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Bright Ōsaka Star by puertaobierta
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 373]
Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 168068
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Actors & Actresses

Oh come on it's been nearly 4 years

You have to finish this amazing story

Please !

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Actors & Actresses

What can i say except... Waaaaaouh !!! Thank you for this beautiful story and the Time i spent reading it ( unfortunatly it was to short, i didn't want it to end). It such a great and amazing story, definitly in my top 3 here. You are so talented, you have to be published for this. I've red many stories here and sometime i feel like is always the same, same kind of alpha wealthy goodlooking emotionless males, so cliché, same plots all along. This one is so wonderfully different, it's refreshing, it's gold !. You are an amazing writter !

i so hope in a near future you'll update and finish the story.

Vous êtes une écrivaine talentueuse, donc n'arrêtez pas d'écrire, ce serait vraiment dommage. Je ne vous souhaite que le meilleur !

PS : Is it me or is something going on with this strange Takebe kid ?

Excuse my errors but english is not my native language, i'm french as maybe you've guess

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed
Date: August 17 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Actors & Actresses

Oops i forgot to rate

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17 2013
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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196756
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

First, i want to say i love your story, i really do, but Dmitri... I just can't, i don't like him. He disrespected and humiliated her so many times and now he is telling her that he's loved her from the begining ???? Is this a joke ? Did he loved her when he ignored her in front of her friends ? Did he loved her when he treated her like shit after the party when she met his father for the first time ? And did he loved her when he humiliated her at the hospital ? What kind of love is that... Now we have to understand him and feel for him because he had a terrible childhood, is it his excuse ? He just have to buy her some flowers, take her at some expensive restaurant, beg a couple of time tell her how much he loves her et voila ! No, i don't buy that. I dislike him so much right now and the way he is acting to win her back is insulting for me. I want Sasha to tell him to kiss her ass and go to hell and to find love and happyness with someone else (carter or anybody else), I know is not the way that is going to happen and infortunatly she is going right back in his arms (again). I really hate Dmitri but i love your story and i'm totally "team Sasha without Dmitri" !



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and I am happy you are enjoying the story. Just thought I'd help to clear a few things up: Dmitri hasn't yet admitted to loving her unfortunately. His point with the date wasn't to impress (Sasha is already aware of how much money he has) but he is attempting to restore the bad memories she has of him. He is finally acknowledging and admitting his mistakes when it comes to her. And I don't want you to think that all is forgiven simply because he had a bad childhood; I just want the readers to understand his reasoning a little bit more and, in order to do that, you need a bit more of his backstory. He has been independent since his mother died and coming to the realization that he felt the same need for Sasha as she did for him was new territory and scared him. So, he pushed her away. His efforts of romancing her with the roses and the restaurant isn't meant to be insulting at all. He never did these things for her when they were dating (if you remember, the night Sasha met his father was important to her because it was the first time they had a 'fairytale' date and he acknowledged her relationship to him in a public setting). For Sasha, she has never been romanced like that before and made to feel precious or cared for. So, I do think that his actions in getting her forgiveness are on the right track. He can never completely make up for what he did but the fact that he is trying to humble himself and finally show through his actions how much he wants her is a step in the right direction. Also, we shouldn't forget that while he may have overreacted at the hospital, he had every right to be angry at Sasha for overstepping. 

Again, thank you so much for your review and I hope that you grow to like Dmitri a little more and continue reading. I'll do my best to better explain Dmitri's side of things. :-)

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19 2014
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

It's strange cause i really really reeeaaally love your story but i don't like the main male character at all and i want Sasha to get over him and move on.

About the pictures, i prefere the old Sasha and the new Dmitri.

good work !

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed
Date: May 08 2014
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Across Borders by kwajeraspen
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 120]
Summary:

 

 

 

 

Simone Alexander was not adventurous by nature but she was a go-getter. When an unbelievable opportunity comes her way, she does not hesitate to seize it. Now, she finds herself half way around the world immersed in a culture completely different from her own. Here she faces challenges that push her grow in every aspect of her life; the most unexpected of them all......love.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 38379
Read Count: 34599
Published: November 11 2013
Updated: June 28 2017

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Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Waouh, that was so good, definitly worth the wait.

bravo 👏👏👏👏👏

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2017
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Choosey Lover by CaramelGal
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 298]
Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69611
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015

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Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Thank you ! You've made my day...

That was sexy, that was hot, that was great !!!

Update pleaaaaase...



Author's Response:

You’re welcome siobhan! I’m glad you enjoyed it and that update is coming soon.

CG

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13 2015
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Where are you  CaramelGal ??? I miss this story, i miss Dean and Elle.

i hope everything is ok for you and you'll be back very soon.

 

take care

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed
Date: April 13 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Main & Supporting Cast

I Can't believe i've passed this story many times before. Shame on me !

it's so good, so sweet, like a chocolate bar. Love your writing, love the characters... In fact i love everything about it... Really good work. Bravo !!!



Author's Response:

Wow, that was gracious of you! Well thanks for reading and reviewing siobhan. I only hope to keep you just as interested in future chapters.

CG

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21 2014
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Tell your story the way you want to, the way you has envisioned it and certainly not the way we, the readers/reviewers want it to be told. It's YOUR story and as long as you take pleasure to write it it will be good. I see Choosey Lovers as a story of two people who are deeply in love with each over but are incapable to express it cause they are too scared. If they were super confident male/female there would be no story to tell. So what the point...

Anyway... Keep on, i really like your writting and i'm waiting patiently for an update.

