Penname: Thundakat [Contact]

Real name: Stephanie

Member Since: December 11 2008

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Hi all I am an advit reader love all types of genres but have to say that I/R has become my most favorite for the last 3 plus years.  I have found a lot of my favorite authors are here and looking forward to reading lots of their work and finding more favorites.


 



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ME&U by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 586]
Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127261
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014

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Title: ME&U

Wonderful! I can't get enough of this story and all that you have written.

Can't wait til the next update hope it's soon.

Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

So glad that you loved it! Thanks for reading!

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Date: October 14 2011
Title: ME&U

Glad to see you back and loved the update.

More More More please!

 

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Date: July 04 2013
In The Eyes of the Beholder by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
Summary:

 

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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80850
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012

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Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Why do I have a feeling that po'wench Beth is going to be a problem like that other wench tried to be Jessica, but I have faith in Micah and Lei that their love and bond will prevail and Beth will be another wench in the wind.

Loving this story as always . Thank you so much for the update.

Happy writing

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Date: December 09 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I am happy that the Nevus was able to be removed with laser and he will be good as new by the time he starts working.  He cares about his family and who he considers family so deeply for a young man.  Though I know he is not looking for payback I hope that his brothers realize from wince their help came from other the GOD HIMSELF.

I like how Micah handled Ronald's attitude toward him.  He showed that he is way more man then Ron could ever be.

Lei has good reason to be nervous with Ron he is so off his rocker.  I wish he would seek help that will be the only way that Lei will try to work with him and I an so very very happy she is standing her ground and firm about it.  Her mom and papa raised a strong young lady.  I am also happy that he is not intimadating her to the point where she is afraid to tell her parents that he has been lurking around and what happened on her and Micah's trip to Richmond I hope she is able to continue to do so.

Thank you for a great update as always.

Happy writing.

 



Author's Response:

The first step towards self help is realizing that you have a problem.  Ronald is going to realize it....but will it be too late??   Stay tuned!

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Date: November 06 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Okay Ronald is starting to creep me out.  He is talking very possessively and it doesn't so so fatherly either. He already has lost his mind he needs not do anything crazier to lose his life.

I hope the blue nevus is not growing back.

Beanie is not feeling so sexy these days I can understand that she hasn't lost the weight from the last pregnancy but her Teddy Lee loves her all the more and finds her sex to boot.

Thank you for sharing and thank you for the update

Happy writing

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Date: October 29 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Well no where did I see this coming.

I feel bad for Lei she thought she had gotten thru to him but in actuality she had not.  He went to his death thinking that she despised him and that she outed him and humilated him on purpose not understanding that the song was only to express how she felt and that she did love him and want him a part of her life but wanted him to get help and start loving himself before he could start loving someone else.

Thank you Ms. B very much for updating.  This update truly enlighted or confirmed somethings for me that has been going on this week with me.  No one is promised tomorrow and you should mend what ever heart aches you have with a love one or someone in your life so you can be at peace.

Happy writing.

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Date: November 28 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Looks Can Be Deceiving

Ms. B. I must say sista gurl your have done it again.  You have started anothr winner imo.  What I love about your writing is that your characters are real and not perfect but have some faul in some way.

No that Jessica is truly an asshole and like Micah said no use in getting angry and wasting his breath she still going to be a  racist asshole it was breed in her. And she pretty now and may even grow up to be beautiful but beauty don't last always and karmas a bitch even to beautiful people.

Joe Bob is such a sweetie and all man.  He takes care of his business and he owns the BP and has a shop for mechanic so they will be alright.  Twin boys I love it and Candance is doing well with no complications which is also good.  May be jumping ahead but how did Joe's mom and brother take his relationship and marriage to a brown woman *wink*

Thank you for sharing another amazing story.  Can't wait for more.

Happy writing.

P.S. I know you have to go back and edit but wanted to point out in the paragraph for September 1995 you have Lorilei Edmonds instead of Riley and was it 2yrs later that Micah had the surgery?



