I love and am truly enjoying this story. I hope Jeremy.

I hope Jeremy backs out of the wedding especially with Jade not being honest about not being able to conceive and because he is IN LOVE with Shenai.

I understand Jade will be hurt deeply but chica "He just not that into you"

I wouldn't be surprised if our girl ended up in the family way herself since they were getting the get on without anyone's protection in site.

Shenai girl go for your man...you both love each other desperately.

Great update hope to get more soon.

Happy writing!

Ugggh! What is that wench Jade up to now.  I hope she is not thinking about trying to take Shenai's babies away from her.  And she is so trifling anyway.  She knew from jump that Jer did not really love her in that sense but she kept hanging on anyway and I blame Jer 100% because he did not have the balls to go after who he really wanted and let his father in his head.  I know he loved and respected the man but like Jerimah said he is DEAD what he gone do come back from the grave just so he can live Jer's life for him by keeping him from the woman he truly wants and love.

Shenai is trying to move on with her life with Javed or so she thinks anyway and I am happy to see that Jerimah is finally getting off that Shenai trail but what if it's true as to what they both were thinking and I am sure a few others have thought hey I know at least some of us have seen Maury enough to know that its possible right.

As for as whom I want to see Shenai with at this time the verdict is still out between Jer and Javed but I can't see Jer getting his head out of his ass long enough to see the forest for the trees and all that jazz.

I don't want Javed to get hurt anymore then he already has with dealing with Shenai and "her" twins.  That female got them all twisted I wouldn't want to be in that cluster f#*k for all the china in China.  Nor would I want to be the author of this cluster b/c she is doing a way better job then I would have done.

Thank you for the update.  Can't wait to see what moms Mariah's reaction is going to be to know she has twin grandbabies on the way.

Great update. Some of us big girls can't take a compliment with a grain of salt and will degrade and put down ourself every time.  It's just something we're not use to and think that when we do get that compliment and it is sincere we don't recognize it or we think that there is something behind it.  That is my girl Nita she just can't help it.  I hope she thinks about it long and hard but not to long and gets back to Marcio like she said she did not get in negative feeling from him and like she does with her job and listens to her gut she should do so with Marcio he genuiely likes you girl go for it and be happy.

It's said to hear about the baby Maryann and I feel sorry for Mrs. Phillips but she needs to understand that it was her daughter that put your all in the situation and child services had to step in for the welfare of Maryann and if she has custody of her the mother her daughter would still have access to her. Where were you at when your daughter was pregnant with her?

Sean is so nasty and so so hooked on his woman he was not lying when he said he was not letting her out of his site or his bed that day.  LOL! You go boy love your woman.

Okay it would seem that we have love interest for the crew all except one our bimbo of the click Twana but got to love her she just needs the right man to put her in check :D.

Great update.  I hope the next one comes soon.

Thank you,

Happy writing

That was a cute and romantic first chapter.

I am truly enjoying this story already.

1 because it stars big girls and we need love too.

2 because I already see the bond between the 5 women and it is close and indearing and we all know part of each woman's personality already.

Please continue the story and I can't wait to read the rest of what you have in store for us and them.

Thank you for sharing!

Happy writing!

Thank you for the update I've missed this story but I understand that life can be very eventful.

Happy Holidays.

Happy writing

Great update! I want more I hope the muse is back in full force now that it has taken a break.  :D

Thank you for the update.

Happy writing and Happy Holidays!!!

Great update! Great story.  I can't wait til she gets to NY she needs a break from her "family".

I was trying to give Blue the benefit of the doubt when he first came in the kitchen but he blew that all the hell after continuing to talk.  Card is still on the hit list and now finding out that Shon and the brothers' were friends from the jump. I can't believe that her own brothers' can't seem to support her in anything concerning herself and why wasn't they there more for THEIR father and she sacrificed her higher education to take care of their father all by herself but they were with hands out when he passed.

Ahhhh! So it's Dove that could not have children bummer but I suppose it is for the best since she is with vanilla boy.

Thank you for sharing...I need more please :D

Happy writing!

Interesting....I am waiting to see what you have in store for us.

Thank you for taking a chance and sharing your writing.

Happy writing!

That was awesome she had him eating out the palm of her hands.  Barnes sound fine as all get out hmmmm interesting.

I wish she would get rid of the dipwad that is called her husband.

Thank you

Happy writing I so need more

Marvelous!

Thank you

That was hott 2 death I was so hoping she did not change her mind

I don't want her to go back to the asswipe her husband unfortuntely, Shon he is just ugggh!

Why is it such a big deal for him (Xavier) to tell her about the tv show based on her stories along with other erotic writers.  She could be getting paid get a divorce from loser boy who is stuck on himself and move to NY.

All the proceeds from her writing would never see Shon grubby hands since he did not support her at all on her career choice.

Loving the story.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.