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Hi all I am an advit reader love all types of genres but have to say that I/R has become my most favorite for the last 3 plus years.  I have found a lot of my favorite authors are here and looking forward to reading lots of their work and finding more favorites.


 



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Good Things in a Small Package by Brenda1257
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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140135
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2 Leaving Your Comfort Zone

Daniel put Ms. Hot Bootie in check and made her slow down.  He wants all of her not some of her.

Now for Julian I don't know what to say about him with hid scary ass.  Sure the lust and attraction is there but I don't want him to hurt Amari he would be her first physical encounter with a man and she is wanton and hot for him which we all can tell from her response from him just touching and kissing her.  I can't believe he had her checked out and was snooping in her personal life by having her investigated I wonder how she would feel about that.  Yes, Amaris you have some work cut out for you chica.

Thank you for sharing and the great update.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

Julian wants to control things, but he's about to learn a valuable lesson.  Thanks for the review.

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Date: August 23 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

OMG! No wonder Seleah acts the way she does she was trumatized and by a man that was suppose to be a man of God.

Seleah should have told her mother she would have believed her but when you're a child and you have trust in someone and they betray that trust especially someone in his position it's hard to comprehend when you're a child and believe and have faith.

Seleah needs cousnelling and Joseph has an interest their and she him but she so hurt that she can't see the forest for the trees.

Dem needs to know to his true parentage and get counselling as well because I can only image that is going to be hard on him.

Mr.  Walker got his just deserve and I hope he is suffering in brimstone now.

Thank you for the update....I need more please...

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

Hey Thundakat:  Yes Seleah should have told her mother, but she blames herself some.  Thanks for always giving me in depth reviews. they really get my juices flowing.  I'm going to get started on the next chapter tonite, but I doubt if I finish it.  12 hours a day can be a killer!  Plus I have my son's wedding on the 1st so this week and next week are going to be stressful and busy.  However, I will attempt to update at least once or twice.  Don't hate me if you don't hear from me much especially next week!

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Date: September 19 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1 The Size of Things

Loving it!

Julian has set his site on Marri I wonder will he be able 2 resist the commitment bug and her 2?

Thank u

Happy writing

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Date: August 22 2011
Title: Good Things in a Small Package

Loving the cast pics

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Date: August 22 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Awesome start.

Is Amaris mom's name Paula or Julia I saw a couple of times it being different when talking to or about her unless I miss read it.

I am happy that Amaris graduated with honors and will be going to college.

Stanley and his 2 other offspring have made Julian's life miserable to the point he trust not even women because they dumped him to go with his brothers.  I don't blame not fault Julian at all he did better then I would but I hold grudges (which I am working on). He has to put his life on hold to help someone that has treated him like snit all his life but now he needs him and is being all nice and loving and the 2 idiots hang their heads in shame what a joke.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

I need more more more.

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Date: August 22 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11 There Really Is No Place Like Home II

OMGoodness NOOOOOOOOoooooo!

Daniel know how to be persausive and get something he really want his way mmm mmm mm. :D

Amaris family well part of her family anyway is a hot tomatillo mess.  Seleah I expected but Mom come on.  I love Jullian though he took it in stride and kept it pushing :D.

Mr. Wong I don't know what to say about him hopefully he will come around when the baby comes.

The other scene I am devastated and hope that all works out in favor and blessing so much time has been wasted on mediocre things and now they were try to get it together for their love and their family they have started.  I was glad to hear Tam say she needed counselling too.

Thank you so much for my fix a very interesting development and the cliffhanger to boot.

I made it short today on my review because I think in the past I may have been giving away spoilers and I did not want 2 do that so tried to make a conscious effort not to get carried away.

Happy writing and please please please update again soon cause I did not see this development coming at all you definitely got me there.



Author's Response:

Thurndakat:  I love you long responses.  Maybe I need your email address!  LOL.

 

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Date: September 11 2011
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

LOL!  I can't wait I can't wait I can't wait. 

Daniel must have bumped his head to think that a strong blk woman would just bow down and let it go after he called her a whore and we don't react very well to the on your knees thing that is a sign of weakness in some aspects to a sista. LOL!

Happy writing and bring it missy!

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Date: September 06 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

More and more I am disliking sista girl Seleah...she is a money grubbing, jealous, trifling trick.  She can still get child support for Dem with him continuing his education heifer but even if not before the child support stopped she still had her hands out.  She had the same opprotunities afforded to her as Ameris she just lazy as hell.

