Penname: Ashash [Contact]

Real name: Ashleigh

Member Since: March 22 2013

Membership status: Member

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 332]
Summary:

When recent college grad, Lily Taylor became the personal paralegal to the notorious lawyer of the stars, Aiden Hawkins, she never knew that she would have her hands tied with him...literally.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 66387
Read Count: 66282
Published: October 03 2012
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 9: He Won't Go-Part 2

Did you watch that season finale dude? I'm heated at the ending. Great chapter. The middle portion was repetitive but i'm guessing you were trying to get us back into the swing of things. 



Author's Response:

Yes imo, the RW should have been the finale, the actual finale was so dull and the last Khalessi scene had me cringing. Yes I think that was one of my biggest problems, there wasn't a lot of structure and I usually make outlines for the chapters and this time I didn't so I learned my lesson lol

Reviewer: Ashash Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 12 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

One purple eye and one brown eye, the eyes that marked her as not just as a 'demon' but as a halfbreed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 9855
Read Count: 4825
Published: December 03 2012
Updated: August 05 2013


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Five

Intriguing...

Reviewer: Ashash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Six

I'm all excited and nervous as to what he meant. Great update! I feel like we don't know much of the history and the mythology of the demon/ non demon people. But i'm sure you'll get to that. 

Reviewer: Ashash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

AJ is your your average teenager living in this day and age. Little bit of drugs, some drinking, and a whole lot of sex. But waking up one Saturday to someone making a ruckus outside your apartment door, you don't expect to open it and find the one you regret staring back at you. Along with a carseat containing a baby she claims is yours.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20867
Read Count: 12206
Published: June 20 2013
Updated: September 24 2013


Title: Chapter 8: Adrian's POV

Willy Cartier!!!!!

Reviewer: Ashash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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Kyle Hemsworth is your average New York teenager, until Minnie King comes to town. She is bold and full of fire that all southern belles have. She completely through him off of his game and has him doing things that others may find crazy or creepy. And all the while he chases after her, they both find out different things that just make you marvel at the bliss of wonder. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 8161
Read Count: 5450
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: February 16 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Shaky hands & Rosy-Cheeked Girls

You change tenses a lot and it's very distracting. I like the story so far. Maybe less environment description and more character interactions would help it progress though. 

Reviewer: Ashash Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 27 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 345]
Summary:

College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.

You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.

His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing. 

Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126441
Read Count: 55757
Published: August 22 2013
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18

You have serious talent man. You should try and get published, make this a full series. 



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh! That's so sweet of you to say. I've thought about it with this one. Not sure yet. I really appreciate you saying so :D

Reviewer: Ashash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2013

Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 37

YOU NEED TO GET THIS PUBLISHED. I promise you it will sell holy shit please. I want to throw money at you. 

Reviewer: Ashash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43901
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: The McRyan Brothers

It's really good i just wish the chapters weren't so short.

Reviewer: Ashash Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 19 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143289
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I like the story but you need an editor. The continuity is way off, what is Jodi's age when her friend was listening to Nicki Minaj while they were in college and she was texting in highschool? I thought she was supposed to be 40something in the present? You might want to change that to mid/late 20s for the story to make sense. You also change tenses a lot.



Author's Response:

sorry that you are confused. Jodi began reminiscing about her sophomore year in college beginning in chapter 28. Thanks for allowing me to clarify for you.

Reviewer: Ashash Signed starstarstar
Date: April 20 2014

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