Penname: Thundakat [Contact]

Real name: Stephanie

Member Since: December 11 2008

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Hi all I am an advit reader love all types of genres but have to say that I/R has become my most favorite for the last 3 plus years.  I have found a lot of my favorite authors are here and looking forward to reading lots of their work and finding more favorites.


 



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Maximillian Peterson was a man who appeared to have everything...looks, money and good health.  There was just one little problem...he was lacking where he thought it mattered most.  Selma Bloomfield was a widow who hadn't had sex in five years. She and Maxie had hit it off, but he was hesitant in taking their relationship to consummation.  How would Selma take it when she discovers Maxie's "little" secret?

A Perfect Fit is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57110
Read Count: 39394
Published: November 10 2011
Updated: April 20 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOL! I know it's not funny what Selma is going thru she is scared and older and thought her life was thru with the chapter of raising babies but fate has a way of kicking you in the head like your muse Ms. B.

I was hoping something in this nature would happen and even though this is a story I believe in fate so way to go Maxie u going to be a daddy after all.  I see twins maybe triplets in your future ;) LOL!  Too bad she chickened out and left but left evidence of a pending abortion now he is going to think the worst.

Stephen is going to hit the roof but his ass will get over it.  HIS MAMA IS GROWN and past the age of consent especially from her CHILD.

Thx 4 the update.  I need more more more....greed aint I. :D

Happy writing.

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Date: November 18 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

What can I say that I haven't said time and time again.

You do marvelous work Ms. B just marvelous work.

I think that Mr. Russ will no longer be so uptight and growling at everyone especially Maxie.

I an glad Kelly found friendship in Selma and Jen she needed that....cause apparently the two skinny wenches need a check in reality.

Wonderful update thank you thank you thank you

Happy writing.

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Date: November 18 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thank you...I am glad that Steve got that off his chest it was selfish of his father to put that on a 15yr boy to carry around.  Not all men cheat and he was a poor example of a man but the only one Steve had,

Thank you for the update.

Happy writing.

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Date: November 18 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Ahhhh! That was a "perfect fit" Stephen is going to be a daddy I'm on the fence about that but he is a grow man and Selma did raise him good.  I hope Vivian is not someone out to hurt Stephen, she seems shy and all but hey who's to say.

Terry and Renley hmmmm interesting and the babies are growing up and Maxie and Selma are happy and content.

Thank you for another wonderful story....

 

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Date: April 21 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Russ didn't have balls enough to go after the woman that he really wanted he loves Kelly but did he settle or is it just that he is not adventurous enough to spice up the bedroom

I am happy that Justin is going after what he wants now if daddy would get a clue it would be all good.

Sweet update...

Thanx

Happy writing

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Date: November 18 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

There is always some trifling ass negro in the works and Stanley Bloomfield is high on the trifling list.  He is going to make Maxie beat him like a runaway slave or as he said like he stole something messing with HIS WOMAN.

I love the Alpha in Maxie it is strong and Selma has made it stronger now that they are together and what not. He got one issues settled on his family side now he has to deal with this leech who deserves nothing if that was the case his no good brother Stephen would have left him something in the end so even his brother knew he was no good but left his mess at Selma's doorstep for her to clean-up cause he was selfish that way.

Selma is happy now and engaged to a man that really loves, honors and respects her but her dead husband is till trying to bring her down from the grave well damn. I also believe that the only reason he married her was because she wasn't giving up the goods until that ring was on her finger and he felt that he could still be no good after marrying her as he did then filling his sons head and heart with doubt after being caught by him.

I am truly loving this story but then what can I say i haven't read a story of yours that I haven't enjoyed.

Thank you for the update and as you know greedy me wants more more more.

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Maxie has taken charge of things since he's found out that he's going to be a daddy.  Selma will just have to accept his bossy ways.  More to come soon!

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Date: November 22 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm loving it...

Thank you for sharing your talent of story telling.

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Date: November 23 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yeah! They are finally husband and wife and it went off without a hitch.

Stephen got him a new grandfather that loves the Vikings as much as him if not more and they have all bonded quit well.

Matthew got him a new grandmother that soothed his doubts about his place in the family and Selma not knowing it confirmed her mother in law's words to him which helped him be at each I can see a bond growing stronger with the family.

I kept waiting for the other shoe to hit but it all was well and I am happy happy happy.

Thank you for a wonderful update as always.

Sure you know I can't wait for more more more.

Happy writing...



Author's Response:

Stanley didn't know about the wedding, besides he's off gambling somewhere.  More to come soon!

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Date: December 05 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love your stories they are always so real, thought out and descriptive.

I liked how you included the bathroom scene the reason I say that is because it shows that even though this is a story they still have body functions that are taken care of and happen.

The babies are beautiful and that woman had some nerve coming to Maxie with that mess I hope it did not put any doubt in his head about the parentage of his daughter and son they are dark because their mother is dark and she don't know there could be some black in the bloodline on Maxie's side born in America don't always make your bloodline pure in one way.

