Penname: Loop [Contact]

Real name: Annie

Member Since: May 26 2012

Membership status: Member

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Porter had been gone for while, traveling and moving on with his life. His father’s illness brings him home, but what he didn’t expect was to be drawn back in by the reason why he left—her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14802
Read Count: 11212
Published: December 28 2013
Updated: April 12 2016


Title: A Place Called Home

Love it. I'd like to read more and see where it goes :-) xxx

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

All she wanted was to live



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Horror, Psychological, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4516
Read Count: 982
Published: April 23 2014
Updated: September 28 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Evacuation Slaughter

I really like it. Good stuff, and can't wait to read on 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 164]
Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 54482
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Brilliant. Can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

The Keybearer has vanished, and the darkness is spreading beyond the rifts that connect each world. Without the Keybearer...darkness is consuming worlds without mercy...someone new must wield the Key.

Enter Ariel Rance, average college student completeing her first hectic year of college in the heart of New York City. With her best friend since childhood, Michaela Yuri, Ariel has dreamed of traveling the world to escape the constraints of everyday life. However, when an out-of-place hurricane hits NYC, Ariel's normal life takes a quick turn. 

The fate of the universe is now on this stylish 19 year-old's shoulders.



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Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Crossover, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Femslash, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 10393
Read Count: 13702
Published: July 05 2014
Updated: July 10 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Kill the Stars

Ok so I love & I'm a huge fan of Kingdom Hearts! And I'm so surprised someone is making/writing a story based around it, and I have to say that I really really like it so far. And it is very well written. So please continue :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I reall appreciate it, and don't worry, I'm working on the next couple of chapters as we speak :D

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

 

Nobu was comfortbale with just being a teacher in the rural mountains. But with an addition to the alumni and the sudden disappearance of his students,detective might be his new occupation.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3878
Read Count: 1191
Published: September 08 2014
Updated: September 22 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really really good. A mixture of  mystery, murder and romance. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2014

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:


"Why do you wear those wings all of the time?"

"What wings?"

August 1, 2007. A week before the start of sophomore year. Virginia Nez was murdered in cold blood and everyone totally thinks Solomon Dinétsfósí, the school's pariah, did it. It's so easy to blame the boy for it, too. He's tall, wears black all of the time, and always seems to be stuck in his head. Always. Weird daydreams and visions have plagued him since his dad's accident and they only seem to increase as he ages. He's in love with Emily Davis who is the opposite of him and what he's known; blonde, blue-eyed, and all around perfect in his eyes, who's never even spoken to him. Outside of Spanish class, of course.

Life, at the very least, is grim to the Navajo boy in black who's only friend is his ball python, Smiley. When a young stranger pops in and literally crashlands into his life and the life of everyone else in his Arizona town, he can't help but notice those wings that only he can see.

Strange things begin to happen. His visions become prophecies. People die. People rise from the dead. People turn into fox spirits and other scary spirtual things. And all of this starts right after she shows up. And with her, he's going to have to get to the bottom of the strangeness that seems to glower over his hometown like a rain cloud.

"So, why do you have those wings?"

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6961
Read Count: 13119
Published: September 17 2014
Updated: September 17 2014


Title: Chapter 4: chapter 3 - the girl with the purple hair

I really like this. Makeda is a mystery and Solomon too. Looking forward to reading more. Thank you

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

 

 

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Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 14449
Read Count: 16600
Published: November 08 2014
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 11: In two's

So glad your back!! Loving it, can't wait to read more :-)

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

He was stuck, having a midlife crisis before the ripe age of fifty. But then he met her. And she became much more than life. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 29164
Read Count: 30443
Published: November 28 2014
Updated: March 13 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow. Ok so I've been reading since the first chapter and I've got to say that this is amazing!! I love the pacing and the characters but also how you've written the story. It's like (don't know if this is true) you've been through a divorce etc and you're bringing it out on here. Anyway thanks for posting this and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Ken & Jamica takes things slow 😜 10/10

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Clark E. has always been the mysterious one out of all of his friends. With a new company on the rise and heartbreak in his past he has many doubts about women. Taking a chance and from the suggestion of his good friend he goes online and starts a romance with Katrina.

Katrina is the ugly duckling that has been named in her family. Living in the shadows of her older sister and cousin she becomes closed off from the outside world. Her only escape is the internet that gives her confidence. She makes a fake profile pretending to be someone else but then starts to develop feelings for Clark.

What happens when these two get to meet in the real world?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 8175
Read Count: 13733
Published: May 23 2015
Updated: August 03 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Sound Familiar

Haha oh brilliant! What are the odds that they work in the same building?!? 

