Penname: Acdromance [Contact]

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Member Since: August 03 2012

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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288947
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 23: QUESTION

Well first thing first you can't go asking questions right here because that's just  plain mean because I was all extra excited about an update when I saw this in most recent.I'm just kidding.This story is one of my faves.  But getting to the question of course we would love to hear from Henry. I really want to know why he runs so hot and cold. Can't wait for an update.

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Date: January 26 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18 pt 3

You converted me in this chapter.. There are moments when I want to throttle Valerie and Henry.  but the vulnerabilty that flows between them is beautiful. I'm not even sure if they are right for each other but they fit for right now. Henry's love for his family is sweet and only endears him further to me but this thing will falling off the planet after mind blowing orgasms.mhmm let me really think about this why is Valerie mad again. Every time he pops up she pops off but I digress. I absolutely loved the emotion in this chapter and I was pleasantly surprised when Valerie found her voice for Henry's sister and  didn't succumb to  her unhealthy habits. She is growing into herself. Loved it.

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Date: January 25 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Oh she needs to really go to intensive the two and possiblly limit her contact with her parents if she is ever going to get better. I am worried about Henry's model loving butt though, hie seemed awe struck with Rhea which makes me nervous some habits are hard to break.

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Date: January 12 2014

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

I love Henry but I worried about his nomadic ways.

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Date: December 31 2013

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 FULL

Loved it. 

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Date: December 30 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Ohh Henry. I love him sensitive yet take charge. It's good that Val us starting to step out of her box and go after what she wants. 

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Date: October 06 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I love this story. I feel bad that she has so many body issues but that's real life. Not everybody is running around flawless. Henry is so sweet and the perfect mix of fun and sexy. Great update,

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Date: October 03 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

How could I have missed ths little gem. Ahh I hope her self esteem grows.

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Date: July 17 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I want so bad fr er to she'd some of her insecurity. Is it mostly based on her fathers coldness? I know the ex did a number on her. I need the details.

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Date: July 18 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

So cute. I love Henry. I too love the good guy.

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Date: July 18 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I love this story. I.really hope he is not going to hurt her.she has had a time of it.  She needs to enjpy the momemt.She.is so gullible thinking Savannah was genuine. I already loving Henry

 

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Date: July 18 2013

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19

This was a really good update but I'm this close to being over Henry. I get it that he has gone through some thing but so has everyone else it called living and he needs to go about getting over it before he loses his girl. Oh I'm so happy val is going to be on. Someone couch soon because she needs to release all that pent up hurt and pain to get on with her life regardless if Henry is in it. I can't believe he really had the gall to bring up what she said to him during sex at a party.  He should have gotten smacked for that. But I still am team Henry and Val. Rant over.

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Date: April 16 2014

Rated: All Ages
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Summary:

Evangeline Jones is a 26-year-old African American woman who is independent and beautiful. Coming out of starbucks with her morning coffee she bumps into some very broad shoulders, she continuously say's sorry without looking up at "broad shoulders" and when she finally looks up she sees the most handsome man she's ever laid eyes on. The only issue is that.....he's white.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 2096
Read Count: 20400
Published: May 12 2013
Updated: March 30 2014


Title: Chapter 3: The Call?

Hi Pot I'm Kettle. I have grammar issues as well so I won't even go there but there is something missing. Maybe if you increased the length of the chapters to give them a bit more meat but glimpses could be what your going for. 



Author's Response:

Hi! The pot kettle thing made me laugh lol! more meat?

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Date: May 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53960
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Baby Named Justice

Wow. Ophelia is dead I never saw that coming. I feel like Bennie was robbed of a real relationship with his mom. I am so. Happy Bennie finally got some. Keisha is funny. I am on the fence with Alicia she is so aggressive.great update.



Author's Response:

Bennie and Ophelia kind of made up when she called him for help after Raymond got sick.  When Raymond got outed by Margie, they were even closer.  As for Alicia, she is aggressive but more of that story is coming also.  Thanks for the review.

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Date: June 13 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Facts

Good start. Im  not mad at him that is a biig pill to swallow. Cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Yes, it was a bit much for Bennie.  He doesn't know how to feel about all this.  More is coming.

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Date: May 15 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Learning and Coping

I only got one thing to say MORE!  Omg his uncle/ father is the devil. How is he going to reconcile this. I mean that's too much of a burden for a young man to take. 