:D Jay and Mark still together that is wonderful see at least the two younger sisters are making it do what it do and are with good men. :) Yeah!

Daniel couldn't take it anymore he came and got his woman even if it was 3am in the morning.  She has told him that she is pregnant I can't wait to see his reaction and Jun knowing him will probably question it but oh well get over it papa sun she having your grandbaby

Great update as always

Thank you

Happy writing...



Author's Response:

Ah, well Seleah doesn't see it that way. LOL.  Amaris knows she is lying about the child support which is why she called it and Seleah got mad!  You called Seleah lazy, but remember she has a PART TIME job at the Dollar General.  She feels that is sufficient and whatever else she needs, others need to step up to the plate.  LOL.  

 

Believe me, I've lived it!  I know of someone who charged their mother to take her to the grocery store.  Mom could not go unless she paid them gas money and then the mom would call my house asking for the money.  Then after she was taken to the store, the person who charged her would come over and help eat the food she bought.  Of course the money and food always ran out before the end of the month and these were GROWN CHILDREN doing this.  Mom just couldn't say no to them, but she could call my house asking for money to tide her over until the end of the month!

I could write a whole book on people like Amaris family.  LOL.  

Thunderkat, you are on point as always.  Thanks for the review.

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Date: September 09 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Thank you so much for my fix it was and is greatly appreciated.

I am glad to see that Danny is improving ..Tam has done a wonderful job at taking care of her man no doubt and Jun has come around.

I think though he needs to start back going to his therapist though he has something new that he has to contend with.  I am sure he is also suffering mental side effects from the attempted robbery and shooting.  The feeling of inadaquicy may be apparent with him feeling like he could not protect his wonan and unborn child and got shot plus now with the impotency to deal with on top of everythung else.  I hope it is only the medication that is causihg the problem and things will go back to normal after he has discontinued the medication.

Uggggh! Here we go with that trifling ass Seleah....I will be glad when Dem get's away from her ass good she did not rub off on him and he has to be embarrassed with how she acts and how she just going to show up unannounced and unprepare for that baby's first time on campus just selfish she could have gotten what he needed all she was concerned about was having a good time. Selfish just plain and simple and always expecting a handout,

Thank you again for my fix and sharing

More please happy writing

 

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Date: September 17 2011
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

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Author's Response:

Ah, well Seleah doesn't see it that way. LOL.  Amaris knows she is lying about the child support which is why she called it and Seleah got mad!  You called Seleah lazy, but remember she has a PART TIME job at the Dollar General.  She feels that is sufficient and whatever else she needs, others need to step up to the plate.  LOL.  

 

Believe me, I've lived it!  I know of someone who charged their mother to take her to the grocery store.  Mom could not go unless she paid them gas money and then the mom would call my house asking for the money.  Then after she was taken to the store, the person who charged her would come over and help eat the food she bought.  Of course the money and food always ran out before the end of the month and these were GROWN CHILDREN doing this.  Mom just couldn't say no to them, but she could call my house asking for money to tide her over until the end of the month!

I could write a whole book on people like Amaris family.  LOL. 

 

Thundakat: All I can do is laugh cause sad thing is I myself know a couple of people just like that and "Dollar General" come on now Brenda you and I both know they don't get that much business and the one's I always go to are clutter and stuff all over the place so it's not like the employees are zoning (cleaning up) areas in the store so Seleah more then not doing anything during the part-time she is there so I am still sticking my my lazy, trifling comment....LOL LOL LOL!  I am loving it and Julian is taken it in stride.  I know Demaris is going to be successful and the Seleah and those two other knuckle heads will add him to the list of who to try and bleed dry for monetary gain.  Amaris already said that out of the 3 of Seleah's kids Dem is the only one she likes and here I was thinkiing the other two were like older but nope the are trifling at an early age and you would think they would try and take after their brother's example but noooo they taking after their mom.  Little man would have been waking up wonder what truck hit him after whinning he did not want to clean up cause he was play the 360 pleeeeze.

Thank you.....waiting for more. LOL!  Greedy I know



Author's Response:

LOL!! Thunderkat:

Why do you think she likes working at the Dollar General???? She would never make it at the Dollar Tree.  It's much too busy!!!  LOL.  I haven't started the next chapter, but I keep thinking of my scenerio's with my family at Golden Corral and how they bring reyolds wrap and be sneaking out food!!!!  LOL  More to come soon!

