Ahhhhh! That was so sweet there at the end.  The nightmare/dream showed Jayden his Grammy and part of the problem he is having.  His parents are a piece of work and not in a good way.  Why would you tell a seven year old that the one person that has always showed constant love and affection to him that she died from germs then just ignore him and his plyt.  They were definitely not made for parenting.

It was so sweet that after he woke from that dream he saw his daughter and his grammy in his daughter for the first time.  I so think that his FAMILY (Tam, Dana and Jay) are so good for him and he just needs more of them.

Thank you for the update I can't wait for more.

I feel no way sorry for Nancy not the way she grew up or the way she has acted since she supposed grew-up.

Jason ass is still weak they have waited a month and have not called and informed Tam and the kids on the happening of Jayden.  Has the kids worried and Tam pissed off at him.

Jason and Nancy deserve each other in misery and should let Jayden go so he can be happy and leave them to their ignorance.

Sure Jason is mad at Nancy but he still hasn't gotten a backbone where Nancy is involved and sent word for Tam even if he did not want to do it himself.  Then that Mr. Bean character I want to kick him in his two front teeth just because I just don't like him.

But there is one good thing :D TAM IS PREGNANT AGAIN WITH JAYDEN'S BABY(IES) Whoohoo! Like I said before what will be will be :D

I am a bit mad at her too cause she has let a month go by without taking action I understand that she was hurt the first go round but he made a promise to her and he was sincere in everything he said to her and she is too blind to see that and trust like his children that something may have happened to him.  I want to kick her butt too but not as serverly as Bean, Nancy and Jason's.

It took her friend Stacey to say they were taking a trip to New Haven to kick butt before she lite a fire under her behind and to also find out she is pregnant again.

I love how you have him setting with his Grammy while he is in the coma letting his brain heal. She is so good for him and needed that visit right now in his life.  To help him to confirm somethings.

I'm still upset about that trip he had to take down those steps because of Nancy and Jason while giving her the cold shoulder is not doing enough for me.

I need more. I know there is more coming I just had to say it anyway.

Thank you!

I'm a bit disappointed in Tam...I'm lying I'm a lot disappointed in Tam.  I know she thinks she is doing what's best for her children, but she in actuality is being just like Nancey controling.  She used her words to hurt her child though unintentionally t least I hope they were unintentional she knows how strong Dana's faith is and using that verse against her made her think that was the reason Jayden did not wake up because she was being disobedient and punished by God for not listening to her parent.  Just like when Nancy told Jayden that his grandmother died because of the germs she had @ 7 though she is a bit older then her father she is still and impressional child that wants to do and be right in the eyes of her parents and God.

Great update as always.  I hope Tam holds true to her words and try to work something out.  I also think she needs to tell Jayden about the baby before she leave or it's going to be another incident like with the twins well not that deep but still.  Like they keep saying they don't know when he will be well enough to go to VA again and though he is improving with his phobia he is not about to get on a plane I don't believe. 

I know Tam is not a holy roller but she does need to heed the words of forgive and be forgiven.

Thank you Ms. B!

I am loving this story.  It would seem that Nancy is getting closer and closer to findng out who her family is if only she could get past her bitterness and the fact that she was left behind and put in foster care.  She doesn't know what happened she could be Emily's brother child and he could have not know what happened to her or even if her mother gave birth to her and told him something differently.  I can't wait to find out.  Now for Mr. Alcaeus there would seem to be a connection there for Nancy again and twins seem to run in the family if I am calculating and assuming correctly.

Can't wait for the next update.  Thank you for sharing.

I just love love the effect that laura has on Nico...she allows him to let down his guard and show his sensetive and playful side.  He lets her feel secure and wanted by him.  It's true they are ying and yang to each other.

But they are too distracted by each other to notice their surrounding in public and that can/could be dangerous for the both of them. I wonder who the woman is watching them. I will be glad when the reconstruction on the house is completed and she moves in with him.

Dad is a piece of work.  He had mother and daughter thinking each of them were dead wtf kind of mess is that and what kind of clout pull does daddy dearest have?

Loving this story glad to be spoiled with 2 updates.

Thank you for sharing.

OMG! Batman is off his rocker.  WTF was the purpose of dropping her down in that hell hole.  Oh yeah, Bane is going to kill Batman and I ain't mad at him at all.  Batman of all knows what that place can do to a man none the least a small woman like Nem and on top of that the bat hit her not once but serveral times.  Is that really the bat cause he has lost it seriously.

Thank you for the update.

Just as she thought the horror was over I must admit I did too someone got to her before Bane and I think it was that evil Valley too.

Thank you for the update this story was grealy missed.

Well Damn! Jenna is a bitch in beautiful clothing and a racist to boot.

Danny should have punched her ass but I know it would not have been gentlemanly.

I like Anna she seems to be cool.

Danny saw Loki disappear I wonder what explaination Noni will give him as to what Loki is.  I can't wait til the next update which I hope is soon.

It's so sad about Jake he was just beginning to live.

Thank you

I am glad that Val is trying she needs to try and it would seem she does not like her profession to much and what I've read about her father it may have just been to satisfy him that she chose that  profession to study in.

I think she would be a great gamer it seems to been in her blood and what she enjoys doing.

Thank you for sharing.

Hot Prologue and I loved the 1st time they met yes, her self-esteem is a bit low.  I hope she is able to work that out or henry is aboe to work it out for her. *smile*

Thank you for sharing.  I am glad i found this story.

Happy writing.

Ms. B, you throw me for a loop each time I read your stories that's why I love your writing it keeps me intrigued from beginning to end.

I am so happy that Ophelia is a live but again she has missed bonding with another child due to someone crazy intruding into her life first her mom now this crazy a## doctor.  Ophelia is strong though she has gone through so much but keeps hanging in there.  I hope Dr. Quack does not break her before help comes and I hope that Raymond understands and believes Elizabeth's call and gets his head out of his behind even tell and let Bennie hear the message.  Ophelia needs her HEA.

Thank you for a wonderful update and I am so happy to hear that the muse is on fire.  Let's keep it that way.  :D

First I would like to say I see why the statement was that you are going to hide.

OMG! I did not see that coming.  I know you said to brace myself but damn it didn't work I was still baweling like Raymond. I so did not see that coming.

Now Raymond wants to do off with himself he is cut deep.  Gay is going to get him some help though and I hope he accepts it.  Justice needs her Daddy her Mommy is gone.

Ophelia already told him to get his shyt together to raise his daughter and he already has forgotten due to his grief but she wouldn't be pleased not at all.  Damn she didn't get to raise her first baby completely and now she didn't even get to see or hold this one :(....I will miss her.

Kei and Ben have finally did the do.  I wonder if this has opened the flood gates and they are going to be hot on each other and they were each others first too oh yeah it's on like popcone.

Alicia and Kevin mmmm hot tommolies I hope they work out.

Well that's a wrap for me going to lick my wounds cause he have hit me hard with this update.

Thank you for updating.

Well Bennie has gotten some more truth about his mother's condition from finding the receipt that was of his grandmother taking money from Ray to get Bennie away from Ophelia.  That opened up a lot of confusion for me as well.

Yes, Bennie needs to talk to his mother and stop being so hard on her.

Bennie and Keisha have finally admitted their feelings for each other.  That was deep to what Keisha confessed about her cousin.  That is a start of intimacy to to let go and let him into her life and heart.

Great update.

Thank you for sharing.