Penname: Thundakat [Contact]

Real name: Stephanie

Member Since: December 11 2008

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Hi all I am an advit reader love all types of genres but have to say that I/R has become my most favorite for the last 3 plus years.  I have found a lot of my favorite authors are here and looking forward to reading lots of their work and finding more favorites.


 



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Good Things in a Small Package by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140135
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Ahhh! The truth has finally surfaced and what in the world was Bernard thinking when he thought he could pay her off to keep that secret. Leah needed to purge that vile like Amaris did all on the kitchen floor.

Like Paula said Mrs. Walker had to suspect that he was doing something but turned a blind eye and Dem may not be the only prodoct of his betrayal. The man was sick beyond what I intially thought to to go after a child because your son was interested in her WTH!?!

Joesph is correct they need to get some couseling. Joe asked Leah to marry him, I like that but again I am like Leah, he is still in school and he lives with his brother in another state mind you.

All of Leah's encounters have been practically forced on her Joe was the first feel good and sista girl was about 2 hac the big O but with never having one she thoght she had 2 go.

Dem poor baby was and is so hurt> He needs 2 stop thinking he is like the pedophile that sired him it's not a disease that is herditary baby it can't be passed down to your offspring. He needs time and I hope he will forgive his mom for not telling him and his father Gerald as well.

Thank you for the update. Patiently waiting for more.

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Thundakat.

Joseph asked Seleah to marry him to let her know that he is seriously committed to their relationship. 
They are not going to run off an elope, however.  LOL.

Dem is hurting, but he just needs some time to take in all that he has learned.  He will be alright.  Next chapter, he will have a conversation with Gerald Jackson and hear his side of the story.

More is coming soon.

P.S.  Wedding week is here and I doubt if I will write anything after Thursday.  I will probably resume either that Sunday or Monday.  I pray the weather is good cuz it's an outdoor wedding, though they have a backup!

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Date: September 26 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20 Rebuilding After The Storm

My my my! Imagine the surprise I received when I saw this lovely update.  And here I was prepared to be patient and wait and think that I wouldn't get one until this weekend or next week with all the stuff going on for you this week Ms. B.

It was a delight and pleasure as always.  I am happy to see that Leah got her first of many to come orgasms with her husband to be.  Now if only she could be patient and not think with that tic for tac mentality she will be good.  Joe is trying so hard to do right by her and God and she is making it hard on the man.  He is only man and can take so much temptation before he caves you see what happened after her begging the flesh is week.  It is good they will all be going to chruch she need to reclaim her spiritual and intimate bond again with God and her faith...unknowingly she let that monster take that away from her to so not only physically defiled her but mentally and emotionally as well.

Amaris now feels that she was also defiled and that may not be the cause.  She could have broken her hyman a number of ways and not know it that may be the reason she did not hurt or bleed when she used the vibrator for the first time but she does along with all the rest need to seek couselling to rest her mind.

Dem is hurting right now and lashing out...but like his DAD said he needs not turn on the ones that are there and love him.  Yes, it's going to be hard getting to know who he is and his family on that monsters side but I feel he is a strong kid along with a strong family and again this is where the couselling will have to come in to help cope and get over this tribulation.

As always thank you for sharing and I see that you have what I have not doubt another goodie in store for us in the way of "In The Eyes of the Beholder" which I am off to read now.

Happy writing.

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Date: September 29 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22 My Past, Your Past, Our Future

OMG! This was a wonderful update! This story is wonderful so you should already know that the chapter was.  I just had to state it again.

Amaris met her father I wish there was some way he and her mother could be together again since he is no longer married and Paula is technically his first wife and out of all the men that she was and has been with she was in love with Amar but due to circumstances he had to leave the county because he couldn't afford to stay and he had family back home.  Ameris has two sisters and 3 brothers way to go chica.  She just needs to met her brothers and the rest of her family now.  I am happy that Amar does not have any negativity towards Amaris marrying Julian the visit turned out well and he is there for a couple of more days for them to bond woohooooo!

Julian is about to be a father by a psycho DAMN! DAMN! DAMN! Can you say the drama just keeps coming.  That heffa saved the condoms then artificually inseminated herself. WTF!?  I keep hoping and praying that by some chance this is a fluke that it's not Julian's that this can't be happening but unless sista girl has been bumping uglies and fluffing the sheets with someone else it's a possiblity that it is his.  I want her ass to go play in traffic and get hit by a bus...not while pregnant of course cause it's not the babies fault his mama is a looney but after she has the baby.  DAMN!

