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[Reviews - 142]
Summary:

Lynne and Saul had been married for 25 years when he committed the ultimate betrayal. Lynne attempts forgiveness, but memories from her past make it hard to do that.  She loves Saul, but will she ever be able to trust him enough to take him back?  And when a new man enters her life, will she even WANT to?

 

This is a new version of the story I started earlier this month. In a comedy of errors I deleted the original version from my hard drive AND The Chamber.  I was depressed for a minute, but took it as an opportunity to re-work the story.  So here is the new, and hopefully improved, story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17066
Read Count: 75062
Published: March 19 2015
Updated: April 05 2015


Title: Chapter 1: His Betrayal

This is nice! I like stories where the couple is already together and we actually get to see how they handle the hurdles of relationships. Question, how exactly do the characters look? I haven't seen any descriptions of them in your story



Author's Response:

I will upload pics once I figure out how to do it.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: saquir19 Signed
Date: March 27 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Her mistake was underestimating his obsession with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 24639
Read Count: 40336
Published: April 23 2015
Updated: July 14 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one

Bipolar disorder often run in families so I'm wondering if there is a twist further along in the story. Ayden has it too and combined with his obsession will make this a dark twisted fairytale 

Reviewer: saquir19 Signed
Date: June 01 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

 

She's always been a safe bet. The go-to girl. No expectations, low risk.

But this time around it's getting harder not to feel sorry for herself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2034
Read Count: 2705
Published: May 05 2015
Updated: May 05 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Logan and Justin

Great introduction! Are you updating soon?

Reviewer: saquir19 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: May 14 2015

Title: Chapter 2: 01

Please continue!! 

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Date: July 29 2015

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[Reviews - 960]
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COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 284228
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

I love this story! I'm constantly refreshing the page for updates lol. Sugar needs to give Chef a chance or I'll snatch him up 😉



Author's Response:

LMAO! More updates coming! 

Reviewer: saquir19 Signed
Date: July 25 2017

Title: Chapter 8: Yummy Cake

😂😂😂😂😂 I'm crying lol! Best chapter yet. Chef has me fanning myself 



Author's Response:

Every time Chef got up close and personal with her, Sugar was like:

fainting

LMAOOOOO!

Reviewer: saquir19 Signed
Date: August 03 2017

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 118]
Summary:

 

Emmeline Carson always had a crush on Jason Bryant, but feelings would eventually change, when she became involved with his best friend. When her heart is broken, she swore off anyone who had ties to her ex—including Jason. Yet, a chance meeting leads to an embroiled love affair that is kept secret and locked away inside each other’s respective bedrooms. And although Jason and Emmeline have their own secrets, they will soon find out they aren’t the only ones.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 68048
Read Count: 13852
Published: September 08 2017
Updated: April 16 2021


Title: Chapter 7: Reunion

This is the hottest story on VC right now! You must update soon! I can’t wait! Awesome story, you have a gift

Reviewer: saquir19 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2018

Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

I hope you are fine and well. Please continue the story. Can’t wait to see what happens 

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Date: January 30 2019

Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

Please update soon! The story is too amazing to be left unfinished 

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Date: April 15 2019

Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

Please update soon!

Reviewer: saquir19 Signed
Date: March 19 2020

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Summary:

Daphne Gregory is on the run. She's looking for a place to lay low until things calm down back home. When she lands in Oklahoma, the last thing she expects to find is a friend in resident playboy Landon Phelps.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 53311
Read Count: 22109
Published: November 15 2017
Updated: October 03 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Cast Photos

Great update! Can’t wait to find out what happens next

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Date: July 02 2019

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 80]
Summary:

    Poster-Once-Time-2

 

Life as you know it can change in an instant. Every touch, every kiss, and every embrace. How do you cope when the memories fade, but the faces remain the same? Ayana has been married to her husband Jason for four years, it was love at first sight, literally. Everything isn't perfect, but Jason found a new meaning in life when he met Ayana. But what happens when Ayana forgets the warmth of his embrace?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 55661
Read Count: 12529
Published: June 07 2021
Updated: March 12 2023


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:The End

Interesting start. I'm all prepared for the future angst on both sides. I understand the husband's POV, you entered a relationship with specific goals and the betrayal of someone forcing an agenda on you. However, people change in life and thus their goals change as well. But he didn't have to be a gigantic d**k about it to her. I wished she had informed him of her desire for a baby before she deliberately got knocked up.

Cannot wait for future updates!

Reviewer: saquir19 Signed
Date: June 07 2021

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