Penname: Margo Betts [Contact]

Real name: Loretta

Member Since: January 20 2013

Membership status: Member

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

 

 

 

His greatest gift....

 

He sits on the floor blanketed by dust, chipped paint and years of abandonment and waits. He hasn't to wait too long and soon Beethoven's Appassionata fills the air, the quiet and ominous arpeggios of the first movement, full of longing echoes through his very bones.

There is nothing else in this moment but the beauty of the melody cosseting him into a world unlike any he's ever known. The transition is gradual. Colors creep in from the edges of his vision turning his monochrome prison into a realm of diluted colors. The strains of piano chords ascend and descend skimming effortlessly over complex intervals with dexterity.

It is wondrous. Tints of violets, reds and greens wash over the gray coolness of his vision, giving him the ability to see color. Three months now she's been able to do this. Gift Cyvian with the impossible.

 

Will be his ultimate downfall...

In the ongoing war between Bloodletters and Werekins, demon mercenary Cyvian's allegiance is no one but himself. Having struck a deal with the Bloodletter king to keep the demons from his territory in exchange for temporary solace in his city, he does exactly that. But when that contract is broken, threatening the life of the human female he has vowed to protect, nothing and no one will stop him from keeping her safe.

 

(The amazing picture of my hero doesn't belong to me, but from a great artist on Deviantart!)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6650
Read Count: 4443
Published: November 30 2011
Updated: October 19 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good story keep going

Reviewer: Margo Betts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

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Loving a man is hard enough try loving the devil?

 

How do you love a man that doesn't want to be love?

 

How can you care for a person who could careless about you?

 

How do you try to find a soul mate from a soulless man?

 

Jacqueline finds herself sold to devil she try's to unfreeze a heart that seems untouchable.

 

The harder she try's to love him the more lost she gets into the battle of loving the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 58549
Read Count: 113947
Published: September 24 2012
Updated: March 31 2016


Title: Chapter 8: Red Light

Keep going can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: Margo Betts Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 13 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 217]
Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49948
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Can't wait for next chapter!

Reviewer: Margo Betts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

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Merri Tallon is a fifty year old widow that wants to have some fun.  Her single adult children think that she should sit in the corner and knit, but Merri has something else in mind!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14750
Read Count: 7549
Published: April 05 2013
Updated: April 09 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

I like this story so far. Very interesting.

Reviewer: Margo Betts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 189]
Summary:

An innocent night of fun ruins the lives of two people who realize they are screwed without each other but especially with each other.

 

"My body is your party"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44180
Read Count: 56975
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: October 04 2013


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

You have redeemed yourself. Thanks for writing a miracle in your story. Can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

*wipes sweat* woo. Thanks for sticking along :)

Reviewer: Margo Betts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Can a beauty ever truly love a beast?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 15551
Read Count: 72266
Published: August 04 2013
Updated: October 19 2013


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Ok so this story has caught my attention. Keep going with it.

Reviewer: Margo Betts Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 01 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.