Okay, Ms. Debra is truly coo-coo for cocoa puffs, but Tam is her only child and she apparently loves her with all her heart she just has been blinded by sterotype and is/was feeding off that but she should give Daniel credit he can hang in there with her with his smart mouth not many can hang in there he passed the test in that regard right along with Jules when he met Amaris family.  So I hope she keeps her word and let Daniel grown on her she maybe pleasantly surprised and Daniel is not going anywhere you see he fought death just to keep his promise of not leaving Tam I know she doesn't think she will be able to get rid of him.  LOL!  That man is hooked no ifs ands about it.  He even was ready to let his father hit the streets but like Tam's mom he changed his tune too.

Ms. Brenda you do marvelous work.  Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.  Hope to see more soon.

 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat:  Amaris is in shock, but she'll recover.  She loves Julian.  Tam's mother has her own issues, but she does love her daughter.  I am sure that Daniel will win her over.  More to come soon!

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Date: October 10 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Goodness gracious.  This update was definitely interesting.

I know it's bad what happened to Kayla but it couldn't have happened to a nicer person,  I know that was wrong of me to say but God don't like ugly and the ring of Hell she lives in may not be too bad maybe.

I am glad that Amaris is there for Jules you did say she wasn't going anywhere and you were so right plus I didn't think she was anyway (going anywhere that is)

The brothers named their daughter after each other that is so sweet.  Now Amaris can still name their son after Jules.

I hated that daddy Amar had to go back home but they will be in touch and I hope either or can visit each other again her in Africa to see and meet the rest of her family and him and the boys to America to see her and her family and who knows the flame may kick back up between him and Paula....I can hope can't I? LOL!!

Well they say the apple doesn't fall too far from the tree and I have to say they are correct but Patsy doesn't seem as bad as Kayla now Kayla was one that flew over the coo-coo nest.  Mother and daughter were estranged for a year I wonder what that was all about.  I hope Patsy get's herself in check b4 she truly loses her priviledges to see Justine cause Jules has already said she has burned the bridge with him with what she said about Amaris.

Thank you so very much for updating. Until next time

Happy writing

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Date: October 17 2011
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 31 Changes and Choices

Hee-Hee Darrell got the break stole off his fool behind and it was so good, but I have to agree with Seleah slippery eels have a way of slithering out of a situation.  She still needs to file that restraining order there and in Fredericksburg. Darrell is going to be angrier then ever when he wakes up in jail.

He has some nerve though trying to make claim on a son he didn't want anything to do with and a woman that he didn't want until he found out she had moved on and didn't want his trifling ass.  I think it is going to take Darrell going to hell to get him off of Seleah's scent before it's all over.

Great updat as always.  Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing!

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Date: January 15 2012
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 32 Tell Me This Is A Dream

The ring is beautiful just right for Leah.  I want her to gain more confidence in herself and know that she is worth everything she is getting and more.  She sacrificed much and got her hussle on to survive. Joe has broken down the barrier around her heart this is her man and she deserves him.

I agree with Julian she doesn't have small children or a baby right now (that is until she has a baby for Joe) so she should try to take classes at the community college.  I was thinking the same thing.

Loved the chapter glad I was finally able to catch up been preoccupied as of late.

Thank you....Mpre please.

Happy writing.

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Date: March 09 2012
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 34 One Big Happy Family

This was a great update as always and long to just like I like them.

Patsy needs her a$$ kicked the thrown in jail and have it kicked some more.

We got babies on the way yee-haw!

I can't wait til the next update I'm on pins and needles.

Happy writing

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Date: November 29 2012
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 35 Conquering Evil with Good

It's time for babies we have three coming. I'm so happy to see that Justie is back with her parents where she is suppose to be with no long lasting ill effects.

I've enjoyed this family and will be sadden to see the end of their story it's been a great journey.

Thank you Ms. B

Happy writing

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Date: December 04 2012
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Never Say Never by wisedec4u
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Tara does something she never thought she'd do, save one of the living dead. Now she's being hunted by the Authority. Eric is the only one who can protect her-that's if she agrees to give him what he wants in return.

Takes place during S4E9 Let's Get Out of Here. JUICY LEMONS! Tara/Eric with a little Sam/Tara and Alcide/Tara flirting on the side (just because I can't resist a little Tam and Talcide)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge, Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76043
Read Count: 48325
Published: August 28 2011
Updated: September 08 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Stop the Bitch

Enjoyed the first chapter and can't wait to see what else you have for us.

