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Real name: Tola Maria

Member Since: April 10 2013

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Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey by kwajeraspen
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40865
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016

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Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Thank you  Ms K, for updating. Am glad that Kori finally spoke to Lukas  (someone needed to say something). It's sad that Lukas has allowed the past to jeopardize his future happiness . He needs to forgive himself for his past choices and move on.

I hope that he and Elise can be honest with each other about their feelings. 

I  really have missed this story, as always it was written beautifully d84;.

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2015
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Ms K, am loving the recent updates. You are spoiling us ;-)

Am so glad that Lukas has started to acknowledge his feelings for Elise, a part of my hopes that Elise doesn't give into easily, I don't want her to play games but he should work for her. 

To the previous comment mentioning that it was creepy that her father was thinking about her in a sexual way, I don't think he was, my perception is the complete opposite. He still sees Elise as his baby girl and the thought of her acting 'adult" , he is force to realise that his little girl is growing up and indeed a woman!!!

Thanks again for posting, am looking forward to the new chapter very, very soon ... (hint, hint). Also I just want to say I truly appreciate all the writers on this board sharing your talent for free!!

Thank you  <3

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2015
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

LOVING THIS UPDATE, thank you. It was a great read (and long too).  Elise has grown so much as a character since the start of the story.  I like that she took time out to focus on her heart and healing. Feel that when she and Lukas eventually meet again she in a good place to be honest with her feelings and speak truthfully....

 

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pics


Thank you for updating, it feels like they are both ready to follow their hearts and let love win.


Author's Response:

Thank you for reading

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03 2016
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Thanks for the latest installment.

It's endering how much Lukus adores and is protective of Maya, it will be a difficult conversation but much needed.

 

On a side note how sweet are Elise's parents d84;

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Date: September 03 2016
Just One More Try by Yevette Linn
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 120]
Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 43966
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

@Angelbaby - Yevette has kindly (and FREELY) shared her story with us as readers and all you can do is point of the errors in your comments. If you are so concerned why didn't you PM Yevette so you can proof read her chapters.  Yevette,  has already mentioned that she is a new writer.  Just have some patience and be understanding with her work. 

Thank you for this chapter. I love this update looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I'm working hard on perfecting my craft. Thanks for the encouragement. I really appreciate it. 

I will be updating the next chapter in the next few days. Stay tuned. 

Yevette

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16 2014
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Hi Yevette, hope all is well with you.  Missing this story <3



Author's Response:

Awww!!!! That is so sweet. Thanks for asking.  I am so sorry for taking so long. I had a little thing called life step into the picture to throw me off course but I'm back and ready to see what Breezy and Jace are up to. I think that I miss them more than anyone. Plus they are getting pretty restless in my head and want to come out and play. LOL! ! Check in with me by this time next week and see how "Operation Get Breezy " is going. Also we'll see what Phoenix and Akio have going on. 

I really miss you guys. Now it's fine to get back to what's good and that's a sexy Alpha Male on a mission and a hot little Diva with a secret.  Thanks for reading and sticking me. 

Much Love,

Yevette 

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed
Date: August 30 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this story ;-)

Jace is such an alpha male which is so sexy.

 Yes they're possessive and will get jealous of a small child or elderly lady if they see  them getting an second of their 'woman' time.

However when these men love they love hard especially if it's good woman like it sounds like Breezy is . Like most love stories it sounds like a mixture of misunderstanding and miscommunication on both sides.

Plus add to the mix the personal growth and self discovery for both Breezy and Jace = the perfect love story.  Which it appears you have Yevette,  thank you for sharing your talent. 

 

Looking forward to reading more ;-)



Author's Response:

Thank you soooo much for reading. Aren't Alpha Males just the best? Yes, they are jealous, possessive, and even obsessive of the women that they love. But they love so hard and will do anything for them. But more than that, they will do anything to keep them. 

Yeah, we've got a bit of a communication problem going on between these two. But Jace, had better learn to tie up his loose ends or he's gonna wind up losing a lot more. And Breezy is going to have to learn to stop running when things get tough. Although she's not the same girl that left five years ago. Time has changed her and him. 

So stay tuned. I will post again this week. Keep the reviews coming. They are great motivation. 

 

Yevette

 

 

 

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2014
The Big Kahuna by SleepEasy
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

tbk


Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted. 


Including her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11368
Read Count: 16322
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast

This story is really good and I love the interaction between Camilla and Ryan. Am personal of a slim built and at times get offended when I read stories when the lead is of a bigger built and openly take digs at slimmer/fit characters.

