Penname: Penelope [Contact]

Real name: Eddice

Member Since: February 20 2013

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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Porter had been gone for while, traveling and moving on with his life. His father’s illness brings him home, but what he didn’t expect was to be drawn back in by the reason why he left—her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14802
Read Count: 11210
Published: December 28 2013
Updated: April 12 2016


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Porter and Jess are settling, but within eight yrs he DID move on, so he gets what he gets.  

Avery and Hudson have a relationship that works for them.  I, too, think she is covering for him (gay) and his covering for her (unwed mother/illegitimate son)---they are in the Bible Belt of the South and in a twon apparently ran/owned by Porter's family.

Wonder what Porter's dad did to break them apart and if his family knows about little seven yr old Travis?  Why did Porter never come back for Avery, never even checked up on her?  He lsot out on knowing his son.

Hard to empathsize with Porter in his present loveless relationship, and put up next to Hudson...he comes in dead last.



Author's Response:

It has been a long time and the two have both moved on. Some more than other's I think though ;) Interesting what you said about Porter's dad! Father and son definitely aren't "close" like he said :)

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Date: April 08 2016

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

So does Porter's friends know about Travis?  They sure were quick to pull his attention away from Hudson and the kids.  

I expected Jess to be gone the next morning.  His mom is being neutral in her son's relationship, but moms can tell when there is love lacking where her kids are concerned.

 Guess salesmanship run in the family, because Travis had it going on in the marketing ideas, for one so young.

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Date: April 12 2016

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[Reviews - 76]
Summary:

 

British Mogul, Sir Benjamin Harvey Nichols VI has always gotten everything he wanted out of life. He worked hard and played hard. He lived in a world of celebrities, models, and money. However, a series of tragic events has him re-evaluating his priorities. When fate serves him a cup, which will he choose?

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 14759
Read Count: 17240
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: January 25 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

If Jazz sees Ben dallying with Stacy, I think she will nix any idea of him hitting on her--she won't put up with it and that is what he needs.

 Can't wait to see Jazz put Stacy in her place and Ben become jealous of Edward hanging around. 

I love your updates--thank you.

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Date: January 16 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

If Stacy knew about the connection between Ben and Jazz, she would have given her the wrong address.  This could get messy, bc if Jazz finds out Ben sleeps with his employees, she is going to stay away from him (Title or no Title), and just do her job. 

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Date: January 13 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am so feeling these two and the story is pretty funny, too.

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Date: January 11 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Looking forward to more.

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Date: January 08 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Why did Ben cheat on Bella with his assistant?  The same assistant is going to give him trouble when he brings someone new into the p and I love their picicture.  Jasmine is smart and a quick thinker --looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

You are right about his assistant Penelope. The answer to your question will be revealed soon. Thanks for your review!

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Date: January 09 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40861
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Deepest sympathies for the loss of your nephew.

Please don't let this be the end of this wonderful story. 

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Date: April 04 2016

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Thank you for showing a softer side of Elise.  So glad she came to her senses and realize she was being a tad bit mean--also glad she stopped chasing him.

 I love this story and so glad they finally got it on :-).  Sex scene was hot and tastefully done. 

No regrets and hopefully Lukas won't back slide when his family come into town.  He may want a fwb relationship, but seeing her friendly with the good-looking ex will nip that idea.  

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Date: July 23 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I hope he works her azz off.  If she is wearing heels, he should walk her all over that site--she would show up in safer and proper attire the next time.  I am hoping she is has more substance than the mother of his daughter had--gotta feeling she is going to love the daughter.He is going to be a hard nut to crack, bc right now she is acting just like his ex and his guard is up.

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Date: January 31 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Well done--I look forward to your updates.  I am starting to like Elise.  Poor Ben, uselessly fighting against the chemistry that is between them.  Can't wait to meet the daughter and will she have a nanny (Elise competition)?

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Date: February 17 2014

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Elise should not chase him anymore.  Lukas has issues only Lukas can come to term with.  If Elise was to stay with Lukas, she would have to walk on eggshells.  Sad to say, but Elise is going to be glad she didn't open up her heart to him.

Help his daughter get use to the change of moving to another country (she will fall in love with Mila), but do not chase this man anymore.

So glad you updated, bc your story is so well written that it stays with me.

I think her female friend is in on the sabotage and I hope Lukas sees her with her ex.  The ex will tell him straight that he is glad Lukas messed up.