Thank you for sharing

Happy writing.

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Date: September 10 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Don't Kill the Messenger

I can't stand that hookah Nan she be ODing for real though.  I am still trying to figure out how she is the spokes person it's ridiculous how she has her head up her behind all the time.

Tara got a spark from Eric oh well Sookie it would seem you are being replaced which is good cause I can't stand your ass anyway. 

Great update want more more more.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

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Date: September 10 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Body Language

Oh my Tara and Eric about to get their freak on.  Then that damn cliff hanger came into effect.

Great shower scene she should have known she was calling him...but she is learning.  I have wanted Tara and Eric to be together forever on Trueblood but they always got that damn sookie with every man in Bon Temps well every fine ass man that is except Jason cause that's just really back woods southern (ewwwww)

Great update i need more....

Happy writing.

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Date: July 08 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Special Delivery

(((CLAPPING))) I wonder what other then the blood the food was tainted with.

Alcide has a crush on Tara interesting....

(SMILE) Eric loves Tara who'd thunk it.  (SMILE)

Thank you for the update and thank you for sharing your imagination.

Happy writing hope to see another update soon.

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Date: September 04 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Family Ties

This was a long and beautiful update thank you so much.

Yeah!!!! Tara is pregnant for Eric who'da thunk it I am so excited I will be glad when the two of them realize it for themselves but I know this will only lead to more drama probably but hey I am all geared up and ready for it.

Eric has warmth and a heartbeat when he is with Tara she is truly his soulmate, his sacred heart of Anubis again who'da thunk it.

Alicide poor wolfie wants something he can not have he should have jumped on it when he could instead of sniffing behind Sookie trifling behind.  I just don't like Sookie she makes my ass itch.

Wonderful update thank you so much I can't wait til the next installment which I hope will be soon.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

My pleasure. I've been a hardcare Tamshipper for ever since True Blood started, but now I don't know.  I'm feeling Taric now big time and have really gotten into writing this story.  Alcide has become my second favorite pairing with Tara because let's face that wolf is FINE!!!!  Yes, Eric comes to life (really to life) when he's with Tara.  Of course, that's going to have ramifications, but it may be the one thing that saves their lives. I hope you'll keep reading and reviewing.

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Date: September 13 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Seek and You Shall Find Him

I know Eric said that Nora is no threat to Tara but I just don't trust her and apparently Tara or the baby doesn't either because she did not want her to touch her and the only way she could was by glamoring her.  I was pissed off at Eric about thay two and Alcide was way on point about finding other ways to convinencing her or just leaving it alone for a minute.

Again thank you for a great update

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Date: October 16 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Seek and You Shall Find Him

About time he realized that the baby was his.  I was wondering how you were going to intergrate it so that he would figure out the truth.  Well done chica well done.

Thank you for the update.  I hope to see a new one soon.

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Thanks Thundakat:

I truly appreciate it.  It means a lot coming from you.  I hope you'll keep reading and reviewing.

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Date: October 14 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Friend or Foe

I am glad both Eric and Tara are aware they made a baby together. Now I wonder what sacrifices they have to make to protect lil Eric.

I knew Mora couldn't be trusted she definitely can't hold water with her big mouth.

Good title for this chapter cause I want to know if Pam and Salome are friend are foe.

Thank u for the great update!

Happy writing!

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Date: November 04 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Univited Guests

@ this point I am confused and don't know who to trust myself. Who is friend or foe. I have never liked Norad like Eric said she is too naive and in my opinion too easily swayed more of a cooler than leader. Salome not trustworthy to me. Loving the story I can't wait to read more. Plus I have always liked Pam glad to see her and Tara have bonded.

Happy writing!

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Date: December 24 2012
ME&U by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 586]
Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127261
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3...Part I

Forgot to add Darren as part of last review....

 

I don't know what to say about Darren if this don't get him to wake up and know that Francis is trouble then he is doomed for life.  I was wishing that he was awake and could hear all of his wife's deceatful words but they have him under b/c of the pain that Mal inflicted.

 

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Darren is basically a lost cause, but we will have to see. Thanks for reading!

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Date: September 14 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3...Part I

So it would seem that nasty ass durbin and loose booty franc are brother and sister to each other and also to Coco if I am reading and understanding correctly.

