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Ezekiel's parents took extreme measures to keep him hidden from his controling racist grandfather. Ezekiel was adopted and raised by Rosa a black woman and his life is now about to take a drastic change.
Give Ms Green the check and quit bc she should have given L the benefit of the doubt.
Talk to her father and Ms R. Zeke should be told, but now L is scared of the power the old man has--she should have called his bluff. Wonder if W. will show Z the pics?
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He was a bad boy who was used to getting whatever he wanted.
She was the good girl who refused to bow down to his ways.
Together they clashed.
Natasha is a user and it would be good to cut her loose early, besides she probably told him what callie had said. Yourstory is very good and makes me not only smile, but lol.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed I just read all the chapters and the story is interesting.
I think Callie can find other people to hang out with or better yet get a part time job. She probably should date too bc Darren's nose is wide open for Natasha's silly, mean girl azz--and that's nothing to brag on.
Darren did act like a bully, but apaprantly he was a sensitive one bc she caught him crying like a big ole baby. These people are acting like they are in middle school.
What makes Nat thinks Callie is after Darren?
Glad to see Callie man up to Nat, but it is time for Callie to move on and please have enough pride to not go to a party you weren't invited to.
Each chapter keeps getting better and better!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed Truth be told, Kari was the drug. The heroin only added to the high I felt when I was with her...
Kari should have changed---a child will do that to you. At least he will be able to recognize the signs if things start going downhill, and he was able to escape before...eagerly awaiting an update!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed It's been fifteen years since Aria has smelled the sweetness of Tennessee. She's been running as hard and fast as she can, but he's always there, just a step behind her. She'll never be free of him... but the question is, does she want to be?
Whoa! This is one tight, emotionally-charged beginning; very well done in giving us a past and present on this couple.
She made her choice, went about it wrong for a long time--15 yrs and couldn't drop a line, email, phone call to say sorry?
Oddly, I understand why she ran and I think she has more than paid for it--job she hates, boyfriend who means nothing, and an ex who has moved on. Please don't add homewrecker to her list, bc Aria is only surviving, not living
Justin has been with Harper for 4 yrs, there are emotions invested--unless they have an 'understanding'. Justin changed from being that sweet kid the day she ran out on him and after 15 yrs he is a man. Oh he is going to punish her and he owes her nothing; 15 years is a long time to hold out hope for anyone!
Wonder if Harper is staying with him in their old house? I can barely wait till your next update--Happy New Year!
Happy New Year to you as well! Thank you for the read and review! I can sympathize with Aria as well, getting married at 20 is pretty daunting. You've barely had time to figure out who you are and how to take care of yourself, let alone another person. In her mind, she had only one way out and she took it. But, if she hasn't moved on, how can we expect Justin move on? I mean, he was the one who got left at the altar. How can he be in a committed relationship with another woman with this hanging in the background?
I'm trying to play devil's advocate here, lol. Thank you again for the read and review :)
Reviewer: Penelope Signed Is this the end, bc I think Justin can move on from her and be happy? Your story is so good it made me teary...hell, it made me cry :-).
This isn't the end yet :) I have a few more parts to this in my head.. possibly another longer story featuring these two as well. Only time will tell... Thank you for the read!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed Don't settle--let ted, tom, don or whatever his name is go. He is settling, too and Harper can step, also. He may have found someone else anyway. Why can't she work in her hometown, if they get back together? Love your long updates. Your story is very good and I look forward to more.
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Don't leave him hanging, but do youi for now?
Reviewer: Penelope Signed Tina Hamilton's mother always told her to travel in style for she never knows who she could run into. Who knew her mothers words would actually prove true.
Keep it going, please. I am all for the man being the pursuer, but she should call him...one time.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed English, please.
I want to say they moved too fast, but agre with Tina's Fk it thought (translation: you only live once :-).
Reviewer: Penelope Signed More...please
Reviewer: Penelope Signed Not everyone gets a happy ending...
Hey guys,
Heart of Lies Book 1&2 have now been published under one of my pennames Alma Muerte.
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She has to realize her full powers and go back and save her Wolf King...she just has to! I am so into this story---it is just that good, I can even forgive him for marrying the 'other woman'.
Love your willingness to forgive Arric, and I (never using my mobile to respond to reviews again :( accidentally deleted one of your reviews. Hope you can forgive me too!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed I thought her uncle had said Lyssa could raise her child away from Annabel and Eros.
I have fingers and toes crossed that Lyssa babe could be Arric's.
Will Eros destroy Annabel, if his child(?) is threaten by her? Hope so.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed Leopold and Lyssa could be a couple, bc unless the wife is dead there is nothing for her with Arric.
Hi Penelope,
If that happened, I envisage bloodshed, a whole lot of alpha bloodshed. Thanks for reviewing.
K.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed OMG!!! You can't just go cold turkey on us and leave us hanging.
Just pure breath taking writing.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed I just love reading a story that puts me right there in the heat of battle, where the characters emotions become a part of me.
I can't wait to see where you take this: will she have sex with Eros? Will she have his child? Is she perhaps already pregnant with Arric's child? What about Arric's wife--has she gone insane, yet?
Thank you for the update, reading each chapter has been a true pleasure.
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Eros may eventually earn her 'like', but never her 'love'. Arric needs to decide about that whupped wife of his--can he not get rid of her?
I swear reading your story makes me feel as though I am really there.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed Is there anyway Lyssa could be pregnant with Arric's child? Please?
I like the way Arric and Lyssa's connection is still there---Eros tried with the visible bite marks, but Arric ran him from the table by giving her his blood.
Eros is trying to get close to her, but why--those pesky vampires always have an agenda?
I really want to know Arric's reaction to his mate and his pack's feelings toward her also. They would have lost their Alpha, if not for Lyssa connection to him, and willingness to die trying to save him.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed Miriam will need to be strong and able to help Lys when she is farther along in her preganancy; Miriam and Lys pet that is. Thank goodness for Arric not giving up on her.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed I thought it was cute the way Lys gave Arric and her Uncle the cold shoulder telepathically.
Arric finally laid it on the line and acknowledge his betrayal of her ...and then to claim any child she has as his and the pack--I was like Damn!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed ![NIARA: in one summer a young girl could lose it all... (The Urban Girl Book 1) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]](https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/51JcEMUCDUL.jpg)
Description of the labor pain brought back some memories---I felt for Cat. She was so young and naive. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed Niara does have smart mouth on her, but it is her protection, too. I like that wicked sense of humor. It will take time but Cat should tell Niara about the little time she did spend with her--every child likes to hear about themselves when they were small.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed Years of craving can only end in satisfaction. Kory Lane and Kai Wu will soon learn that not all cravings can be appeased.
OK, wow! gotta love a take charge man and he's young, too. I like Kory and she knew it was wrong with him having a girlfriend--both may want to start locking doors. They are in college...is Lauren attending the same college?
Reviewer: Penelope Signed Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
