Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

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I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Marino Family: Permanently Yours by Hopefulness23
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Working as a Home Health Aide and struggling to make ends meet. All Aries Washington wanted to do was prove the child she had three years ago, was in fact the son of Cameron Marino. She didn't have any delusions about them putting their differences aside and falling madly in love. Why would she? Cameron was engaged to her ex best friend Ambrosia, A.K.A Ms. Perfect. So imagine her surprise when he not only demands she moves in with him, but marry him too.

Aries had no idea that once she gave birth to her own little Marino, that, that meant she automatically belonged to the whole Marino family. With a group of people who take their strong family ties seriously, she's about to find out that once your in, there's no out. 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Marino Family
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 19092
Read Count: 53331
Published: May 14 2015
Updated: June 01 2015

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Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I'm in love with Christian. Aries is a woman after my own heart, she peeps people out first and then see if she can trust them. I don't trust that Ambrosia, Keep her away from Jaylen please or Aries and the Marino men will have that *ss.

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Date: May 17 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

This hoe is delusional, she don't know if the babies were his or not. Plus in her mind Cameron will forgive her and come back. I see problems on the horizon, Ambrosia is like a ticking time bomb who is going to explode when Aries and jaylen comes on the scene.

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Date: May 17 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

It's on now! do all the Marino men like chocolate.

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Date: May 19 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

Oh my goodness you got me crying over here. My husband looking at me like her damn hormones are acting up again. I love that there was no hesitation on Cameron part about the paternity of Jaylen. He shouldn't be angry with Aries, He knew what kind of girlfriend he had at that time. Protect that baby by any means necessary. what a wonderful little boy.

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Date: May 20 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

Cameron is getting on my last nerve. He's acting brand new, like he didn't know how Ambrosia was treating Aries. I'm happy Aries stood her ground with him, acting like a bully. When she basically told him if Ambrosia breathe at Jaylen, she would kick both their asses I clap so hard. I think Cameron has met his match with Aries.

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Date: May 26 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

First and foremost, I think I'm in love with Christian. I wish Cameron would try and take that baby, I would come through this computer and jump into this story to kick his ASS!. Ambrosia think she still has this bully mentality over Aries, she about to have a rude awakening. Mess with me I'm a big girl I can handle it, mess with my child, not even the Avengers and my boyfriend THOR can get me off her ASS!.

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Date: June 01 2015
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Visceral by Dion
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

He made a promise to protect her. Can he keep it? Can he keep her?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 12071
Read Count: 20336
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: May 26 2015

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think Nathan has the hots for Yani.

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Date: May 22 2015
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, he didn't even have to say a word. Actions do speak louder than words.

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Date: May 27 2015
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Below The Surface by Alexandria Glass
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Chance Gyllenborgh seems to have it all. A pregnant, loving girlfriend, a close knit family, and great life.

 

Angelina Walker is running. She's a top chef and restaurantuer and a workaholic. She throws herself into work to avoid her personal life. Needing a break, she settles down in a town and meet a variety of different people, including Chance.

 

Things seem great at first glance but Below The Surface is where monsters lie and sociopaths dwell.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58269
Read Count: 48956
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: January 22 2016

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Angelina is a better women then I because I would've showed her what a "Vile little cunt" could do to a decrepit old bat. I don't trust Harris I think he's the one who destroyed Angelina's apartment and making it look like Jen did it. Harris just gave Angelina a reason to go live with Chance, plus Harris is real creepy to me. I got my side eye on Janelle I don't trust her either. I'm feeling Asger Gyllenborgh I think when Denise gets back they would make a perfect couple. I also think that Ms. Angelina is pregnant with Chance's baby. Thanks for the update

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Date: September 29 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Oh I love this chapter, Angelina and Chance are so cute together and I love the name Cole Asger Gyllenborgh. I do think that Denise and Asger is having a little affair going on. Thanks for the update

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Date: January 18 2016
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Girl i'm breastfeeding, pumping and working out too. I have been boxing ever since I was 9 years old, because my father wanted his daughters and sons to know how to protect themselves. I scrap our babies in their jogging stroller and my husband and I will go running everyday in a inside gym because it's getting to cold to have them outside. I want to try Crossfit, I don't want to lose weight I just want to be fit enough to take care of my babies. I thought Janelle was the psycho but I was wrong it was those two mitches Jen and Donna. If I were Angelina when I saw that mitch with my child i would have went ballistic too. Talking about she had a little girl, mitch! you killed your little girl, Jen needed to be pump with a lot of bullets because that kind of crazy will fine a way to come back. And Donna i just don't know what to say about her. Denise and Asger this will be very interesting. Thanks for this wonderful story.

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Date: January 18 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Chance is a DOGG!! Jen seems like a " throw the rock, hide your hand kind of girl". Angelina is looking at Jen like this B*tch is all up in my cool-aide and don't even know the favor. I like it!

