Hi all I am an advit reader love all types of genres but have to say that I/R has become my most favorite for the last 3 plus years. I have found a lot of my favorite authors are here and looking forward to reading lots of their work and finding more favorites.
Thank you for the update OK the meeting of the folk so far has been good. Jared seems a little stand offish but that is to be expected cause Mac is like a little sister to him.
Grandma seems to like him.
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OK, I am glad that she has told Carol, and I am glad they are going to go out on Friday and I am glad they are taking it slow and getting to know each other and take it from there.
I am proud of Carol so far she did not make snide remarks about Scott and so far she has not blabbed it all over the office.
Great update more please thanks.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Alright now that was hot and Mackenize are feeling each other. I was just as shocked as Mackenzie when he wrapped his arms around her and then put his hands on her butt...that was funny when she about fell over when he started doing his own thing and thinking outside himself he's just shy around other people and apparently Mac is the one to bring him out of his shell. She is good for him and maybe vice versa.
I thought so sure when she told Carol to pay up that she did that in front of Scott and that it hurt his feeling and he was going to change his mind. I am glad he got out and broke away from the germ thing but only of Mac. :D
Great update more please.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Ahhh! That was sweet it was calm makes me think there is a storm coming.
Great update more please.
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What is the deal with Carol she is beginning to royally get on my nerves.
Thanks for the update more please.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Ah that are so sweet and so into each other. I think they should just tell people they are involved. Bump what others think of either of them. As long as they make each other happy is all that matters and Carol does not have room to talk when she is known as the office slut. Rather be know to date a geek then the office slut.
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Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Ahhhhh! That is sweet they have confessed there love for one another. The meeting with the parents seemed to go over well. Aaron though is a bit much...does he have anything to talk about other then science.
I am glad that Mckenzie is going to take Scott to meet her grandmother.
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Yeah right Mack you aint slick girl. He lives in Chicago practically all his life he knows how to drive on the roads during the snow. LOL.
And Scott aint no better cause he could have told her that plus the sooner he leaves the faster he will get home...What is he going to do later when it snow more. LOL
Yall know you want to go upstairs to Mack's apartment and do some very heavy petting...going to fast pulezze what was that in New York if not start past "GO" don't collect 200 dollars.
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Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Ah!!! That was so sweet. I like that Scott knows what he wants and what he wants is Mackenzie. She finally opened up to him and wants to be with him in a relationship....good no more snicking around and it doesn't matter what the office says.
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Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Mack and Scott are so cute together. And now she is going to meet the parents. Interesting. Carol is a trip...I don't know what to think about her half the time. Like Mack I keep wondering why she is friends with her.
Nice update...keep them coming please. Thanks
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Ah!!! How cute Scott is so funny...he turns red at the slightest things. Joann seems to be cool and Aaron is very considerate indeed.
So Mack does not consider Scott her boyfriend just someone she is dating huh? I wonder does Scott think the same way?
Thanks for the update can't wait to see what is coming next.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed That was wild and Mack just continues to bring Scott out of his shell and has him doing stuff he would never think of so apparent Carol is rubbing off on him. Plus she had the nerve to say she had morals about doing it in the car but turn right around and do it @ her job in the break room.
WOW!!!! LOL!!!!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed I loved this chapter hell this story but this chapter was hilarous. I wonder if Scott will go to the party and will they have problems with Jared boys.
Great update thanks....NEXT.... :D
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Damn that was hot and Scott is such a freak.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Meet the Nichetti Family: Dominick, Carmine, Chase, and Christopher. The Nichetti Men are easy to fall for, but sometimes hard to love. Their "family" business tends to get in the way of their love lives and sometimes ruins them altogether. This is their story.
*Contains strong language, adult situations, extreme language, violence and strong sexual content*
Thank you Minx for an incredible banner!
*Jumping up and down in seat* *Clapping*
Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! I have been waiting so long for this story.
Great start as I knew it would be.
Love the brothers and cousins they all seem close net.
I like Chase and Dom they seem the quiet strong silent type but then I haven't met Chris yet who is the head of the fam.
I like Carmine too he just sown his oats before he ties Mia down ain't mad at him there @ least he knows that she will be his when she and he are both ready.
Again BRAVO! Great update I want more. :D
Wonderful Wonderful update.
I kind of figured that Alicia was pregnant with Nicky's baby. :D and I was excited when you wrote it. Now Dom has his woman and a baby on the way.
Augustin is fine as hell but the way you described him creepied me the hell out. I am happy that Chase has security on her. I wonder have they told Chris yet.
Carmine is falling for Mia hell he has always wanted her but still wants to play the field...but I thought it was funny how cool he acted and sounded when he was talking to the blond until he asked him do he want to go to the hospital with a concussion cause he was going to crown him over the head with that beer bottle. Ms. Sherri already thinking wedding bells girl you better wake up he is stictly on the hit it and quit it forum.
Chase told Sin that he loves him and vice versa. I wonder where Dorian is at if he gave him the 2mill or skipped out with it...that would be some shit if he skipped out with the money and left his sister there to contend for herself yes, he asked Chase to take care of her but still....that would be some shit if he did that. I hope he is not swimming with the fish especially if it was not his choice to do so.
Wonderful update Wonderful story. Keep it coming love your writing and so have missed you.
Thank you.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed That was a wonderful and awesome 
and well worth the wait I must say.
