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How far will you go when you're lonely?
I agree this isn't her fault (tears of anger) I want Kirk's balls on a platter to feed to the dogs but then again i don't want to poison the dogs. Put them on a platter and let Jodi stomped them into minced meat while he looks on. I wonder what happened to that bastard. I am glad he did not try to find her and continue her torture.
She needs to find help tell someone she does not need to go through this by herself. :'(
Thank you for the update.
It was very hard to write this chapter. To think that there are really teens and females in general that are going through this type of thing is very hard! I will continue to try my best to be sensitive and consider their feelings when writing this story. This is a dark tale. I just pray that I can keep it real by digging as deeply as I can.
And as always Thanks for your review :).
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Ahhhh! Interesting. Steve seems to know alot about Miss Jodi or he is a good guesser or maybe even more he knows what he likes and what he wants her to do. What an ego but he is truly turning out to be all ALPHA.
Jodi finally admitted to herself that she is also a pyscho freak and it's not all Steve by himself. LOL!
Thank you for the update. More soon please.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
This story is getting better and better as it goes on.
Dan what a dick wad. I think his wife has left his sorry ass and now he wants to get a piece of Jodi. It would seem like the men are coming out the wood work.
I wonder if Steve is upset about Jodi seeing Matt. He already has staked a claim on the coochie but that is about all. I am confused so I know jodi is. Where is this fuckfest going. I don't see a ring on it or any other committment so Jodi has the right to see and do whomever she likes.
Thank you for sharing.
Thanks so much for your reviews. I read them all and I appreciate your interest in Jodi's story. :)
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Jodi needs help. The crying fest as she calls them are coming more frequently and so are the nightmares about Kirk ass. Have I told you recently how much I dislike that troll.
Craig is a sweetie all these nice men coming into her life but she is a wreck waiting to happening. Jodi go back to your therapist and get help there is nothing wrong with asking for help.
Dan is creepy Magee and needs to be put down. Gives me shivers and not in a good way.
Steve is a trip but I like how strong Jodi was then her stomach had to give her away. LOL!
Thank you chica for the update appreciate it.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed After effects very interesting. I wonder what she found when she moved the covers down.
So she has experience with being bruised before and apparently they are not to pleasant memories.
I wonder where Steve got off to. He hit and ran huh or maybe he is downstairs in her living room and kitchen or after he sobbered up he did leave. I can say safely that it is not his weekend to have the kids. LOL!
Nice update...more please.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Steve is a bit bossy isn't he. Jodi on the fence on if she wants him there are to go home huh?
She about to take a snooze on his ass though that is if he lets her.
Thank you for the update off to read the next one.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed The verdict is still out on Steve I am still waiting for the other shoe to fall so to speak.
Can't wait to see what more you have in store for Jodi and Steve like Jodi said it's just the weekend and doesn't look as though she is going to get any sleep anytime soon.
Thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Well damn Steve you a bit creepy but you apparently can put a sista out with your cunnilingus skills.
He seems way to farmiliar with her home has he been watching her for a long time and decided to finally make a move? Again creepy almost supernatural creepy if you ask me but time shall tell. I wonder how much he had to drink of an alcoholic beverage or was that his liqued courage to talk to Jodi?
Girl is gone she has been without for 10yrs damn I know what it is to be lonely but that is out there for real well if Steve has his way he is about to take care of that quick like and a hurry.
Thank you for the update...loved the chapter can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Okay a bit creepy I keep waiting for the pop-up surprise that they know each other and this is just a role play of theirs.
She has let a man that she has seen before in a local grocery store met him the night that he just happens to pop-up @ her residence @ 12 midnight no doubt. She lets him in again not knowing him at 12 something at night. She only asks herself how he knows where she lives and there seems to be no warning bells going off in her head because she is so lonely. He could be a predator that has just been watching her and waiting because he can smell the desperation just warfing off of her. REALLY!
I understand that being lonely can be mind debilitating sometimes but really I need my girl to think about what's going on.
Your question: Would you do this if you were lonely? My answer: I would have to say HELL NO presently but loneliness makes you do some crazy things and she is 45yrs old two years older then me. No kids and doesn't look like a prospect of a piece of man that is if you don't include Steve who comes to her home @ 12 something in the morning to get a piece of ass and we all know that is what he is there for.
Great update. Keep it coming I am interested to see what Jodi will do next.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed So far so good. I am enjoying the read so far. I want to see what happens to her cause she sound like me before I got my pound of beef cake I call my boyfriend now ;). Please continue.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Seems that Jodi's crush has simliar things in common. I wonder where this relationship will go. Baby girl though does still need to get some help behind Kirk's trifling ass and his abuse of her. I wish she could tell her stepbrother what all happened with her.
She deserves happiness and she is not this whore she preceives herself to be she just needs to get help to see that.
I don't think Steve is going to be happy with this new development.
Thank you for the update. I am finally getting able to get caught up.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Dang Dan is nosey and inconsiderate of his neighbors no wonder his wife jumped ship she probably didn't go on a vacation she took off for good.
No words for Jodi currently.
Steve I wonder if sampling her cake then leaving it open in the fridge was just another way of his domance and control seeping in on Jodi.
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed OMG! How did I possible know that the Sinclair owners had something to do with Steve himself. LOL! Loving it.
It would seem like Mitch has a bit of an interest in Jodi as well but it could also just be his personality to flirt with every woman. He seems to already have a rep among some of the woman in the business. The skinny heffa as his sec seems to be one of his flings or a potiental wannabe.