Author's Response:

Hey Kat:  Yeah, I know I have to go back and do some edits.  I spelled Lorilei's name wrong in some places.   Michal didn't have the surgery right away because his mom's resistance had to be worn down and she had to come to trust Sabrina with her baby.  I'll talk more about that as I tell Micah's point of view.  

I have a busy day today (dress final fitting and cleaning my house) so I may be able to do the edits but I doubt if I'll be able to get another chapter out until after the wedding is over.

More is coming...I promise!

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Date: September 29 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Thank you so much Ms. B for the awesome update as always.

Ronald makes my ass itch and that is good he can not have anymore children to abuse or raise to be like his dumb ass with all that book education he does not have a bit of sense.  I wish JoeBob would have let loose on his ass.  I am also glad the Sheriff did his job and stopped Ronald from finding Lorilei without an adult supervision and that Candance had already let him know about Ronald,

Lei is a big girl and knows her mind I am happy that she stood up to her father and let him know what was what and that she was in no way naive of him and his thoughts. It doesn't take much to provoke him either I see.

Miriam turned her thoughts after Candance told her the way it was that part was funny.  Now she trying to get her oldest married off and plans to invite Edna's youngest that's going to be interesting then there is Beanie coming down from VB yes interesting indeed.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing and I hope the wedding went off without a hitch.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Kat:  The wedding was beautiful! (well back to reality now)

Yes, Ronald Riley is a sad human being.  Even though Sabrina has tried to combat the negativity, a child is still hurt by the things a parent says and feels about them.

I'm enjoying this journey towards adulthood.  Next chapter will include more of Micah's point of view.

Have a great day!

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Date: October 03 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Well well well! Interesting indeed and wonders never seem to end. I knew that Joe Bob was a virgin when he got with Candance and she definitely had and has his nose wide open but he sure is a quick study and has Candance's nose wide open too and it was love at first site for those two. Their relationship turned out very well and continue to get stronger which I am loving.

Micah has already made his claim on his girl/woman and Lei didn't or doesn't even have a clue she is still somewhat in denial subconsiously or not still in denial and thinks that she could never be loved as a woman by him or anyone because of what she perceives and what society perceives as beauty (hince the name of this wonderful tell).  Baby it is possible and it can happen not everyone is attracted to the same thing and who is to say what is considered normal.

Lamar and Jeff are too cute and I love the introduction of them.

Teddy Lee, Teddy Lee got him a hot attraction for Ms. Sabrina :D and she has that attraction too. Now I know that Miriam loves her sons and want then to be married and with someone and give her grandbabies what could she possibly be thinking when she tried to hook-up a 19yr old with a 35yr old that wife use to babysit her and her sisters.  And I know they are in the south and country and age aint nothing but a number and also that Annie's mother is her supposely best friend but come on mama a 19yr old you aint got friends with older daughters?  I am happy though that there is not going to be a problem from mama if Beanie and Teddy get together and marry and make babies :D.  They already have a lot in common though like the fact that they both were married b4 and both lost their spouses.

Great update more please. Thank you!

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Miriam thought that she was running out of options.  Her other daughter has a child and Annie had broken up with her boyfriend so she thought that Teddy Lee might be interested.  LOL

You are right about Lei's perception of herself.  Micah loves her for her, but she has bought into society's hype and that will cause some problems in their relationship!

 

More to come soon cuz my muse is on fire!

 

 

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pictures

Glad to hear that the muse is on fire I hope it stays that way too.



Author's Response:

Yes, the muse is on fire.  I tried to write a little bit of the other story last night, but my muse was fighting me all the way so I gave up.  Now I have all this stuff in my head, but I'm at work so we'll have to see if I can get another chapter out today or not.  But more is coming...

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Date: October 07 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I'm sleepy so this won't be a long drawn out review.

Woo! Beanie is definitely making Teddy Lee work for her goodies and I ain't even mad at her.  You should always be careful what you say cause it may come back and bite you in the rear.  Though he owned up to what he said and found that it was incorrect and not true in regards to black women especially not ever knowing one in person that one should have bit him in the butt.  Second Beanie is so corrert 1st lesson have to want to do something in order for your partner receiving it well and enjoying it. I thought it was funny when Miriam said at the rate those two were going she would be dead and bury by the time they made a commitment to each other but again I understand Beanie's fears.