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Date: November 26 2014

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Hope all is well and please don't stay away so long again.  I love your story and will read anything your are willing to give on these two.  

Elise is shocked, because if Lukas has a daughter, where is the mother or wife---I think she needs to pull back and realize that Lukas is not ready for her, yet.  If the man did not even think enough of her to mention he had a child...  Elise can now stop punishing herself over his actions.  I hope she ignores the hell out of him at the gala, before her head explodes. 

As for Likas, even with his mom speaking with him, he is still able to walk away from someone he feels so strongly about.  I can understand him not telling Elise about Hannah, but to kick her out without explanation...yeah it's time for Elise to just back off.  These two have chemistry and belong together, but right now they need to comunicate or move on, separately.

Elise is smart and hopefully her instincts will kick in with the Oliver character, but she is so wrapped up in Lukas that she will ignored the warning.

 

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Date: September 13 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Who did Oliver come to claim?

Is Lukas jealous of other men in Elise life/past or care of being hurt , again?  Probably both.

If I was Elise I would be hurt that he didn't think enough of me to even mention a child. I think this may make her focus on protecting her heart and distancing herself from him.  Hopefully, he will notice. 

Miss you, please update.

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Date: October 13 2015

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I am so glad Lukas finally knows how Elise feels and even happier for Elise to admit how she feels to herself.  Kori took the bulls by the horn and confronted Lukas and that is what friends do.  

Noticed how his parents quickly saw the chemistry between these two--they want their son to be happy and knows Elise will make him and Mila happy.   

Hoping Elise don't settle for Keith, because that is what he wants to do, maybe he will meet someone at his cousin's wedding.

I hope Elise avoids Lukas and makes him work for her.  I bet his parents help rope her in for him.  Maybe they can get her dad to help, because he senses more between the two, too.  

I really love your story and eagerly await the updates.  Thank you.

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Date: November 22 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Poor Lukas--always snoozing and losing.  Maybe her dad can help him out.  More please!

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Date: November 30 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I am thinking Oliver is after Koki or Elise's Mom; if it is the mom, who is Elise's dad?

I found the way her dad being protective of her sweet, but the intense way he felt about her having sex was a bit yucky--how old is Elise, again?

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Date: December 01 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Go get your woman, Lukas!

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Date: January 24 2016

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Alright Lukas went and got his woman!  I love this story and I really think it is wise to have them take this new path slower.  Also glad that they will return as a united front; will need it for what you probably have awaiting them.

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Date: June 27 2016

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[Reviews - 292]
Summary:

She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Southern Gentlemen
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90
Read Count: 69509
Published: January 11 2014
Updated: October 19 2015


Title: Alexa and Brody

WHEW!!

10-10-10 Brody!

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Date: March 31 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

This is good and Brody is smart.

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Date: January 13 2014

Title: Alexa and Brody

this is getting better and better and glad to be invited on the ride.  thanks for the update.

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Date: January 22 2014

Title: Alexa and Brody

I really wanted Alexa to wipe the floor withTattoo, but I think Alexa is smart and weighed her chances--she may not win and the tattoo said she wouldn't say anything about the call to Brody.  

Alexa learned an important lesson on the schoolground when dealing with a bully--never trust a word he/she says and go down swinging.  Instead she handed over all her $$ and had to flash her goodies--that was humiliating and kinda like a stripper paying her customers (caught the hint on the dancing shoes sitting next to the shoes that helped to pay the bills).  

If Alexa don't come at least halfway clean with Brody, she needs to get ready for a long uncomfortable ride or get to stepping with the thumb out.  

Personally, I think she needed to confront Tattoo or sucker punch her and get her money back--Alexa kneed the drunk bc she knew Brody would hurt him and get in trouble.  She has saved her sister and nephew at least once, so I know she can give Tattoo something to think about.

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Date: March 03 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

This was deep!  Brody is just as senstive and sweet as Griff--go get her Brody!  He is going to be so disappointed in Chloe, bc Chloe was looking out for Chloe (she took the money, while pretending to look out for Brody).  

Where does Alexa think she is going?  She has no money and the drop-off point seems to be in the niddle of nowhere.  

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Date: March 09 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Go on Pop!  Got his hand on that lower back--we all know that means 'mine' and things are getting 'there'.  I love romance stories with older couples.

Brody needs to get back on the road with his sweet self and get his girl; maybe she will talk this time.  I just love the way you write.  

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Date: March 10 2015

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