I am glad you are not finished with Ginger yet she needs so much more punishment bestowed upon her and she should not only lose her husband in divorce but maternal rights over Evie allowing another better woman to be able to adopt her.  Benny has seemed to man up and know he franked up in the worst way but never anything close to that skank way of doing things and now he is will to do right and be a better father and I hope and pray a better man all around for the next true woman.

Mal and Coco were about to get it on in real life cause apparently their dreams had already made it there.

Loving the story...Thank you for sharing.

More please.

Happy writiung



Author's Response:

Yep with Durbin, Francis and CoCo it seems to be a family affair, but pay attention to everything dealing with that family of sorts. I'm not thru with Ginger by a long shot, just wanted to drop in on her for a minute. We will be checking in on her again. So glad you are loving the story. thanks for reading!

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Date: September 14 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Mal is a force to be wreckened with once he has gone from 0-60 in .2 seconds I bet Franc is green with envy that he never came to her rescue like that and Darren got his ass handed to him and just think that is just the beginning according to Mama Lundy.

Coco did try to walk away but Franc just kept on pushing it.  Darren needed his ass beat hopfully it beat some sense him but that is doubtful I don't know what that skanks twat is made of but I am sure it is not lined in gold and shooting silver or platium for him to loose his mind over Coco was just stating the facts and it's not Coco he should have been punching it should have been his wife b/c she is the one humiliating him and continuing to do so and every turn but he too blind, stupid or ignorant to take notice and fly rite.

Thank you

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Mal doesn't play, especially when it comes to CoCo. Francis was surely green with envy, she has never seen Mal go into Beast Mode. Darren will be having a long and hard road ahead of him. CoCo does try to be good, but it's like what Tabby said to Mal...she don't start mischief, it just seems to follow her. Thanks for reading!

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Date: September 14 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well Sam it would seem that your grandfather brought bad karma on the family and you are getting the butt end of it.  It would seem that the recipe that your grandfather stole which I am thinking it came from a relative of Coco's or Tabby and now the rightful family that owns it has taken it back.  Aint karma a bitch then on top of that your wifey apparently wasn't getting enough from you and was getting servered properly by someone else.

It would seem seem that not only Coco is goimg to encounter some past demons and mistakes but Mal go a few heading his way as well and Mr. Sam when wakes up will be on the war path I hope his ass fall like a big ass tree in the forest.  But durn I can feel the drama already.

Jace and Tabby are now married yeeeeeeeah (I have to say I looked at the cast pic and Jace just doesn't look like the hottie in "Full Bloom" cast pics, but I could be wrong)

Franc seems like she can't learn from warning alone so needs a follow up of some serious open a can of whip ass for her to fully comprehend.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

 



Author's Response:

Don't worry that is the same Jace from Full Bloom (Alex O'Loughlin) it just a different pic that's all. Sam Maxwell bad luck started when his grandfather stole that recipe a long time. It seems that fate had a hand in putting CoCo there at the resort at that time. Sasha will a thorn in Mal's side and plus a whole lot of other mess. Sam will be on a warpath, hopefully he got his mind made up when trying to tackling up with TeamMal. So glad that you loved it. Thanks for reading!

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Date: September 14 2011
Title: ME&U

Ahhhhh! It's all coming clear now as to who sired CoCo with that evil witch Cayenne I wonder what made her so evil.

I am loving this story actually I have fallen in love with all you stories.

Okay to read your new one.

Thank you for sharing. 

Happy writing



Author's Response:

So glad that you loved it. Thanks for reading!

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Date: September 20 2011
Title: ME&U

Oh sweet loved it!



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!

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Date: November 19 2011
Title: ME&U

Great update, Great story....I need more I want to know what Cayenne got Coco mixed up in and Maxwell needs to watch his back front and sides and stay his ass where he is at unless he wants to be feed to the wolves of The Blue Forest.

I hope that when Coco and Linny go visit Jeth that they are not going alone.

Thank you for the updat.  I need more more more please.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it! You will find out what Cayenne had CoCo doing soon. Maxwell will be making a debut in the next upcomingg chapters. CoCo is never alone...Mal will always know where his CoCobean will be. Thanks for reading!

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Date: November 07 2011
Title: ME&U

Wonderful update as always.  What does Cayenne want now with CoCo to start some shyte as always no doubt.

Samuel has lost his mind and about to loose his ass if not life

Jethro needs to know about his disgruntal children.

Loving this story.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Glad that you enjoyed it! Cayenne is trouble, Samuel will receive a rude awakening, Jethro will know what his kids is up to. Thanks for reading!!

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Date: October 14 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.