PS : excuse my english, it's not my "native tongue". I' m french.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! This review helped get my thoughts in order & keep the course. Thanks again for your support, reading and reviewing siobhan. 

SN: I would've never guessed that English wasn't your native tongue. You could've fooled me.

CG

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2014
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

That was hot ! It worth the wait, definitly.Dean handled Elle perfectly, he was THE man. We can understand, after all he waited for 7 fucking years. But i must have to admit that somewhere i miss the sweet, caring, introvert and shy Dean from the begining,he is the eason why i love this story so much from the start. He is so different from the other male characters. Please, don't turn him into an alpha one... What can i say, i have a thing for this kind of men.

Now i can't wait to read what's next. So I'm going to wait very patiently for my weekly update.

Very good work Madame. 



Author's Response:

Don’t be scurred lol. He just had to regulate this chapter. Plus, I wanted to show a different side of him. Dean is still Dean---just a little revved up. Your patience is appreciated & thanks a bunch siobhan! I always look forward to your reviews.

CG

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24 2015
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Can't pick your family by Hatty
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 243]
Summary:

You can pick your friends. You can pick your nose. But you can't pick your family.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 87982
Read Count: 45727
Published: April 06 2015
Updated: February 14 2019

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great start. I love it already...

an update please !

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Moooooore please !!!!!

this was so good. Don't take too long to update...

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10 2015
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Love, God & Ultimatums by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Despite the absurdity of bargaining with the Almighty while topless and bound in the bedroom of a man whose last name she can’t remember, Diya De la Roy gives God an ultimatum:  Send her a man and a love worth having by next Valentine's Day, or she would give up on both.  Forever.  

Unbeknownst to Diya, she'll get that and more, along with a lesson in how perfectly wicked divine humor can be.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13212
Read Count: 11185
Published: May 02 2015
Updated: May 02 2015

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

I looooove this story, but why oh why has it be a short story. It was fun, hilarious, sexy and sweet. Your characters were great, very well written. You are so talented.

thanks you a lot for sharing



Author's Response:

YW.  Thanks for the wonderful review!  As it stands, the story is a short.  But if something else comes to me, I'll be sure to add more.  Thanks Siobhan!



Author's Response:

YW.  Thanks for the wonderful review!  As it stands, the story is a short.  But if something else comes to me, I'll be sure to add more.  Thanks Siobhan!

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2015
My Catfish by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Clark E. has always been the mysterious one out of all of his friends. With a new company on the rise and heartbreak in his past he has many doubts about women. Taking a chance and from the suggestion of his good friend he goes online and starts a romance with Katrina.

Katrina is the ugly duckling that has been named in her family. Living in the shadows of her older sister and cousin she becomes closed off from the outside world. Her only escape is the internet that gives her confidence. She makes a fake profile pretending to be someone else but then starts to develop feelings for Clark.

What happens when these two get to meet in the real world?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 8175
Read Count: 13733
Published: May 23 2015
Updated: August 03 2016

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Title: Chapter 3: Sound Familiar

I'm enjoying this story so far. I hope you'll update more frequently

good work !

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17 2015
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Love, God & Negotiations by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 765]
Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78672
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - T.M.I. (Revised)

Waouw, what a powerful chapter. That was great !!!  It insane how talented you are. All you stories are pure gold.

Brandon has his flaws, his dark side, i like that, i've a thing for tortured souls. I can totally understand Diya, the man she love has tell her there was a woman who he was so in love, that the tried to commit a suicide because of her. So i can totally understand her anger and jalousy. She knows it's out of place and irrational, but she just feels it, humans tend to be irrationals sometimes. And it's better she said nothing at the time, she needs to handle the information, but i trust her she will, she is intelligent and she loves him et care for him to much. After all he is her mister perfect isn't he ??? Anyway i can't wait for the next chapter. Terrific job, as always...

by the way, you've removed your first story here. Are you going to publish ???

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing your insight, Siobhan, and for the awesome review!!!  I wholeheartedly agree.  You can control what you say and do, but you can't help what you feel.  This--love, dating interracially, Brandon's traumatic past--is all new to Diya.  I think it would have been unrealistic to have her feel or react any way but how she did, especially after the day she had.  This is a lot for her, and there's even more to come.

I was planning to publish Resignation, but decided against it.  The revised plan is to edit and repost it and the sequel.   

Thanks again, Siobhan! 

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

You are a real story teller Joelle Jax. Thank you for the constent updates 😍😍😍😍😍

Great chapter... As always



Author's Response:

Thanks Siobhan!!!

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2015
Obsessed with Ember by swirly_girl
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Six years ago Ember Michaels left behind her loving family, dear friends, her hometown, and a hurtful event that split her town apart. Now with new friends, finally finishing college, and starting her dream job; she begins to feel like she can enjoy life again. But what can she do when her past wants a future. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 22018
Read Count: 15803
Published: December 28 2015
Updated: December 31 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is that rapist the male lead ? if he is( and i guess he is), i just don't know what to say... like the previous reviewer said this story should have a rape warning, cause if i knew i definitly would have not red it. Too many women are raped every day and maybe some of the readers here. it's very disturbing to see the lead female taking pleasure while being raped. I really don't want my review to offend you but right now i feel really offended. Sorry and take care



Author's Response:

Your right, I spent nearly an hour on trying to select that as an additional warning, I will resubmit and try to add that as well as BDSM. It would not let me select those extra warnings as well. I do apologize. I will work on it right now.

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed
Date: December 28 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.