Title: Chapter 23: QUESTION
The way you have written your story has been done in such an outstanding form that I feel as though I know Henry, therefore Henry's POV is not needed, imo.
Henry is scared; scared of loving Val and scared of comittment to any woman. He don't want to be like his father, but that is who he is emulating. His early example of love came from his parents; that example was nothing to brag on.
Even though Henry has issues, his POV won't change the fact that he hurt Val, badly. Now the worst thing was when she saw him on the Internet... I wouldn't want to know Henry's POV--he spilled his guts, was super affectionate, introduced her to his family, rocked her world, gave her a kitty, and then disappeared to show up much later on the Internet smiling and happy.
Even if Henry was in the hospital or in jail he would have ascess to a phone, so there is no excuse. Nah, a POV is not required, Henry just needs to come correct, with knee pads.
sidenote: i saw you had put in an update and I got all excited. Before clicking on update I wanted to enjoy this and got myself a PB&J and made a smoothie...clicked on it and saw QUESTION, Giiirrrll...
Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: January 26 2014