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Date: September 09 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

Well sweet Joesph be careful what you pray for you might just get it. She has been dropped in your lap so to speak then again maybe not quiet yet cause you can't recognize it yet and still a bit in denial.

Seleah may believe she doesn't have faith or the strentgh to have faith any more but GOD still has faith in her and is still with her and sent both her to Joesph and him to her.  Now they need to get it together and bring all this hurt for Leah to the foreground and start healing even for Dem.

I feel so hurt and sad for Seleah she needs to talk to someone. I don't think that Amaris would be judgmental of her nor that her mother or her sisters would look at her differently or hate her though they were poor and had their own way they have always been close until that shit raped Leah. There is nothing that can be done about or to him now he took a child's life and turned it all to hell.

I take it that Bernard is one of Dem's older brothers and you know what they say about the world being small well there you have it. Who would have thought out of all the barber shops in the world he would have chosen the one his brother frequented.

All sookie sookie now....Danny had gotten his ju ju back with a little help from the little blue pill Tamara sista it's on and popping.  LOL

Thank you as always for a wonderful update.

Can't wait for more

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Thanks ThundaKat for the lengthy review.  LOL.  Don't we do that all the time?  We ask God for something, and we already have the answer all made up in our mind, but God always has better for us than we can even imagine for ourselves.  He knows just what we need.  LOL. 

Joseph's prayer has been answered, but there's always a road you have to travel first and Seleah needs something more from a man than just sex. 

Everyone would like great sex all the time, but in reality there are times when each partner may fall short in some way.  No one is good all the time except in stories (lol) so I wanted to put a bit of reality in there.  I've read stories where men have come back immediately after the first sexual encounter and I said to myself, "Hmmm, how come I always have to wait a bit for him to recover?"  LOL.  So I have to put some reality in there every now and then.  LOL

Thanks again for the review.

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Date: September 21 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21 Road to Recovery

Ah! It just keeps getting better and better.  Seleah needed that healing spirit. Dem needed that talking to and it seems our girl Tam was the one able to get through to him.

And the biggest surprise is Amar coming to visit his child for the first time.

Wonderful just wonderful update as always.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

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Date: October 05 2011
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27 More Ignorance, More Stress

It appears that the restraining order is going to have to come sooner then later for Seleah on Darrell.  How he figure he going to force Jamal to learn something he does not want to and you would think that you would want your child to be better then you but that is ignorance for you and that mofo is past ignorant he just down right dumb as hell.

How you going to break into someone's house and get upset because they have moved on and trying to live their life the best way they can you aint about nothing and have never tried to be about anything. All that has matter to Darrell is making babies that he does not take care and slanging dong....just ridiculous then he steals from his son that he so much want to teach how to survive in the streets.

I want to be written in the story just to take a bat after his trifling behind and send him back to his home behind prison but then I think he will be just getting a free meal ticket and living off the tax payers.

Patsy I am so tired of her behind too.  I hope she does not comeback and when Justine get's older he just has a talk with her about why she was not allowed to be part of her life...teach her about racist pigs such as Patsy and be cautious of them but to over look their ignorance.

Thank you Ms. B as always for a wonderful update.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

LOL Kat:  You want to be written in the story so you can beat his ass huh? Well that's a thought!  LOL

Yes, the world is full of ignorant people and Mr. Darrell is one of them.  More to come soon!

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Date: November 29 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

Great update as always. 

Tam is making Daniel work for her affection even with them still intact but he said some hurtful mess and needs to get counseling for his insecurities and the writing and telling her what was special about was a marvelous idea all on the table.  I don't really think Tam will be dating all that much though that was only to make Daniel sweat well that is imo she could see 1 or 2 men here and there just to keep him in check plus she thinks she may be pregnant so we don't want the insecure jerk to think even for a second that she was cheating sexually with someone else and got pregnant but then again that is where the trust would have to kick in again and hoping counselling will help him not to jump to conclusion which got him into the trouble in the first place.  Yes, we do need the Alpha to come back into play to cause this wimpy Daniel is not doing me any good and definitely no good for my girl Tam.

Demaris is too cute taking up for his Aunt Tam.

Ahhhhh! It's so sweet the Arrington men have made amends it's a start not perfect but definitely a start.  Julia is too cute too she don't want her mama kissing and hugging nobody but her daddy.  Justin talking about talking it over with Cathy about the house idea she didn't give him a chance to get it out his mouth good before she was thanking him....LOL!  Jean has been watching too much television and stuck in the 60s.  Yes people still stare but like Amaris said Jules is a big boy he can take care of himself but it's understandable for mom to worry that's what we do worry for our babies.

