LOL! LOL! Rachel is so good she had him going and fell right into her trap.  Mother's are so good I use the guilt trip on my boys every once in a while and it always works in my favor.  LOL!!!!

Hmmmmm I didn't realize Emerson the 3rd was so young.....cute looking nerd too.

This story is so heartwarming...I was cheesing so hard there in some places.

LOL!

*Smile* I enjoyed the first chapter can't wait to read the rest of the story.

Christian hmmm but has so much hate in  your heart.

Great if only she could give Marco a chance and get Blake out of her system.

Well Well it would seem that we have a married man that is not longer if ever is happy with his marriage and Ms. Leslie has caught Mr. Blake's attention.

Lesile on the other hand has found Mr. Blake interesting and does not know he is married and did not pay attention to the interest mother when she was tell her about her family.

Like the start can't wait to see what you have for us.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

Yes, I was shocked about Luke's piercing he just seems so straight laced piercing just didn't seem to go with his dominating side to me but I am definitely learning a lot more about Mr. L Spaulding and I like I like =)

True Mina has not lived she is only 18 so her experience with men is very limited but as I have said before she is very mature for her age and very determined to get what she wants and I feel she strongly knows her mind and heart but hey that is just my opinion I could be reading it all wrong or to much into it.

You're right what mother would want to sign her daughter up for an unvanilla adventure in the dom world especially one that does not know about such things but then again Mina may just be into that and not know it yet.  I like Christina she is a ferious mom to reckon with and she has wanted to bond with Mina since day one and felt that she failed in that area with not knowing what Mina heard from Luke and Randall not understanding it was not because they did not want her but because Luke wanted her as his.

I hope u r able to give us a short chapter later on I look forward to it.

Oh I love Sean Bean good choice as the father.  As for the for the brother I  would think you have Michael Stonebridge playing as Gabe ;)

Happy writing!

LOL! I love it what can I say.

I hate that Christina is gunning out for L and M's relationship she does not want it but she should look at it this way. Mina has always been mature for her age. Mina as she said before has some of the Spaulding ways. Mina and Luke could give her grandchild and she could be her daughter officially that way after their marriage. Mina knows her own mine and can put Luke in check. Mina has the ability to calm Luke down when he get's a hot head some what. Mina has power of Luke cause she has his heart. And last but no least as she said while looking at them at the party Luke is the happiest she has seen him.

Mina's vajayjay is decorated I wonder how Luke feels about that someone else seeing his woman's lady parts. Shoot I was more shocked to see that Luke's nipples were pierced.

Okay I know it is way early in the game but wil this be a series my boys Mike and Gabe definitely have to have their own story.  Whoa...I just have my own view of the cast the way you have described them so when you do post the pictures I may not even view them so as not to mess up the images in my head.

Great update. Great story.

Thank you for sharing and you are so mean with the cliffhanger chica.

=)

Happy writing and more more more plz!

I am so loving this story more more more plz!

I like Luke's domaince and I like he has a reign on it. Mina is his and only his.

That skank Willa needs to get a clue he don't want you ho.

Thank you for sharing and I to was a fan of BiB,

Happy writing.

Oh my! Did u really have to stop it there really :) JK...

Great update can't wait for more.

Thank u for sharing...Happy writing.

Love and determination is a powerful thing.  I was on pins and needles when Tam said she was not going to allow him to do this to her. You go girl go and wake your man up and tell him to get his ass back to her and you baby that you both needed him.

I am so happy that Jun has come around he was truly able to see that Tam really love his son.

That was so sweet of Paula to make a memory box for her girls.  She may not have had much and have some ghetto tendencies  but she did the best she could with what she had to work with and at lest two of her girls came out alright the verdict is still out on that other one.

Don't tell me that Jules is getting tired and can't hang with my girl Mar we  are going to have to get him some vitamins....LOL!!! She draining him.

This was definitely a relief update I know if it was for me it definitely was for Tam or will be when she finds out her big baby has come out of his coma and it was all because he her her cry for him to keep his promise,  So far it does not sound like he has any brain damage either.  They say the mind is a complex organ they have surely never lied.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

More chica more!

Happy writing

LOL!  When will Tam learn yes you a big girl but Daniel son is an Alpha male and yes maybe a bit bipolor but he is your man and very possessive I don't know why u think that little stunt you pulled was going to fly over well.

So Daniel has always had the love of chocolate and his girlfriend was black that cheated on him before.  Now I know Jun is just protective of his son but he needs to but out and not be so judgemental when he does not know the full situation and it's not his business his son is a GROWN ASS MAN.

My girl Marri has released the freak that is what dick will do for you though.

I can't wait to see Julian reaction when he meets Amar family

Thank you....

Happy writing I need more please.

Tsk! Come on Daniel now you just need to get a grip. She already told you she did not cheat and if she wanted someone else you would have been gone a long time ago after she got the sexual satisfaction you so think she needs from every tom dick and harry.  You so insecure that you are not evening setting back and listening NOT HEARING but listening to what she has to say. Daniel is beginning to work my nerves if he is not man enough to love, respect and cherish Tam then she is right he does not deserve her or the baby but if she is pregnant she needs to tell him and let the chip fall where they may but not 4 only the child should he try to be with her out of obligation but because he loves her and can trust her and hell himself for that matter.  IMO when Daniel finds out the truth about Damaris...Tam should make his ass work for getting her back like he made her fall in love with him b4 he gave her the loving.

Well Jean is going to tip a cow when she finds out that Jules asked Marri to marry him and she accepted but hey she will definitely get over it.  I wonder how Mari will feel though when and if she finds out that Jules had her investigated.  Now Jules needs to meet her family.  Sheleah has some nerves though and sounds like a selfish twit how she going to send her child to a city that he knows nothing about penniless and hungry.  They too had the opprotunity to make something of themself but chose to have babies and now that Mari is making it and has the means they are milking it like she is a cash cow well from what I see of Sheleah anyway.

Okay sorry, I am going to cut it off right here. I said I was not going to right a book this review but it would seem as usual I have gotten carried away. :(

Thank you for the update and sharing I need more.

Happy writing!