Valles is a creepy, scary creature. I don't think that Chase should attend the set down either but he has to show his Alphness I suppose when it comes to his woman. I have a feeling though that is only going to antagonize Valles all the more and that even if he is pay the 20 mill by Chase cause you know that sorry ass Dorian is not going to pay cause what happened to the 2 mill he got from Chase in the first place and why does he keep lying and putting his sister in danger. Anyway even if Valles gets the money he is still going to kill Dorian he has already made that clear but I think he is still going to try and go after Sinny and if by some fluke of a chance he gets a hold of her which I so hope doesn't happy Chase is going to lose his ever loving mind. He has already staked claim on lil bella...and I feel so so sorry well not not really for any fool who attempts to take her away from him.
Well girls there you have it Taya has snared our fearless leader Chris....but he is going to try and fight it every step of the way you can already tell and apparently he make our resident diva wild child nervous... 
funny...I can't wait to see and read the fireworks between them and to see what is going to make him really stand up and take notice that he wants her for more then a little rumble in the hay stack so to speak.
Well our lovely engaged couple have finally did the do...deed...horizontal polka and I must say that our Chase is a talker LOL! Anyway I thought so sure she was going to stall some more. I wonder what finally made her let go did it have anything to do with the scare from Valles?
Oh lawd no what has Carm gone and gotten himself into now and you see who he goes to in order to have his wounds tended to. Mia was trying to have her some "Me Time" and he had to come and infiltrate that time alone with his fine sexy beat up self.
Again thank you for the and taking time out of your busy schedule I know it can't bee easy trying to get out assignments and be focused. Great job chica see you on the flip side.
OMG! This was such a wonderful update! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You!
It's about time Carmie realize that Mia was his and that he wants her but I kind of understand him with him being in the business and all he doesn't want his woman to get hurt that is all that matters but I think Ms Mia could handle what ever is thrown her way. He doesn't know either yet that she is a virgin.
The Nichetti men love growling don't they and they are some possessive somethings....I LOVE IT!!!
I like how Pop Tony kept Bobby in check she was seriously getting on my nerves and that heffa had the nerve to say "How could Alicia trap her son" WTF! Girl get it right and tight it takes too and they are wild about each other :D...again LOVE IT!
Chase and Sinny are so cute well actually all of the couples are cute they all have their own style and I LOVE IT!!!
I can't wait to see what happens btwn Taya and Chris.
Loved the chptr love the story.
Thank you so much for sharing can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Glad Chris finally got his kiss he has been fiening for from Taya.
Glad Mia is finally talking to Carmine again they are so cute.
Rome seems like he has a bit more sense then his crazy cousin but I wonder can he be truly trusted and Dorian can help him set that psycho up. I thought he was all about family well Augustin is family right I guess being psycho doesn't go so well for the family huh?
I hope Dorian goes head and helps set his ass up but I hope it is not a trap and I definitely hope that Sinclair and anyone else like Taya don't get hurt in the crossfire and I think definintely that he should come clean with Chase and the Nichetti fam.
Will we be getting a pic of Rome?
Love this story love your writing can't wait for the next update I hope it is soon.
Thank you!!!!
Reviewer: Thundakat SignedThank you Cocoa for the awesome update and welcome back.
Christopher is sprung and Taya is right there with him on the sprungdom...LOL!
Augustin crazy pathetic ass cannot hit the biles of HELL quick enough for me and when it is time for him to hit dirt I so hope it is not a pleasant ride for him.
I am loving Mario and Ramero can't wait to see if anything develops more in their characters.
Avani....Luci is a good/bad boy so keep your head up and go with your heart chica.
Again Cocoa thank you very very much for the update I have missed this story.
Happy writing.
Always the odd woman out, Keisha Barrett, for once wanted to be the woman on the arm of the man of every woman's dreams. Who knew a lunch date with her girlfriends could hold the answer to her dreams.
Ethan Carrington, British international businessman and confirmed bachelor, was tired of the lifestyle he had been living. Expensive cars, trendy night clubs, leggy models/actresses, and gold diggers were the norm until the day her meet her...
Oh Beautiful! That was a delight and a pleasure.
I can't wait to the family meets him and they are so smitten with each other it is diabetic lol!!!!
KeKe's ex I want him to eat his heart out with jealousy when he sees her again and knows that she has gotten her someone 100x better then him
Pleas update again soon. I love the chemistry and the affection between the two and I am loving how Ethan though wanted to make love to KeKe is waiting until she is ready.
Thank You!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Oh I love it! I love it! I want more lots and lots more.
I like how Ethan finds Keisha attractive and not for the superficial reason but for her smile which is true because it reaches her eyes but she is sweet as well. I to don't too much care for Brandi at this moment...but there is always one out of the bunch.
I wonder what cutie is about to do.
Thanks for sharing....More please.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Love it please keep it coming....
That was so smooth how Ethan came in as the Prince in shining armor and saved the day.
I can see right now that Brandi is going to be a pain in my beehive. Let me guess she is the one out of the 2 marriages that's divorced and green is definitely not her color. :D
Please update soon
Thank you.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed Yippy! Their first date....I can't wait to see what Ethan has in mind and if he is going to spend time with her all day. At first I thought he was going to pick her up earlier like in the morning or brunch but noon is good.
I liked that they were able to talk so long getting to know each other over the phone.
Great update....Great story...please more.
Thank you.
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