Thank you for a wonderful update as always.

Happy writing.

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Date: December 15 2011

Rated: All Ages
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Christmas is a time of giving and Henrietta Young is about to give the perfect gift to someone who doesn't deserve it.

 

 

The Gift  is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Gift
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3349
Read Count: 5908
Published: December 21 2011
Updated: December 21 2011


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was outstanding! Thank you

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Date: December 30 2011

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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 94675
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013


Title: Acceptable Lies

Go Sugar it's yo' birthday.  I am glad that Sugar has some sense...and you have definitely proved me wrong yet again on a person's character,  She maybe ghetto as fire is hot but she surely isn't stupid and no ones puppet.

I know Gabe loves his father but he needs to wake up and smell the bullsnap. He ia obsessive and possesive of Honey that is for sure.

I can't wait to see what Sug has planned for asshole Wainright and we all know his dumb behind is going to slip up and he just might lose a wife with all his scheming and trying to manipulate. I'm still debating with myself though if Sug should give Honey a head up that someone is try to sabbatage her and Gabe's relationship I think she should have forwarded the messages to Honey and she showed Gabe but I still can't wait to see what Sug is going to do.

Thank you 4 the update

Happy writing

 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat:  LOL Sugar is no fool, that's for sure.  She's been scratching and surviving for a long time and she knows game when she sees it. 

Oh, she has something so over the top for Mr. Albert that he'll pee his pants for sure.  LOL.   Now I have to update my other story so you be patient, but it is coming.

 

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Date: January 09 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Deception

Ms. B you always have a way of getting me to dislike a person but then turn around and give me a back story on that person that make me feel sorry from him/her but I don't think even a back story for Sugar would make me feel sorry for her greedy, trifling tired self.

Albert can't see the forest for the trees and Audrey seems like a loving, kind mother but we haven't been introduced yet.

Sydney is daddy's little princess would it be something if she was the one that was actually gay/lesbian.

Lee is a man whore but he uses protection which is good but he seems to be a good guy and an even better friend.

Honey I am loving her she seems a strong, intelligent and caring woman but she is not letting her mother run over by any means which is wonderful cause Sugar is trying even the patience of JOB would be tested with a mother like her.

Gabe is a sweetheart and I like how he kept his cool with his father and how he just let's him assume he is gay just like they say assumption will make ASSumption out of one everytime. I like his boldness too when he first met Ms. Honey Dew and I would love to see Albert and Sugar in a room together it would be hilarous the bigot and the money grubbing wannabe still your harlet.

Loving the story thank you for sharing.

Happy writing

Happy and safe holiday

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Date: December 30 2011

Title: Acceptable Lies

I loved Sugar's payback. Don't mess with a mother on a mission.  Albert gets on my evef loving nerves and that sister is a piece of work too. I don't understand why she is so envious of Gabe she needs to get laid

Thank  you for the update.

Happy writing.

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Date: March 04 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

Okay Sydney is truly getting on my ever loving nerves.  What is up with all the nane calling of Honey being a big black woman when she is dating a black man herself but too ashamed to tell her father.  She needs to grow the hell up and stop trying to please her dad with his bigot self. He's not always going to be there and before she knows it if she doesn't go for the man she loves she is going to grow old and bitter especially if trying to please her father end up marrying a man that Albert approves of and be miserable while he has lived his life and married the woman he wants.

I'm glad Gabe knows about Syd's relationship or suspects it.

Thank you for the update.

Happy writing.

 

 

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Date: March 04 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

OMG! Syd is pregnant and too chick stuffing to come clean all the way around you titled this chapter perfectly "Hypocrisy". That was some stuff to blame the pregnancy test on Honey mess all the way around cause if Gabe find out that little lie he will think that is what Honey is hidig from him which is not the case.

I think Honey should tell Gabe about the prank that Sugar pulled on Albert and tell him why he will definitely take Honey's side but I could be wrong and Honey right about the loyality factor and not take it too well.

Great update, story. Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

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Date: March 04 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

Clap! Clap! Clap! Syd apparently was worried about nothing because she seems to be daddy's little girl and has him wrapped around her little finger. LOL!!!!

I am glad it's finally out and that she did not abort the baby...Hopefully now she will get over some of her hang-ups about black people too.

Great update as always.  Thank you!

Happy writing.

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Date: June 05 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

Yes, the muse is definitely on fire and I am loving it.

Sugar has that kryptonite coochie it even got to Albert. I wonder will he purchase some condoms go back and complete the already addiction.

Thank u for the great update can't wait for more.

Happy writing

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Date: November 16 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

OMG! Sugar got that thigya got the racist Albert Wainwright fiening and STALKING with his 60yr old ads.

I like Aubrey and she would be devastated to find out that Albert got a taste of brown SUGAR and can't let go.

Great update as always.