I can't wait til Jules meets the crew on Amaris side. Is Ms. Wilmington and Amaris still close?

More please....

Thank you for sharing...

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Hey Thunderkat:  You hit it right on the head.  The Alpha male is still alive.  He just had to regroup and plan his strategy, but he is not happy about her seeing other men. He really thought that if he got on his knees she'd just forgive him right off. It didn't work Daniel!  Tam really doesn't want to see anyone else and she has a few "friends" in her contacts that are just that, friends that just happen to be male.  LOL

I already have several scenes in mind when Daniel sees her out with someone else.  Then you are going to see the Alpha Male at full blast!  LOL.  She's not being mean.  She does love him, but she wants him to deal with his issues. 

Yes, Jean watches too much of reality televison.  She's seen those dating shows where the white guy is trying to date the black girl and he gets disrespected by the black men.  She's only heard and seen the drama of interracial relationships on tv and so she's worried about her baby.  It really wasn't about Amaris.  Now when Julian meets her family...OMG!  Talk about a culture shock!  LOL~

Thanks for your reviews.  Keep them coming.

Brenda

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Date: September 06 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26 Ignorance and Abstinance

I am so happy that Jamal got to see for himself how his donor is and that his teaching from Seleah has stuck because he showed himself to be a good kid just a few growing pains here and there but a good kid.  Seleah is a good mother she has done the best that she can in raising her sons with the tools that she has been handed and trials she has gone thru.  I also aprove of his slapping the taste out his mouth he maybe too big to have the belt after him but a smack upside the head aint going to hurt him.

Yeah! Amaris and Julian finally was able to get a quick one in.  Good baby Miss Justine.

I agree with Amaris Patsy means Jules and Justine no good and should be cut completely.  A few picture here and there but there has to be a reason that the crazy woman cut Patsy out of her life in the first place.

Thank you for updating.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

Hey Kat:  Yes Jamal got an eye full and an earfull  by meeting his father.  You are right.  Amaris can see right through Patsy, but Julian is just trying to be nice to her.  She needs to go on back out west where she came from.   More to come soon!

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Date: November 07 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

Jules and Amaris have opened up to each other in regards to their falling in love and already being in love with each other.  Great! Jules wants Maris to meet his family I wonder the reception to that introduction I don't think it will be that bad and if his father has negative words we all know how Jules can put him on igg mode in a minute and keep it in affect until he comes around.

Well lookie lookie here who would have though Daniel the patient and low key had it in him but when he gets fired up look out. We only saw a glimpse of it when he told Jules off but when it comes to his woman talking to another man while in his home all bets are off and that possessive aggressive and jealous side of Daniel comes out all force.  I bet Tam has that number changed though.  Daniel is so good for Tam.

Thank u 4 the update and sharing.

Happy writing

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Date: August 31 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

Well you definitely took me for a loop on the reverse responses.

Stanley was cool with Amaris and just happy to have his son back and at home but Jean she was a great disappointment to me she is a bigot and does not like or approve of Jules choice for his woman and future wifey cause he wants 2 marry her....Ahhhh that is so sweet.

Jules' destress just broke my heart yes, a lot of time has been wasted and gone by but it's not too late.  It can still be mended.

Again disappointed in Jean and don't know what to say about ole girl....hopefully she will come around and get her head out of her behind. Though I don't think that Jules would put his mom on igg mode plus Amaris wouldn't allow that anyway Jules would more then likely choose Ameris first but that is just imo.

I hope that Jules is able to help and bond with his family he has a nice and she sounds cute as a button and has another niece or nephew on the ways.

Daniel has Tam's nose wide open and she loves him to pieces yes he needs to talk to her about THEIR future marriage and babies she already thinks she is pregnant after a couple of intense sessions without protection but a woman knows her body and even some men can tell when their seed has taken root.

What's with the sour puss face at the resturant with Daniel's dad and ahhhh he doesn't trust Tam it's going to take a bit to get that full trust from him considering her background but like he said she has never lied to him and has always been up front about all and has not cheated. Daniel you don't have to worry about her getting tired of you...boo boo you stuck with her :D

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing,



Author's Response:

Thundakat:  I love reading your analysis that you give.  It's always in depth and on point.  Thanks so much for sharing.  More is coming cuz we got a long weekend!  LOL

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Date: September 02 2011
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

I love how Joe is taking time with the boys and caring for them like a man is suppose to do when he comes into a woman's life who has children.