Poor Kat, panic attacks aren't nice and that her cousin and sister were the triggers. I hope she just takes the time to breathe and relax. 

How long will it be till Clark figures out that Kat isn't who he think she is??? I can't wait for that to happen but I'm also looking forward to the build up to it. 

Keep it coming!!!!

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 200]
Summary:

Nathaniel Hendricks lived alone in his lakehouse on Lake Michigan spending his days remebering the young son he tracgically lost and the wife who left him when he needed her the most. The only thing that kept him remotely happy was the lake he lived by boating and fishing. He already failed as a father and a husband so why would God give him another chance?

Eden Wilson spent most of her life running from abuse and now as a young adult she finds herself running from an obsessive abusive ex-boyfriend. Not wanting the child she's carrying to be in danger she spends most of her pregancy running until she tries to get in contact with her uncle for help. Eden finds herself with her uncle's friend a lonely handsome man Nathaniel who gives her shelter in a snowstorm. 

Little did either of them know how close the baby would bring them together or how much this little bundle of joy would help them learn about secound chances.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 28561
Read Count: 37469
Published: June 16 2015
Updated: June 14 2016


Title: Chapter 8: JANUARY 30TH 1990

I love it!! Another great tale from you. This chapter was good, you can kinda tell that they're starting to bond, all three of them. Can't wait to read more :-)

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20 2015

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[Reviews - 765]
Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78672
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - T.M.I. (Revised)

Love it. After reading love, god and ultimatums I quickly stared reading this. Love how both characters haven't rushed into anything yet and aare taking their time getting to know one another. Diya makes me laugh with her odd lines and Brandon...gosh I want a Brandon just like him for myself. Will be reading on and looking forward to more. Ta 😊



Author's Response:

Thanks Ta!!!  So glad you're enjoying the story so far.  

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22 2015

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - [Bran]ded

Love it!!! Literally read all the chapters and just had to leave a comment. Love Diya and Brandon. Gosh I want a guy like Brandon but hey-ho lol. Can't wait to find out what happens from this point on. I'm hoping they stay strong whatever happens



Author's Response:

Someday your Brandon will come : )  Thanks SO much for taking the time to leave a review, Loop.  Reads are great, but reviews are what make the work of editing seem worth it and keeps me excited about posting.

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13 2016

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 82]
Summary:

With the help of her boyfriend, Luciana embarks on a new adventure in Madrid working as an au-pair. With this move, it forces the previously horribly insecure and low esteemed Luciana to be pushed outside her comfort zone and reach a new awareness of herself. But by doing so she must deal with the consequences of a long-distance relationship and possibly heartbreak...
Miss.Carter can't have it all or can she?

For anyone who feels unworthy of good things - this is for you.

Please be aware that this story is a sequel of the first book, "The Untitled Girl" which is available for purchase on Amazon.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Spritualism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 40843
Read Count: 76008
Published: August 30 2015
Updated: May 11 2017


Title: Chapter 5: --5--

I had to do a serious catch up!! Still loving Lucy and Angelo, but I feel as though they may be slowly drifting apart? Maybe that would be a good thing...it will give lucy time to grow, travel and find herself. And Angelo could concentrate more on his studies etc. But I doubt that the both of them will part. Whatever happens I'm looking forward to finding out 😊



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, I'm sorry I never replied to you feel really bad. Thanks for reading though :-)

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04 2015

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Sometimes hurting the person you love is easier than showing them love, especially when you're hurting inside.

Saint-Luc and Naomi Adebayo-Roux aren't any different.

This is their story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 46514
Read Count: 376057
Published: October 14 2015
Updated: July 15 2017


Title: Chapter 11: 11.

I had to do a serious catch up here haha. Saint and Naomi need to sit down and have a good talk. I think they need to get to know each much better and then their love will blossom :-)

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 316]
Summary:

It's gonna be a bumpy road!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 31436
Read Count: 43009
Published: February 08 2016
Updated: March 05 2016


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love it!!! Read it all in one go. Ruben is so blind. He's being played by Gerrie and Hillary, I had a feeling something like that would happen. Hopefully something will click and he'll realise what's going on. I also think he's slowly developing feelings for Amelle. Can't wait to read more

 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20 2016

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Just a short drabble based on a song.



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 763
Read Count: 2879
Published: February 25 2016
Updated: February 25 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really good. Jeeze it's really hard going through a break up and bumping into an ex finding out they're with someone new and you're on your own. I really liked reading this it got to me!! Thank you

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.