Penname: Penelope [Contact]

Real name: Eddice

Member Since: February 20 2013

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CONTENT & HAPPY!



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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

You are my sunshine.


My only sunshine.


You make me happy, when skies are grey. 


You'll never know dear, how much I love you.


So please don't take, my sunshine away. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6337
Read Count: 10584
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: July 12 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Hopefully, she will make his life hell (no pun intended).

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: July 12 2013

Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

strange that mom and dad knew this day was coming and did nothing to teach her defense skills.  They kept her innocent and basically defenseless.

I wish Jamie was tough and had street smarts, bc between Hades aand Venus, she will be naked scrubbing floors and wimpering any day now. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: July 12 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 36]
Summary:

 

 

 

Beck hates his job. His model boss, Heather, is a complete bitch. The only upside to working there is looking at her in the little shorts stomping around the house. However Beck's luck on the job just may change when the opportunity arises to tame the beast. 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: Hollywood Gems
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9431
Read Count: 8431
Published: July 15 2013
Updated: July 19 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Pick Me Up Then...

this is a pretty good story.  the guy is funny and keeps Cameron in check.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: July 20 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 353]
Summary:

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82570
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chance Encounter

Too bad Billy can't study law overseas...wait, he can, or move to California just to keep Paris safe.  Too time consuming to try and change ignorant minds. 



Author's Response:

Billy has scholarships which is why he's sticking with William and Mary.  Unless he feels that they are in danger, he's going to stay with the plan.  thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: August 08 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Paris better get with the program, bc being naive will get her killed.  Billy is a fighter and smart and will hopefully know how to protect his wife.  He may just have to whip some ass to get respect for him and his family, esp. if they plan to stay in that town.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: August 09 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

When everything else fails, always remember that the last thing to rely on...

 

 

Is your vehiclele. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 758
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: July 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Just Not Worth It

More...pretty please?

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: July 19 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Roddrick Kennedy likes to think that a strong dose of worrying is good for her health, and keeps her in control of her life. When she finds herself taking on everyone and their problems, she sees that maybe she should turn her attention to herself every once in a while. When Milo Vitale comes along to teach her how life can be stress free, she discovers herself in for a whirlwind of change as he helps to flip everything upside down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Femslash, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 58790
Read Count: 46665
Published: July 23 2013
Updated: February 28 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

now that we know their backgrounds and they are both survivors, we will understand why these two will be wary when meeting again.  Hopefully the worst is behind them and they can learn from the negative people that were in their lives...sike!! lol   I'm ready for Jade and even Rodd. crazy daddy to come back into the picture. 



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: July 25 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Rochelle should forgive hima nd change the number.  I think our girl Rodd is prego.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: August 02 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

BOOK 2

 

Mayte is a woman reborn. It's been 8 years since she left the torment of high school and she is truly feeling herself. But when a bully from her past life stumbles into her place of employment, all of sudden she feels like a bullied kid again; she wants revenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: Hollywood Gems
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15464
Read Count: 14746
Published: July 24 2013
Updated: August 18 2013


Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue: Four Years Later

very good epilogue--she should sent Montana a picture of the ring on her finger :-).

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Date: August 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12991
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am a tough babe, but this brought tears to my eyes.  Hopefully, she will soon escape her misery and Camden.  He pushed her down stairs?   No way I can see any romance between these two.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: July 25 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just read your summary--thank God someone new will come in and hopefully save this girl.  Hate bullies!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: July 25 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

stan is a psychopath and shefeels there is a light at the end of the tunnel; poor child has never known love or a warm touch.    I would live in the woods before i stayed and put up with stan.  I take it he an important man in the town and most towns do have a stan or two.  can't wait to read about the new guy you bring.  your writing and story telling is fantastic

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Date: July 29 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Longer please... pretty please.



Author's Response:

I try. lol

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Date: June 21 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

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A collection of romantic/erotic short stories based on black women and the men that loves them.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5911
Read Count: 4807
Published: August 05 2013
Updated: August 07 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Baby, I'm Home (chapter II)

very good story!  Thank you.



Author's Response:

No, thank you for reading and reviewing!!!

