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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

After a rough Summer Alisha Easterly believes that it can only get better with the beginning of her Junior Year of high school... unfortunately sometimes what you want and what you get don't always coincide...

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 36862
Read Count: 38700
Published: February 03 2010
Updated: January 14 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Eleven Part One- Tailspin

gahhhh!!! write soon PLEEEASE

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: April 06 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214754
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: June 14 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104078
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22

I am in love with this story. You're a great writer.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing; I am very appreciative:-)

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: December 22 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Kwon Jae Hwa had been prepared to succeed. He had worked hard for everything he had earned all of his life, and that resulted in getting him to great places in life.

One day, his life is interrupted by a vibrant, young, aspiring dancer. She's carefree, and the complete opposite of what he is used to, but something tells him that she is exactly what he wants.

He has no reason to doubt that she feels the same about him, until she is offered the opportunity of a lifetime that puts a halt on everything they have, and Jae Hwa is left with a great responsibility to handle on his own.

Jae Hwa must face the one hardship he never thought he would have to go through with his first love.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 28452
Read Count: 69800
Published: February 14 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14.1

Love your stories. Good story, but it's a little slow.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: June 08 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

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Aaliyah Wyndham is a twenty-seven year old attorney working in the field of Entertainment Law. She has had a crush on her next-door neighbor, C.E.O. Gabriel Cortez, for over a year. Following a break-in, the two share a romantic interlude that seems quite promising, until Aaliyah realizes that Gabriel doesn‘t realize who she is! Aaliyah decides that for his oversight, she wants to make Gabriel pay, and make him pant.

There is only one problem with this plan: Lucas D'Alessandro, her best friend since childhood. He’s been Aaliyah‘s “Big Brother” for so long that she never notices when she begins to feel decidedly unlike his sister. Meanwhile, he is facing the same quandary, struggling to decide whether to pursue a more intimate connection with Aaliyah or to leave the field clear for someone else, namely Gabriel.

Shall Aaliyah rest her case with Gabriel, or shall she make a motion to Amend her Heart with Lucas?

This is a sweet romance story. It has been published, and so this is only an excerpt.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Ingenue
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15142
Read Count: 64063
Published: March 02 2013
Updated: April 19 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

lol beyonce didnt make a curvy figure legendary. That was around before she was even thought of.



Author's Response:

Lol! I totally agree, but I wanted to make sure it was more current. After all, haven't you heard? She has been named the "Beloved Mistress of the Universe," and she's "The Hottest Chick In The Game!"

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: April 06 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 72]
Summary:

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Lana and Lucas have an arrangement. Something that works for the both of them. At least Lana thought it did.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8868
Read Count: 11845
Published: March 12 2013
Updated: April 13 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Putting on a show

I love this story. And I like Lana...for the record :)

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: April 26 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196745
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Don't really like dmitri. He's a little shallow.



Author's Response:

I hope you grow to like him! Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: June 29 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

she's a little naive and gullible. still dont like him lol. he's a work in progress.



Author's Response:

Aw, :-( Please don't give up on them. They may surprise you! Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: June 29 2013

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

She gave in waaaay to easily.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: February 22 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 353]
Summary:

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82570
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chance Encounter

wooow lol. really short



Author's Response:

Now, now.   Chapter 20 is the longest chapter in this saga and more is coming real soon!

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: August 02 2013

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Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 197]
Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37786
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Beautiful story



Author's Response:

Thank you, Lonieg!  So glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: December 18 2013

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[Reviews - 702]
Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - I Will But I Won't

I thought this story was so supposed to seem realistic. I'm sorry but what just happened was not realistic. Nevertheless, still love the story. Natalia is a confusing character though. She was constantly calling Anthony out for the stuff he did, but Jamsion gets away with everything kuz he's so "perfect???"...more like creepy. It's evident that she's still hasn't fully healed from what happened with richard or anthony because she's continuing on a horrible spiral. She needs to try focusing on her a little more and figuring out what she wants and take a step back from relationships. She's strong though, I'm sure she'll figure herself out, hopefully it won't be too little too late!!