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Date: May 17 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A Method to the Madness

I think Ophelia is on the crazy train but apparently I've boarded with her.

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Date: May 30 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Playing With Fire

oh i hope he dies but i dobt yjink youll ve so kind. I officialky live Keisha.  She is so feisty. I am so mad that Ophelis chose revenge over her son. 

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Date: May 30 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Moving Forward...Moving Backward

I am pretty sure Ophelia and Raymond made me throw up in my mouth a little bit. This was interesting.



Author's Response:

Go rinse your mouth out.  LOL  Ophelia is not as gullible as she looks.  More is coming!

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Date: May 29 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

For Jamie Watson, raising Alex was supposed to be a short time gig, a means to an end before starting her new life. But with it brings a type of love she never could have imagined with Alex's father Mitch. While caring for him brings them together, will doing what's best for him tear them apart? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20139
Read Count: 54924
Published: May 20 2013
Updated: October 25 2013


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I really enjoy this storyline. I love how insightful his parents are and they are not  cock blocking.  Good update.

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Date: October 25 2013

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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Summary:

Living with Reese has never been an easy thing. Ryan Snowcollar, caught, quite literally, red handed and kicked out of his home, takes comfort in the nearby lake.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2592
Read Count: 1774
Published: May 20 2013
Updated: May 20 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was hot and primal. Loved it

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Date: May 28 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196751
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I like this story but I'm over him. Dmitri  is pathetic it took 3 years for him to decide she is what he wanted only after seeing her. So if she never conveniently was dropped in his lap he would never have pursued her. Wow I feel the undying love. He is a miserable man who is looking for someone to idolize him and she fits the bill right now. She should have sat down took out her phone and stalked a cab. He isn't groveling he has disrespected her and humiliated her a million times and after three years sends flowers. Team Carter all the way sometimes the girl should actually pick the guy who deserves her.

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Date: February 17 2014

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Keep Dmitri humble. I still dont like himbut he is wearing me down. However I really hope that you even allude to his sisters readiness for recovery. Oddly enough I have been Dmitri and you cant want it more than the person suffering from the illness. Thsts why I felt his excuse was just that because unless she was ready to get help and change all the sacrifice in the world wont change things. And unfortunately relapses are very common so I hope he proves that he is ready for the long haul and not going to bail when his family has a crisis. I hope this new info helps her heal for Sasha. If Dmitri benefits good for him.

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Date: May 27 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

She should run to the nearest exit. He only began pursuing her when she fell in his lap and his reason is his sisters well being. So whose to say if his sister has a set back he won't press pause again. That excuse is lame at best. If she has blossomed the way it seems I hope she either makes him prove himself or moves on. 



Author's Response:

Hello! Thank you for your review! You brought up some points I think many other readers may be feeling so I thought it best to reply. Bulimia and anorexia are very serious diseases  and putting aside three years to ensure Nadia's safety isn't a lame excuse, he is just trying to be truthful. And I think you should consider the following: how could he genuinely and whole-heartedly try to win Sasha back if the problem that tore them apart is still an issue? Dmitri wasn't simply thinking of himself but what was best for both Sasha and Nadia. Nadia needed her older brother, one of the only people she feels connected to in order to begin healing, and Sasha needed time to find herself and become a stronger and more independent woman. I don't want to give anything away but I will say that his pursuit of Sasha didn't start at the networking event. I hope you keep reading! And thanks again for your comments!

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Date: May 07 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

AJ is your your average teenager living in this day and age. Little bit of drugs, some drinking, and a whole lot of sex. But waking up one Saturday to someone making a ruckus outside your apartment door, you don't expect to open it and find the one you regret staring back at you. Along with a carseat containing a baby she claims is yours.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20867
Read Count: 12206
Published: June 20 2013
Updated: September 24 2013


Title: Chapter 5: 4 Months Later

Wow. I read the first chapter and debated whether I would continue with this story. I was just so horrified by their evil mother. But I really want to see if these young men can overcome the insurmountable odds that they face. This is a very good story just more gritty than I normally read but Im in it for the long haul.



Author's Response:

Do it! Keep reading! i totally love your stories but i'm never logged in when i read them, which is a total sin. Life is not easy for the Babichev siblings. Hopefully love will make it bearable, ;)

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Date: July 01 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.