The double standard is unreal if we were reading a story where the lead was consistently putting down female characters that was bigger than I her, I would too get offended but why is one more acceptable than the other. I agree with Chocolate lover, for me it's all about being healthy whatever sizes you are and making you happy.  In my opinion people are attracted to others who are confident and have a love for life. Like attracts like...



Author's Response:

Thank you Amaya! I also don't like when stories make slim or modelsque women out to be devil-ish. It's uncomfortable because I have thin friends who aren't homewrecking, money grubbing hussies, and vice versa I know plus size women who are. No one criminalizes us though (I'm not going to start, but I'm also not going to attack thin women). 

You are totally right, if the character was doing that she'd be a villain and we'd all delight in her demise. Although I think it's more undercurrent than that, for instance a story just won't have any one who is plus sized or she'd  be the frumpy secretary. The reverse of thin bashing is pretending that "fat" doesn't exist outside of the "right amount" around the hips, breast, and thighs. 

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed
Date: August 10 2014
Mississippi Solace by kwajeraspen
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Leiya Tate was a woman on the run from the life she thought she wanted and the man she once loved. When she learns that her ex-husband plans to take sole custody of her son, she hatches a plan for the both of them to disappear forever. So how does the ex-wife of one of the most prominent and powerful businessmen in the country disappear? That was the question Leiya asked herself until she comes across a photo she'd tucked away of her mother and the aunt she never knew. Adele Waters was the light at end of a tunnel filled with darkness; her way out of Adrien's grasp. It didn't hurt that she resided in a town so small that someone like Adrien Tate would never take notice. Here, Leiya is able to breath again....to live again, if she dares. Just as she decides to let go, she finds herself facing the devil in a fight for everything she has.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 22230
Read Count: 12877
Published: September 10 2014
Updated: September 25 2016

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Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Am just simply in love with this story. I was sooooo happy to see and read this update 😊. 

That scene with Nate and Jordan was so sweet.  Looking forward to reading more. Thank you so much for the update 💜💜💜💜

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for supporting this story...I know the updates are slow sometimes but I really want to give the readers a quality, well thought out story😊

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2016
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Wow, I can't believe I haven't read this story until now. It's sooooo good, am really enjoying  itd84;.

I can't wait to read Leiya's personal journey and the grow of her and Nate's  relationship. Loving Adele, she is just what Leiya and Jordan. Looking forward to reading more 😊.

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Date: June 12 2016
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COLORLESS by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215423
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19

Wow, very powerful  chapter. Am glad they are going to  move.

Thank you for writing this  story, it's  beautiful.

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18 2014
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

Thank you for the wonderful update.  I personally love the pace of the story,  for me if feels so more realistic and makes the relationship between Hiram and Camile more genuine and special. 

March pieces, this is your story and you write it however you like. Unfortunately one of the downside of this site is I feel that some people forgot that you talented people share your stories with us for FREE! !

Unfortunately you can't please everyone, the only person you can please it's yourself.  I love your writing and am grateful for you sharing your talent with us.  

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Date: December 01 2014
Retired
Choosey Lover by CaramelGal
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 298]
Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69614
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Main & Supporting Cast

What I read so far, I really really like this story ;-). It's a sweet love story.



Author's Response:

Happy to hear you're liking it so far. Thanks for reading and reviewing Amaya.

CG

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03 2014
My Catfish by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Clark E. has always been the mysterious one out of all of his friends. With a new company on the rise and heartbreak in his past he has many doubts about women. Taking a chance and from the suggestion of his good friend he goes online and starts a romance with Katrina.

Katrina is the ugly duckling that has been named in her family. Living in the shadows of her older sister and cousin she becomes closed off from the outside world. Her only escape is the internet that gives her confidence. She makes a fake profile pretending to be someone else but then starts to develop feelings for Clark.

What happens when these two get to meet in the real world?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 8175
Read Count: 13735
Published: May 23 2015
Updated: August 03 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I was ridiculous excited when I saw that this story has been updated.  It was great and it didn't disappointed me ;)  ...Thank you for updating. 

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Sound Familiar

YES! !! You updated.  I truly love this pace of so story so far.  I like that the characters have different levels to them already.  Liking the twist that Kat and Clark have met already even without him knowing.  

I love the way you write your stories and looking forward to reading more. 

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Diggers & Dates

Oh I wonder what will happen when these two meet up? ?? Really hope that Kat discovers her self confidence and worth. She needs some happiness in her life, firstly rid of her annoying family members. I want Kat to realised that Clark is lucky to have her in his life, just as much as she does him.

Thanks for posting.

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2015

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