Oh I love it if Steve has a bit of compatition I can't wait to see what you have in store for us and Jodi. LOL! LOVING IT INDEED!!!!!
Thank you for the great update.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Come on jodi you are stronger then that make this situation work for you sista girl. Steve is a very possessive so and so aint he. LOL! I am loving it.
Mitch and Matt seem to be interested in Jodi so yeah there is definitely compation for ole Steve there and Jodi should milk it for what its worth. Not be on the run from the man. I like how she was able to be professional during the introductions. I was laughing my a## off with reading his expressions whenever Matt and Mitch touched her.
Thank you for the quicky.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed I bet Matt wants to ask Jodi out on Friday. We all know by now that Steve is not about to have that and I am so surprised that he pulled back from Jodi in her office and let her walk away with pushing it. Then we also have Mitch who no doubt want to compete for Jodi's attention as well.
I thought it was funny as hell how they were talking about Carrie like she was a dog...I was giggling my ass off. LOL! They don't seem malious in fact they sound like sweethearts but she is a trifling trick right along with Steve's ex-wife Susan.
We are definitely going to have to find Mitch and Matt some chocalate flavors to have their noses wide open Jodi already has Steve's open. LOL even though he hids it very well.
Thank you for two great updates. Waiting for more.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed An event of neglect brought them together and led to an healing neither one of them could ever anticipate.
This is a wonderful beginning of a story I am sure to enjoy trumendously. Thank you for sharing I can't wait to read more.
It has all the ingredients I enjoy and I can't wait to see where you take the cast and us.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.
Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.
Great update! Mission get Breezy back is on it's way.
Thank you for the update and for sharing.
Yes indeed!! He's gotta get her back!! But we're gonna have fun getting reacquainted.
Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate the reviews. They mean a lot. Stay tuned. More coming this week.
Yevette
Yes indeed!! He's gotta get her back!! But we're gonna have fun getting reacquainted.
Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate the reviews. They mean a lot. Stay tuned. More coming this week.
Yevette
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Cersei Oluwaseyi hadn't seen her ex Steffen Darkholme in eight months and he shows up out of the blue expecting her help. Only, the help he needs isn't exactly what she bargains for. He has one primary goal in mind, that isn't even his really, but the thing inisde of him demands satisfaction. He's trying to fight it, not to step over any boundaries, but the feelings of attraction are too strong to deny, and if he mates with her, then the real "fun" begins.
Great and interesting start. I can't wait to read more and find out what is going on and what is the infected.
Thank you for sharing your imagination. Waiting for more.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed In the year of 1648 B.C, the Nubians reigned over Pharaohs army and won with victory over the territory of the West Nile. In celebration King Kladon communes a marriage for his daughter's hand.
Princess Kira is a highly trained warrior of the Nubian Kingdom, alongside her boisterous brother, Keitou. When she is told that she is to marry the Royal Lords son, Akisou, she is furious and rides away from the Nubian Palace. However, Kira finds herself caught in a trap when her and her party are ambushed by Pharaohs soldiers.
Pharaoh Raad is a stoic and tenacious king who shows no mercy when it comes to slaying his enemies...all except one. Only trying to prove vengeance against the Nubian King, the mighty Pharoah himself cannot deny his budding desire for the beautiful, yet dangerous Queen to be.
War will sprout...love will flow...who will be the true winner of the Nile.
WARNING: Graphic violence, and much nudity.
I am happy that Kira has professed her love for Raad again I can't wait to see Kladon reaction to the love they share. I hope that Raad is still not going thru with this bestowed mess with the witch Helena and her sister whom is in love with another.
Keitou and that axe does he even know how to fight with any other weapon.
I have no remorse for Sap and I wish for a quick demise of him, he does not need to be question because a snake is sly with the tongue.
I hope that Keitou is able to redeem himself in his father's eye.
Thank you for the update.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Sweet Kira I had hoped that you would have learned from your brother and he defeat because of his pride but noooo you turn right around and do a prideful thing and it may be the death of you or you may be found by some seedy type that means you no good.
I thought she was at least beginning to trust Raad but I guess not. The man confessed his love for her.
I have to say that I usually don't like historic stories but something about this story caught my attention and it has been holding on strong to it. I am pleasantly surprised and glad I took a chance on the story. Thank you for sharing your imagination.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed What in the devil is Sap up to now can someone please do away with his trifling behind.
I hope that Keitou comes to his senses gets stronger and wins back his father's respect but does not attempt to kill Raad that would be bad on all levels.
Thank you for the update
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Why is it that I feel that it is still not Sap's time to get his just deserve that something will happen and he will be spared just a little longer being a thorne in my side along with others.
Kladon is so harsh and unforgiving against his son I hate to see his reaction when he finds out about Kira and Raad.
Awesome update as always. Thank you.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed I so wish there were recorders in those days. Sap would have his head on a spear. I can't stand that slimy snake and apparently no one else can either well those that have since enough not to anyway.
I so hope he gets he just deserve and he had the nerve to boist about his deflowing Merit by force and calling her his property really. Get a grip chump.
Thank you for the update. Loving the story.
My Kira...
Thank you for sharing and I have found my Princess Kira from my imagination. Thank you for allowing me to do so. :D
Happy writing.
Thank you!
You are welcome!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Neymar Jr was used to getting everything he wanted and he had everything...except Jourdan Morris
For some reason I don't trust Cristiano and I think that Jourdan is going to get herself in trouble more ways then one. She is in a country that she does not understand or speak the language.
Yeah her mistakes are going to cost her and I hope it's not a steep bill to pay.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.