Okay, baby boy is coming into his own right nicely and put baby girl in check with that kiss and the demand that she is his girl and she need to get with it and get that negativity out of her head.  I was going to say that maybe Micah needs a little comp to reinforce that some men out there like their women with some meat and Lei can't possibly be out of all the people in Wise county the only big girl shot I am sure there are a few big boys there too. Anywho I digress I wish that Lei too could get a little more confidence in herself and stop listening to that jealous ass Jessica.  She makes me want to put the 3F on her ass (Feeding, Financing and well Franking; but instead of Franking it trucking without the tr anyway if she is not doing any of those three things then to hell with her, Jessica that is) Yeah, I see where the problem is going to come in at in their relationship if Lei don't get it together.

Okay enough said from me. Have a good night

Thank you for updating and sharing.

Happy writing....Keep the muse alive and well.  :D



Author's Response:

Hey Kat:  No, Lei is not the only big girl in town.  There come in all sizes in Wise County, VA.  LOL  However she is focusing on what Jessica is saying instead of believing what Micah is saying.  She's just afraid that now that he's normal so to speak, that he'll move on.  Micah on the other hand, can't understand why she's so insecure because he's always loved her and hasn't done anything for her to doubt him.  

More is coming...

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Date: October 07 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Finally the announcement has been made and the date has been set.  I like how Joe Bob is so protective of the family and the females of the family but Teddy Lee is the same way and he wore our girl down until she gave in to announcing the engagement.

Micah is coming into his manhood quiet nicely I must say again he put miss hozilla in check about what a man likes and wants and he knows what he likes and wants and that is baby girl Lei,

Thank you!

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Teddy Lee had to work hard for that one.  LOL !!  Micah does know what he wants and he's going to keep close to his girl Lei.  Thanks for the review.

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Date: October 11 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Great update as always and the person you chose to depict Ronald was an excellent choice,

Everything seems so at peace and calm I keep waiting for the storm to hit.

Thank you for updating,

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Yes, I can totally see Samuel L. as an angry father.  LOL  More is coming soon!

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Date: October 13 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I hope that Lei mean what she said to herself that she is going to accept his love without question.  I am like Micah what else can he do, say or be to prove to her that he loves her with all his heart in spite of her insecurities.  I love his strenght to pull back after seeing her without her sweats and just bra and panties.

Great update as always.

Thank you....

Happy writing...

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Date: October 16 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I was grinning like an idiot this whole update.  I loved it.

Lei is no joke when she is confident in what God gave her and she needed the advise and the little tidbit of info she received.  I hope she keeps that confidence.

Micah was fired up and he is a possessive little something aint he.

Well I think these two updates over the weekend will tide me over...actually it's going to have to since you're not sure if you're going to be able to update during the week.  I will try to keep myself occupied until you are able to so and leave stalker mode off.

Thank you for the update.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

LOL Kat:  I'm trying to update the other story even though I'm tired as a dog!!! I want to get to that hot Lei and Micah sex, but I want to be fresh when I do it.  It's coming up in the next chapter whenever I get rested and can work on itl   I'm sure I wont have to make you wait too long.

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Date: October 17 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Wonderful update as always.

I thought we had gotten rid of Jessica should have known she was still lurking around somewhere.

Poassessive much Micah he was flaming with Lei being with Jerome for just dancing and getting some air together.

The making love scene was wonderful.  Micah was already possessive about his Lei I wonder how he is going to be now that he has actually physcially made her his woman.

Okay I know you don't have to write it everytime and we can just assume that he used a condom but assumption can make an ass out of you everytime but that 2nd time out the shower our little lovebirds did not use a condom. Yes, Lei is on the shot but that was a week before the prom has it had time to kick in?  Hmmm we don't need lil Micahor Lei right now nd Joe Bob, Candance, Beanie, and Teddy Lee not to mention grandmother Miriam  oh and Micah's mom would hae a fit.

Micah and Lei got a bit of freak and kink in them it would seem alrighty then.

I think that is all I have right now on my review. I had read the story earlier b4 bed then woke up and wrote this.

