Published: February 09 2011
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 part one

oh c'monnnnnnnnnnnnnnn I mean I'm going cross eyed here lol... love this story



Author's Response:

Sorry that you are going cross eyed lol. I'm glad you love the story and thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Just finshed reading all the chapters and this was smokin! can't wait for the next one..



Author's Response:

Glad you like all the chapters and that you enjoy them. Thank you for reading and thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15 2011

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 270]
Summary:

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Having chosen modeling over ministry, Jeremy Ferguson had often felt his father's scorn and disapproval.  Now he was coming home to visit and bringing the love of his life, Aura Vanderleigh who happens to be black.  Growing up in South Carolina, Jeremy knows what his father's reaction will be even if he is a minister!

 

The Preacher's Son is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2681
Read Count: 128911
Published: July 31 2011
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Family

It's exciting and thrilling to read that you're published! can't wait to purchase my own copy... absolutely love your work and I'm always chomping at the bit waiting for what else you have to offer - thank you for sharing you with us, especially the likes of me who are more avid readers than anything else... God bless you always..



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words and support!

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2013

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140135
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21 Road to Recovery

What more can I add (sniffing whilst wiping tears and looking at colleagues who are wonderin why the heck I'm cryin lol).. there's so much hurt in the world and for those of us priviledged to read amazing words written on this site it comes home to roost that we're not alone.

Thanx Brenda1257 for your gift of the written word by creating characters like the Seleahs & Joes, the Amaris' & Julians and all the craziness of family & friends - we are not ALONE...



Author's Response:

Didn't mean to make you go into the ugly cry on the job...

Thanks for the review.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04 2011

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

I've read this chapter with tears streaming... gone away and come back to read again and holding my breath because the tears are sure to stream again and I'm supposed to be working! I'm happy the truth has set Seleah free but sad that the truth affects the many, especially her and her son.. you're an awesome writer Brenda and I look forward to the many chapters coming (noticed many... coz just don't want it to end)...

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2011

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[Reviews - 586]
Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127261
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014


Title: ME&U

woohooooooo... i can feel the heat building! that Cayenne needs to have the smackdown brought to her what a biarch - how on the earth can women like her be given blessings such as children is beyond me... and that dude Samuel is gonna wish he didn't visit Luminensce.. well, here endeth the rants and as usual just love your writing - these characters just make you want more more and then some more fantastic!



Author's Response:

Yep...the heat is slowly building and when it reaches its breaking point! DUCK & TAKE COVER!! It's like I always say...you can pick your friends, but you can't pick your family...example: Cayenne & CoCo. Samuel will be catching more hell that he planned on giving. So glad that you loved it...Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2011

Title: ME&U

no matter how many times I roam the web for stories I always return to Chamber to check updates on the wonderful stories yet to be completed... yep even if it's on hiatus lol.. love your work and will wait with anticipation for the muse to return from that trip out in the universe...

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16 2017

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Summary:

 

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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 78021
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014


Title: Chapter 13: {Thirteen}

and so I cry... each time I return I'm amazed at what I thought I read initially to find I still find something new in your chapter - hoping that all is well with you and that you are able to find a spot in time to continue this story - you are an amazing writer!

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06 2017

Title: Chapter 1: {One}

just popped in to see if you have updated... still love re-reading your story.. I will pop in again and hope you are safe and well during Covid-19.. God bless.

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2020

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Summary:

Playboy and U.S. gold metal swimmer, Ryan Lochte had everything he wanted until he saw the one woman he couldn’t live without in teammate and arch rival Michael Phelps’ arms.  Friday Jones was not his type but he wasn’t going to leave London without making her his girl Friday.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1771
Read Count: 718
Published: August 10 2012
Updated: August 10 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wooohooooooo you can feel the electricity in the air lol

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2012

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Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108475
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

Love this story - good to read Nancy & Daniel have connected in a somewhat unexpected way... as for talking about 'sex' LMAO... I couldn't stop laughing - hardly ever hear about the father's perspective of how to approach the subject with daughters - WELL DONE! believable and endearing too...

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2014

Title: Regret

I've missed reading this... wonderful as always and looking forward to what happens next!

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01 2016

Title: Regret

Yay for the update and I was so curious too as to what would happen! God has his plan and man makes his own which of course failed in every which way.. can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2017

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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34241
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Now I'm pissed! As if Roxie wouldn't sign it! She's got so much class this will just hurt her heart the prick! good luck to Griffin...misunderstanding or not, this just takes the cake!

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23 2014

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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215322
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 28

oooohhhh unearthing family secrets here we come lol

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29 2014

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Summary:

A knight in shining armor is not always the righteous and kind-hearted man. Sometimes, he's the one that speaks his mind and uses his fists. He is not perfect but if he loves you....he loves you



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 17229
Read Count: 11383
Published: March 01 2016
Updated: December 29 2017


Title: Chapter 1: ~Chapter One...~

Thoroughly enjoying the links of all your stories... can't wait to see chaos visit Randall to stalker!

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 17 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

Natalia loves children, and she loves being a nanny. After being fired from her job, she goes in search for a new nanny job. That's when she meets Jesse Stone, the badass rockstar and his sweet daughter Sydney. Jesse makes her job harder by being an asshole, but she loves being there for Sydney. Will Natalia push through and keep being a nanny to Sydney or will she leave, causng Sydney...and Jesse to miss her?



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Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 14256
Read Count: 15251
Published: April 04 2017
Updated: July 14 2017


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Should've smacked him one once Sydney was out of the way.. douche bag!

 

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2017

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great start! can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2017

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COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 283977
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

love it!... would've loved to see that prick go to the cleaners... ah well.. he'll get his comeuppance in due course lol



Author's Response:

What I have in store for Lance will be well-deserved. ;) Keep your eyes peeled. 

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2017

Title: Chapter 2: Unsweet Beginnings

OML! she's one beautiful that sugar mama..



Author's Response:

Sanaa Lathan is the perfect choice for Sugar Mama. 

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2017

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.