Author's Response:

Natalia was accommodating when it came to Jamison because, as you pointed out, she was still traumatized over the loss of the pregnancy and her relationships with both Anthony and Richard, and because Jamison was patient with her and willing to give the very thing they had refused her: The dignity of being acknowledged before his family (a family that embraced her as one of their own).

I'm not sure what exactly about the chapter you found unrealisitc, or if it was the chapter as a whole.  But in light of Natalia's history with both Anthony and Richard, Jamison's ability and willingness to give her the future she wanted, and the fact that I wrote it, it's safe to assume I would beg to differ.  If you'd like a more specific response, you're welcome to email me at joellejax@ymail.com or leave another review if you prefer.

 

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starhalf-star
Date: April 18 2015

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - "No Thanks" Giving

she placates too much



Author's Response:

Once again, not sure what you're referring to (something general or specific).  In this chapter, she let Richard in but was abrasive and allowed him to believe they might get to together later because she knew it was the only way he would leave.  Not my definition of placation (or Webster's), but you're certainly entitled to your interpretation.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: April 18 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40861
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

"You catch more flies with honey than you do with sour milk." In THIS case, that's interpretation for "Roll over and do what the man tells you to do." Weeak. Still like the story though! 

 

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: March 09 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Elise definitley deserves an apology too. Lukas is a colossal ass and why does she let him and her father run all over her? I thought she was suppossed to be strong and successful. She's a bit of a pushover.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: June 13 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 164]
Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 54480
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Reese is a colossal jerk.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: September 19 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 573]
Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103525
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018


Title: Chapter 26: Uninvited Pt. 2

I think Just because someone told her that Henry was her husband doesn't mean she wouldnt have sex with Brian. As far as she's concerned she KNOWS Brian, and as a person who suffers from memory lost who they know is actually really important to how they react in situations. That part of the story where she decided not to sleep with him was beyond weird for me. He's traveling and staying in another state for her and she's telling him I can't sleep with you kuz I'm married to a guy I have no recollection of??? That makes no sense, i feel really bad for Brian. He's been putting up with her since Day 1 and all he wants is to love her. Still enjoying the story, however. I have a feeling Kelly/Zoey is going to revert back to her older self which unfortunately was very weak. I'm really hoping Kelly/Zoey allows this experience of having a coma make her a stronger person...she's already seeming to be unstable. For awhile it seemed like her character was a strong woman but that seems to be fading. Crossing my fingers...hoping im wrong!!!

Reviewer: lonieg Signed
Date: July 23 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

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Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted. 


Including her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11368
Read Count: 16318
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

She looks a little bit tacky.

Author's Response:

I disagree. I like how she looks, but thank you for your review. 

Reviewer: lonieg Signed half-star
Date: August 15 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215322
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: COLORLESS

I love the way you write!! I think some ppl just dont like to hear things about racism because they want to believe it no longer exists.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22 2014

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SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40809
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Loved it! Why so short though? There's not much happening with each chapter. I was happy to see mostly dialogue this time tho!! Finally :)

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 27 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I think the chapter's should be longer. I'd rather wait a while for a good chapter, then get small chapter's where nothing really happens for half of the time.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstar
Date: July 03 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

The fact that she kissed Dominic or even confronted him about crushing on him was totally out of her character, it didn't even fit the person you were building her up to be. Can we atleast lay the groundwork of who she is and get to know her and Dominic's relationship better before she starts doing these random, nonsensical things? That whole part didn't even make sense. The guy shows zero signs of interest in you and you put yourself out there like that? C'mon that's not even how women like her would react. So out of character it was like I was reading about a different person. The transition wasn't smooth...just weird.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: December 04 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

There's too much going on in the story so it moves at a snails pace and then there's these random leaps to some real action. You're a good writer, but this story needs to be filtered out.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2015

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[Reviews - 298]
Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69611
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

All this ratchet music is a such a turn off.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed star
Date: November 22 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Tracie is so annoying!!

Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: November 22 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.