Thank you for the update and sharing and I didn't have to wait :D Hurray!!!

Happy writing



Author's Response:

LOL  Yes, Kat, they did use a condom the second time around.  Lei didn't see him put it on because her back (ahem) was to him.   

Yes, the lovebirds are going to figure out that they both have a kinky side this weekend.

More to come soon.

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Date: October 20 2011
Life in High School by NaeNae1495
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

Dijnae Anderson is a full-figured high school junior. She's dealing with crazy best friends, a protective brother, her insecurities, and her attraction to the Co-Captain of the Football team. No one said high school was easy and she's definitely being put to the test.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 15199
Read Count: 15493
Published: October 16 2011
Updated: February 02 2012

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Sweet...So he is truly into to our little Nae no games on his part.

We all know that skank is going to try and throw salt in the game though and Bryan stay away from the trifling ho bag she may give you something that has you in the clinic.

Thank you for the update.

More please.

Happy writing

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Date: October 28 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the start.

Thank you for sharing more please.

Happy writing

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Date: October 16 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I want to kick Marina in the teeth.

How she figure Nae-Nae would do what she said after talking to her like that.  I guess that wench would be going to formal by her damn self.  She is the one that will be ass out.

Austin is persistant I have to give him that.  Marina is going to shyte bricks and I hope she does that heffa is working my nerves and she was just introduced.  I am glad you chose what's her face to depict Marina (I know her name just don't like her very much and that was before the Chris incident)

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

Yep she who will not be named in not on my good list either. She had to be the villian. And Austin is very persistant. It's a lil cat and mouse for awhile. I'm glad you like it.

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Date: October 18 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That was sweet and the other group couldn't have done anything better then drive off.

Loved the update loving the story can't wait for more.

Happy writing.

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Date: December 05 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well damn Bry was definitely a buzz killer there.  Yes, what is his problem? What does he know or think he knows that we don't about Austin?

Brandon trying to make that move on miss chantel. BTW where were those guys when all this was going down.

Great update more please more.

Happy writing.

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Date: December 05 2011
Retired
Sick by TheSouthernScribe
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 114]
Summary:

 

Wren Blue didn't do mornings...

 

Especially when she found herself as the fourth victim in a twisted killer's game.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 19929
Read Count: 15741
Published: November 09 2011
Updated: February 26 2012

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Title: Chapter 3: Unraveling the Mystery

I am very happy to see that your are back.  Please don't go away again.  I missed this story and your wirting.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks Thundakat. I promise not to run anymore.

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Date: November 11 2011
A Perfect Fit by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 245]
Summary:

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Maximillian Peterson was a man who appeared to have everything...looks, money and good health.  There was just one little problem...he was lacking where he thought it mattered most.  Selma Bloomfield was a widow who hadn't had sex in five years. She and Maxie had hit it off, but he was hesitant in taking their relationship to consummation.  How would Selma take it when she discovers Maxie's "little" secret?

A Perfect Fit is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57110
Read Count: 39384
Published: November 10 2011
Updated: April 20 2012

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Additional Cast

Great cast chosen

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: November 18 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMGoodness! I am sorry to hear that someone tried to break into your home but happy to hear that he ran off without harming you when he found out you were there.  People are crazy now a days.

There is always got to be one or two fools in the bunch. Russ is a straight ass but we know why he is an ass cause he was interested in a black woman but allowed her to slip away out of fear and society. 

Stephen and his brothers are selfish more so Stephen now if the shoe was on the other foot they would jump to telling Selma it was his choice and he was grown.  My sons are protective but they know that I am going to do me and allow them to do them.

Maxie was hurt when she was evasive about his proposal but I can understand where she is coming from and Maxie shouldn't have allow the boys (Stephen) get to him to show the ring b4 it was time to do so.

Loving the story...Thank you muse for thumping Ms. B in the head good call :D LOL

Happy writing.

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Date: November 18 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG! This is wonderful, wonderful wonderful! I was lmao when Selma said at this point she would take a worm.

Thank you chica for another wonderful tale.

Happy Writing.

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Date: November 17 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.