Happy writing

Author's Response:

Albert has lost his mind.  He'd better get it together before it all blows up in his face.  LOL

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Date: November 17 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

I loved this update. Franklin is a nasty no good f#@Ker that needs to have his a$$ beat within an inch of his life. I'm woody about his dad but that is no reason for the path he chose to go down. Just as he was determined to show his uncle he would not go the path he predicted then he could have been determined not to take his cousin's innocence and be all nasty in the closet and breaking into that same cousin's apartment and now following her to Vegas to cayuse more malice in her life.

I love Bruce is stepping up to the plate to love and charish Sugar. Albert is obsessed I hope he gets it together and don't. Hurt Aubrey, Sugar, Honey and Gabe. Thank u Ms. B I can't wait for more. Also Frank doesn't need to die that would be to easy and fast for all the suffering he has caused and I don't fell sorry for Rachelle one bit. She is still calling what Frank did as sexton come on now. Sonja isn't any better.

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Date: December 28 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

 

 

 

Sometimes there's more to a person than meets the eye...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4518
Read Count: 1921
Published: March 04 2012
Updated: March 04 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful but I must say that I am bias I have read a story of yours that I haven't thought was wonderful.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

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Date: March 04 2012

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Summary:

*Response to the Take Me Please Challenge*

Five miles outside of hell and a few meters from the devil's doorstep, Mari finds her favorite kind of challenge, a pretty boy with a big stick.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: Southern Gents
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9399
Read Count: 20104
Published: March 07 2012
Updated: March 08 2012


Title: Chapter 6: 5. Lessons

Nice!!!! I enjoyed this little shortie.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing

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Date: August 10 2012

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Summary:



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99741
Read Count: 100900
Published: March 08 2012
Updated: January 31 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Love and Life According to Charlie

I am so proud of Val for finally cutting the apron strings with Jared.  I know it was hard for her cause he is her child but he needs to grow-up. Plus if he dad loved him so much he would have at least tried to spend time with his sons and not just disappeared and let them fend for themselves.  Hopefully he will see the light of his ways before it's too late and he is able to mend the fence to his family,  He needs a swift kick in the behind.

What happened to all that mouth about Charlie having to date her first before giving up the cookies.  Patience chica he is going to give it to you in due time but it's time that you learned there is more then a quick fix and just letting in all hang out before getting to know the person case in point her exs' Lucas and Jermaine.

Charlie wants to love you and you love him and he will show you how a man in love true love is suppose to treat his woman and vice versa.

Charlie is learning new things with Inga and he so needed that break away from home.

Great update as always.

Thank you for sharing

Happy writing

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Date: March 14 2012

Title: Chapter 11: Cast Pictures

I like the pic u chose for Jared's love interest Lucinda, I wonder what Valerie will have to say when Jared bring her home to meet the family.  Well she treat her the way that she treats Inga or differently because it is Jared that has an interest in her.

Thanks for the pics and I hope to see an update soon.

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Date: March 25 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

OH poor Jared all he has ever wanted was the love and attention of his father and his family to be together and all he has gotten is heartache and confusion from that man and not knowing how to love his mother unconditionally and see that Charles Sr. was only a detriment to him and his family.  That he had all the love that he could possibly use from his loving mother and if given the chance his brothers.

I hope that the situation of his father trying to sell him has trully opened his eyes to the light and that he does not use Lu for his own selfish reasons or continue to go down the path like his father.

Ms. Johnson needs a power drive upside the head.  If she would only see that she and her husband had something to do with Darius' death by not allowing him to be with the woman he loved, though it was his wrong by drinking and driving but if they had to allowed him to grow and chose who he wanted to love he would still be alive.  They never know Darius and Inga could have grown apart as time went on.

Charlie wants so much for Inga to love him deeply and unconditionally but she was so hurt and confused after her love for Darius she can't see the gold mine in front of her in the form of Charlie I hope it doesn't take too much hardship for her to realize what she has and lets her heart love again.

I am glad that inga's mom got of the business she was in and is doing something legit now with no alternative motives.

I agree with Charlie, Charles needs to take a long, burning hot ride to hell.  Do not pass go, do not collect 200 bones. His own flesh and blood he tried to sell for his own mean and it was and is not even guaranteed that he would have been set free after Charles debt was paid in full or that Charles would not have incurred more debt from gambling.

Loved the updat and definitely loving the story.

Thank you!

Happy writing!

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Date: March 17 2012

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 The End of Abstinence

Ahhhh! That was down right the bomb on all regards.  I like the way Valrie put it for the boys on sharing there seed it was a great analogy.

Charlie is whipped and now so is Jared they can't get enough of their women I am happy that Jared made it good for Lu but like he said it is different when you're in love.

All seems to be coming together I am waiting for the other shoe to fall hope it's not a bad fall but we shall see.

Both men have told their women they are going to marry them.....A double wedding maybe???

Thank you for the update.

Happy writing.

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Date: May 03 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.