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Date: May 22 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

What! Jen is pushing him away with her jealousy, she got some serious trust issues. Plus Chance acting like that doesn't help the situation. Chance acts like he is into BDSM, Angelina was weak for a minute until she saw the light.

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Date: May 27 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I think I understand chance a little better now. I know first hand a bad woman can turn a good guy bad, and vice versa. Just because you get a women pregnant doesn't mean you have to marry her you can co-parent. I don't think Jen is psycho either, she's trying to throw fault at chance for something she's doing. Withholding sex is a cop out, that one of the horniest times. Harris is moving to fast he talks a good game but something in the water ain't clean to me. Chance is just horny and trying to get attention from Angie. With men it's all about the chase the other woman throwing herself at him was a turn off. I'm loving this story.

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Date: May 31 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Oh my goodness! Moppet is my grandmother all the way, when your elders tell you something you best believe it. My grandmother has 40 of us grandchildren, 55 great-grands. When she talks we listen, It is called "Wisdom". There has never been a time in my life, where she has steer me wrong. She told me in high school that my husband Micah was going to be my husband. We have been married almost 21 years. Harris seems like one of those shady salesman, he has a quick temper too. I think I like Chance take charge kind of mentality, but he has to be through with Jen first.

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Date: June 14 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Jen is a murderer, she's a coward and I'm done with her. Jen never deserved Chance, how dare she take away his right's of becoming a father. If I were him I would have her charge with murder. That child had a life, she's not God, acting like she had the right to choose if that baby live or die. She's heartless and soulless. Harris done bump his head, trying to tell somebody what to do. Ordering her on a date and she went HELL NO!, ordering her food, it's about time for me, oh I mean her to do like Barney Fife said "Nip it in the bud". My man Chance got skills, Angelina better keep that man. He's rich, he can f*ck, your mama and your grandmama like him,DONE DEAL!!!.

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Date: June 18 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Chance did the right thing by cutting Jen loose, but he should do it to her face, man up. Angelina should have done the same thing with Harris, she was in some what of a relationship with him not Chance. Chance's daddy is a little to old to still be acting like a child. His mother is another story altogether, I don't care if you are trying to keep your self right and tight for your man, if he don't love you there is nothing you can do to change that. Mama and great-grandma is a hoot!.

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Date: June 22 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Jen is a piece of work, she honestly thought Chance was going to stay with her after she killed his child, this women is not working with a full deck. I'm so sorry Moppet died that woman was special she remained me of my grandmother. I'm not mad at Denise she had to deal with her grief of losing her mother in her own way. I think Chance and Angelina has a special kind of love that not even his mother or Jen can break they might try but they won't succeed. Glad you are back! Thanks for the update

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Date: September 21 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Denise was getting her grove back and being a cougar ontop of it. I knew Harris was a psycho, Angelina sometimes other people can see a person true nature before you can, especially when you are not even looking. I don't think that Harris is the one who broke into her house I think Janelle did it. I bet the next time Angelina will listen to her man. Thanks for the update.

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Date: November 30 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Girl this chapter right here! has brought back some delicious memories of when I was carrying our twins. I guess my suspicion of Janelle was wrong ( I still don't trust that hoe) could it be Jen ( hiding in the trees )but it had to be someone at the wedding right?. My vote is for Denise and Asger to become a couple. Thanks for the update!

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Date: December 30 2015
Title: Chapter 14: Note

This story is going to be Epic!!! and I can't wait. I'm wondering what you are going to title it. Thanks for the teaser!!

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Date: January 22 2016
Friendship is Hard by DameRouge
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Jonah and Nina are pretty good friends. 

Had these characters in my head for a while and I fianlly found some time to share them with you all. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 825
Read Count: 1002
Published: May 22 2015
Updated: May 22 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Friendship is Hard" literally for Jonah. I like this story I wish it was more.

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Date: May 22 2015
My Catfish by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Clark E. has always been the mysterious one out of all of his friends. With a new company on the rise and heartbreak in his past he has many doubts about women. Taking a chance and from the suggestion of his good friend he goes online and starts a romance with Katrina.

Katrina is the ugly duckling that has been named in her family. Living in the shadows of her older sister and cousin she becomes closed off from the outside world. Her only escape is the internet that gives her confidence. She makes a fake profile pretending to be someone else but then starts to develop feelings for Clark.

What happens when these two get to meet in the real world?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 8175
Read Count: 13735
Published: May 23 2015
Updated: August 03 2016

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Title: Chapter 7: Clear choices

No! Clark! no! why you had to think with your other head. This trick is going to be a problem and Kat is going to get hurt. I'm not feeling Clark right now. Thanks for the update.

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Date: February 29 2016
Title: Chapter 6: Parks and Truths

I think that they really like each other, but lying is something that's hard to forget. Thanks for the update.

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Date: November 02 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I like the cast but who is the ugly duckling, they all are beautiful.

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Date: May 24 2015

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