Jamal sounds like a good kid he just needs that structure for so long there was not a male roll model unless you count Mark but I am sure he did not take that much time with Seleah kids with him having his own.  I am happy that Seleah is getting the help she needs and the love she deserves from Joe.

Now if we can get the boys to stop being so self absorbed we will have it made but what can you expect they're teenage boys that are use to getting what they won't without see who is doing without.

Well playtime is over for Jules and Mari.  Jules was gung-ho about having another child slow your roll boo you just got Justine that you haven't even gotten adjusted to and you want another already though i can understand you wanting them close to grow-up together that can still happen with them being a little further apart in age.

Great update...loved it

Thank you...Happy writing!

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Date: October 28 2011
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Author's Response: Everyone would like great sex all the time, but in reality there are times when each partner may fall short in some way.  No one is good all the time except in stories (lol) so I wanted to put a bit of reality in there.  I've read stories where men have come back immediately after the first sexual encounter and I said to myself, "Hmmm, how come I always have to wait a bit for him to recover?"  LOL.  So I have to put some reality in there every now and then.  LOL

 

Thundakat: Gurl aint that the true...say it! say it! preach sista! just experienced that recently.  Anyway Jules aint never lied when he said he created a monster.   LOL!

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Date: September 21 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

I like how Joe did not take the bait of Seleah not in that instant anyway.  He wants a relationship outside of sex and that is so what Seleah needs a relationship a loving and kind relationship with a man again she still can't see the forest for the trees but she will learn and so will Joe.

Marri love and desire herself some Jules :D

I like how Jules wants to create a bond with the boys and be that positive role model for the boys which they so need as well.

Great update on my B-day! More please.

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Happy Birthday!  Hope it's a great one.

Yes, Jules wants to have one big happy family.  He might have to play referee to Joe and Seleah, though.

Thanks for the review.

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Date: September 22 2011
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Thank you!

And I have no doubt that Jules along with Amaris will have to add referee to their list of qualities especially if it's dealing with their sister and brother Seleah and Joe and their new relationship and unknown to them it is a relationship. *Grin*

 

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Date: September 22 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17 The Truth Will Make You Free II

Yeah!!!! And we're off. God has made his delivery and Joe has accepted it.

I'm glad that Amaris was able to talk to Joe to in order to give him a bit of 411 and some background or hind site into her sister's psychy she just a little confuse well a lot of cofused and need to be lead on the right path as far as men are concern and lead back to God b/c she has known him and had faith in him until that misfortunate incedent with the pediphile Walker.

Great update as always more more more please.

Thank you!

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks Thundakat:  Yes, the courting has begun!  Seleah has never been courted by a man before, so I'm trying to think of some funny scenerios.  LOL.  More to come soon!

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Date: September 24 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Well you know how they say you should never judge a book by it's cover well I am sad to have to say that I failed that saying.  Ms. B you have definitely redeemed Seleah in my eyes.  I feel so sorry for her and hope she gets the help she deserves.

Oh my goodness!  It seems the truth about Dem's parentage is getting closer and closer.  I want the truth to come out but I don't want the pain that comes with that truth.

Joesph is such a cutie what does Seleah look like?

Thank you for a great update.

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Hey Thundakat:  See additional cast photos for a pix of Seleah.  I've been searching the internet for more, but I haven't found one that fits the Seleah in my mind.

Yeah, the truth is going to come out, and it's not going to be pretty.

 

More to come soon!

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Date: September 25 2011
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Thank you! I forgot you had already posted Leah's pic. Durn I kmow the truth must be revealed so the healing can begin but...but....the pain it's going to cause.  Paula thinking she failed her daughter after all she did to try and prevent just that thing happening, Jaylyn and Marri fining out that she sacrificed herself to save them. Dem finding out that that the man that he has known as his father is not but a pedophile that was suppose to be a man of God.  I just can't believe though that Leah was his first and only victim though and that Ms. Walker did not know his dirty deeds.  Mmm Mmm Mmm well enough of my rambling.

Again thank you



Author's Response:

I enjoy your rambing Thundakat!  Yes, it's all about to be blown wide open with a couple more surprises...

 

 

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Date: September 25 2011
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Girl you have me on the edge of my seat now with that last comment about a couple more surprises....this story just gets better and better.

I will try to stay out of stalker mode but girl with tidbits like that it's going to be hard will try to go play Sims3 until the next update.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: September 25 2011

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