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Date: August 06 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

It takes a strong, confident woman to allow a man to take the lead. It takes an even stronger man to be able to take her where she needs to go.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15313
Read Count: 7270
Published: August 15 2013
Updated: November 28 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

so where did Oliver go to relieve his stress?  Hope it wasn't Meredith.  I think Din. is going to have to stand up to him and he is being abusive and it is beginning to be a turn off-- I am seeing Oliver as an old, bitter and mean man. Does he have a nice side?  Everybody can see he is attracted to her from the teacher, his ex, to his friend. 



Author's Response:

thank you for the feedback! hopefully i won't make you lose your patience..i'm trying to go for a more realistic progression/development of the characters. but you are right, Oliver is a bit of a hard pill to swallow at the moment.

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Date: September 13 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

I am enjoying your story and look forward to the updates.  Oliver need to get with the program and figure out why he is mean to her.  Our girl needs to look within herself and figure out why she is willing to settle for someone disrespecting her--she is worth a million cougars.   

I don't think Mac would be good for her in the long run, but he is good for her ego.   



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I think every person, except maybe Yelena, has some growing up to do... just like in life, there's always room for growth and change. Glad you're enjoying it!

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Date: August 16 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Pushing the horrible memories of her past in the back of her mind, Poppy DeFleur, is a young woman with a dark past who is struggling to find herself with no clue of what love and friendship truly means. Prince Beaumont is an educated man who is struggling to find happiness in his hometown where he is seen as a second class citizen despite being a role model for the children in his community. Will these two come together and realize they are meant for one another? Or will their differences despite their similaries tear them apart and send them on a journey neither bargained for?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Historical, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1353
Read Count: 866
Published: August 16 2013
Updated: August 16 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I say, kill mr parsons and make a run for it.  her godmother has to know what is going on.



Author's Response:

Interesting, I like how you say kill him and make a run for it. More to come.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: August 18 2013

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Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37786
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't trust the other female roommate and I would be leery of him, too.  He should explain why being a Muslem and Iranian makes a relationship impossible for them and what he would expect from her---then she may decide that he's right.   



Author's Response:

Joss will later discover Eshan's reasoning.  It's not about his expectations for her.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Penelope!

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Date: September 13 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great update!  I would ignore the note--she is heading toward a nervous breakdown--dealing with a near rape, E. note writing azz, a sneaky roommate, and being overworked in a hostile environment.

I wish she would tell her roomate what her bfriend did (bet her roomie wouldn't believe her) , but maybe the note passer will overhear and tcb. 



Author's Response:

Lol! I think you're probably right about Sahirah.  But we'll see for sure--and what Eshan's next move is, if Joss gives him a chance to make one--next chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Penelope!

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Date: September 24 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Very good and the ending left me with a smile---a big ole smile!   Thank you for sharing your talent with us.



Author's Response:

YW.  Thank you Penelope!

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Date: October 18 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

With E. gone, Chris can step right in and go after Joss.  I hope her anger comes out and she beats his azz and save some for S.



Author's Response:

Lol.  You never know.  Thanks Penelope!

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Date: October 16 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm glad mama Pearl brought her back down to earth.  She is going to get hurt and she can't blame him bc he did warn her. 

He is going to be hurt when he is handcuffed and charged, and finds out Joss kept her mouth shut, as if Chris would just go away. 

I bet S. move Chris in--her dumb butt would hold Joss down for Chris, if he told her to.



Author's Response:

You're probably right about Sahirah.  As far as Joss and Eshan are concerned, we'll soon see what horrors await them.  Update posted.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Penelope!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving Pearl.  Joss should have taped the conversation with Chris.



Author's Response:

You might be right.  Thanks Penelope!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2013

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Summary:

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10916
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Resentment

This is good, please continue.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Ring the Alarm

Thank you.  Time for Aurora to meet someone, too and then they could double date.  

So, I am thinking Aurora will meet Catherine (with a 'K') and realize Ethan has chosen his mom to date.  Thank goodness Ian recognizes what mommie dearest has been doing and chose his wife--now to knock some sense into Ethan.

If Ethan can have hot sex and be happy with Catherine with a K, why not ask her to marry him?  I know he and Aurora have been divorced for two yrs but he has no problem sticking it to someone else and that just feels like cheating to me.  I for one am glad Aurora is ready to move on, even though I don't believe it.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08 2016

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