Penname: Musicluva [Contact]

Real name: Monica

Member Since: March 09 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:


[Report This]
Reviews by Musicluva


Retired
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 572]
Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118383
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Lovers' Dance

Cant to see how the meeting between Matt and Aunt Cleo goes. I have a feeling it will be drama filled! 😉

I like this update where Matt and Madi got a chance to just chill with each other. 😌

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I'ont know Madi, girl. I smell trouble! 😒

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Madi is too funny! 😄



Author's Response:

Thanks for all your great reviews Musicluva :)

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Wow!  That was deep! My heart goes out to Madi! 💔

It's a blessing that she has true friends to help her through it. It would seem she would try speaking with a therapist if this is something that has been occurring repeatedly.  Love the update!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Hmmm.  It seems that Madi has something she needs to get off of her chest. Maybe it would help to speak with Matt about it. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Loved  this update!  Way to sock it to 'em Madi! 😍 And that's how it's done!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Great update!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I really hope Madi does get some professional help. I'm in agreement with Matt on this one. 

Great update once again! 💖

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Great start! Suspenseful. Looking forward to what's to come!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it so far

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Good d@mn question Madi!  👏

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Madi and Dante are hilarious! 😄💖

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I'm with Madi ... I just love a man with a 5 o'clock shadow! 😍😍😍. I feel for Madi for feeling isolated in Matt's crowd. We'll see how Matt feels on this trip with the tables turned.  Can't wait for this trip home!!  Another great update!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi guys.  Since there were no cast pics provided, the girl in this video is what I envision Madi would look like:  link

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Loved this update! Madi is too funny! "Did you tap that ass or what?" LOL!  I'm so happy to see that you touched on the racial challenges that interaccial couples have to contend with. All too often in many IR novels, I've read about the intense chemistry that the couple has that helps them surpass it, and all is golden, and they ride off it I the sunset.  This makes it so much more deep and realistic. Which is what I always look for when selecting material to read.  I love, love, love this story! 😍😍😍



Author's Response:

Hi Musicluva, I try to keep things as real as possible! So glad you're still enjoying Madi's and Matt's adventure.

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Seems like Jenny is taking advantage of Madi. I wonder if the rest of the clan are in on it? 😕

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Wow!  Madi saved Matt from getting his @$$ ripped another one.  He most def should've run that past Madi, though it was a sweet gesture, but he should'a known better!

Great update!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Wow, seems his mother will never learn that love prevailes all. It's about to be on an pippin' up in here!  

Once again, loved the update!d84;a039;d84;a039;

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Matt's parents were sooo out of line!!!  😤😤😤

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was wondering why I haven't seems any updates lately. I look forward to your return.  Love this story!!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Should we expect an update soon or a link to where we can purchase?  I need my 'Lover's Dance' fix! 😳😍a86;a039;

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Should we expect an update on this story soon?  Would love to know if you're going to continue here or publish it soon.



Author's Response:

Hi Musicluva, I do intend to resume updating Lovers' Dance, hopefully within the next few weeks. Thanks for your continued interest. In regards to your query re publication, Part 1 should be published in a couple of months. Unfortunately due to the overall length of the novel it's logistically nigh impossible to publish it all in one go via the self-pub route. Thanks for your patience. 

K. Carr

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to your update!! 😃

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved the story here and the book even more! 💖💕💕💖. I'm ready for the sequel now ! a86;a039;

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Also, I love 💖💖 long chapters, so don't change a thing!



Author's Response:

Hi Musicluva,

I hope all is well with you! LD part 2 is still bugging me, but I'm trying to work on it and get it out there. You guys are great readers and your honest critique means so much. Thanks for all your support.

K. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2015

Retired
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 175]
Summary:

In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14883
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm loving this. It's so suspenseful. I love the length of your chapters too!



Author's Response:

Thanks Musicluva! 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.