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Summary:

 

 

Are you born with your demons? there with you from inception, to birth, sentient beings living inside you? or are they created through experiences, molded and fed by time, dormant yet thriving in the dark catacombs of repressed memories until they becomes too prevalent to ignore? I want to know because my demons have become my neighbors. Like pilgrims they've landed in the New world of my being, settled there long before I knew their intentions. They've consummated with my fear to create children that now feel like relatives, their lineage carved so deeply into the fibers of my being that nothing can uproot them now.


Until he comes along with his sun hot radiance and completely eclipses the flickering candle that is me. He's lucifer before the fall beautiful but the devil is in the way he looks at me. In the way he brands me with his touch and possesses my soul with just a kiss.


Cole Larsen is my beginning and my end. Protector, friend and lover, he becomes my sole religion. At his side I become fearless, in worshiping him I find myself. But nothing is forever. Moments are ephemeral. No matter how much you want them to last, time eventually catches up to you.


We ran out of time.




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2726
Read Count: 1741
Published: February 05 2015
Updated: February 05 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Alright, I don't even know where to begin Lol *deep breath* The emotion we see Audrey experience is so raw, and I can't help but adore the way you write with such a guttural tone. I'm a sucker for angst, to be quite honest. Audrey is suffering so much, and we see glimpses of her constant inner turmoil as she tries to complete mundane tasks or interacting with family. I struggle with self-harm and depression myself, so I can totally relate to the scene with the mirror. She wants to be completely invested in the conversation with Sarah, but her mental illness always finds a way to remind her that there is no escape. "...I wonder if the happiness she exudes is just a fabricated one? A façade that rivals my own? Are there secrets germinating beneath her freckled covered skin? Is she just as infested as I am?" Yaaaas, you better write! Lol Those are my favorite lines. Can't wait to meet Cole. Oh, and I couldn't click fast enough when I saw that the banner featured Simon and Alisha My favorite ship. I'll be impatiently awaiting your next update.

 

-KNOX

Reviewer: knox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2015

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