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It has been Centuries since Human and Other Beings decided to live apart from each other thus the Southern and Northern Kingdoms.Two beings and Fate had other plans, what was decided by the humans, Weres and other beings had nothing to do with Kiero and Palesa most definately not Fate...



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 36745
Read Count: 11215
Published: December 31 2012
Updated: July 27 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ieks, I don't like it..
I hate stories where they put a child and a adult as mates bah bah.. talking about encouraging pedofiles.especially if the chil is like only 8.. not a tean but 8!!! but i try to keep an open mind.. but with the grammatical error and and missing words it's was too much of a geuss game of what was it that you were trying to say. Sorry this story needs alot aof work.



Author's Response:

I apologize that you found all my errors grammatical and otherwise off putting, it's understandable however your perception and understanding of my story is clearly your own. Pedophilia never crossed my mind when I wrote this, simply because none of that happens. I would think descovering one's mate does not equal sexual desires or wants, it bothers me that you read the story and came to such conclutions. I thought the main focus at the beginning of the story was the child's safe, since she exposed herself to danger. I obviously have a lot of work to do and clear up all the encouragements I send to pedophiles who visit Valent chamber to get all the pointers from my supernatural story.

Reviewer: Missjayd Signed
Date: May 06 2013

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