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Make Me by ParisInWonderland
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 332]
Summary:

When recent college grad, Lily Taylor became the personal paralegal to the notorious lawyer of the stars, Aiden Hawkins, she never knew that she would have her hands tied with him...literally.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 66387
Read Count: 66282
Published: October 03 2012
Updated: July 30 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Hometown Glory

Terrific start.  

As a person in the BDSM lifestyle, I am very interested in where this story will go.  I am reading this on a recommendation from Caribbean Fire and so far am not disappointed.

 



Author's Response:

you both are fabulous! thank you for taking the time to read it!

 Reviewer: Miki Signed
Date: November 04 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chasing Pavements

Regret is a bitch!  LOL!

Okay... totally loving your development of the two main characters.  Can I adopt Owen?  I know a few people that need some dog dung in their mailboxes, as well as the girl that cut my own pigtail in fourth grade.

Now, for a more serious side.  I do like that you have her thinking that Aiden is domineering because she's about to realize the difference between a dominant and domineering man.  Many people assume that a dominant is a bully, but they are far from that.  They simply know what they want, how they want it, and are determined to have it that way.

Lily is discovering her submissive side slowly and I am hoping that the unveiling will be one that allows her to appreciate how strong she really is.  Giving into someone's demands requires strength that many do not understand.  Lily taking this leap is very telling.  She's already developing tentatively that trust that is so imperative within a D/s relationship.

Nicely done so far.



Author's Response:

interesting how the dom/sub relationship works. i totally didnt know any of this before writing this story so i'm glad to know now and not be as ignorant beforehand. lol i'll take owen and mr. gustin

 Reviewer: Miki Signed
Date: November 04 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Crazy For You

All right, is it bad that I'm rooting for Voldemort?  Screw Harry Potter, let the bad boy win for once, right?  Okay, okay.  We all know that Alex is probablly Voldemort, but he drank so much unicorn blood no one can even tell. 

Let me also say that a story without humor bores me to tears.  This is certainly not a boring story.  I am very much enjoying your sense of humor and wit.

Poor Lily!  To be shocked by the "seamy" side of BDSM.  Whatver will become of her?  *wicked grin*  Taken slowly on that journey, she may discover things she thought impossible.  But I am willing to wait to see where it takes her.  Loved Aiden being protective of what he's already thinking of as "His".  

Looking forward to reading the next chapter!



Author's Response:

lol @ screw harry potter (which is alex) i think everyone is rooting for the "bad boy" in this story, yeah i need humor in my daily life, i get so bummed without it, thanks for the great review! 

 Reviewer: Miki Signed
Date: November 04 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Rumor Has It

All right, having also read 50 Shades of Grey (which sorry to say, was just a lite BDSM Harlequin romance), I would like if you'd not compare yourself to the book.  Unlike Ana, Lily is less afraid of the unknown and less judgemental so far.  Granted, Aiden is also not presented as the tortured soul that Christian was, but Aiden is by far more like a real life dominant that the oh so "perfect" and boring Christian Grey.  50 Shades made BDSM seem like the haven of the hurt and damaged.  Not so.  LOVE that so far Aiden isn't seeking exorcise any demons.

Orgasm control is something that many dominants and submissives enjoy.  Intrigued to see how you will handle it.  *grins*  Can't wait until Lily does more research and puts a nipple clamp on Aiden's free for all.  (By the way... may want to try clothespins first.)

Great chapter.  The sex scene was nicely done.  I do like that Aiden didn't overwhelm her.  He may not know she's a virgin, but he's being very appropriate in terms of a first encounter.  A good dominant has control of themselves and is able to gauge their partner's reactions, and is unwilling to rush.  Thumbs up all the way!



Author's Response:

thank you for that, you really have no idea how happy that makes me! yeah i didnt want to make aiden that "tortured soul" simply b/c i think that whole bit is played out. i've personally never met anyone in the bdsm lifestyle so i'm trying my best to represent you all in a good and normal light. i'll keep those clothespins in mind! 

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Date: November 04 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Rolling In The Deep

Monkey wrenches galore!  Alex doesn't know what a lucky break he had.  Hope he eventually wakes up and smells the coffee.  But something tells me that won't happen until havoc is wreaked.

My Dominant often says, "Only good girls get spankings."  Well, it seems that only good girls have orgasms too!  Yay for Lily! 

Love how this story is progressing so far.  Aiden is finally starting to experience the depth that D/s can encompass.  When you trust someone (even in a vanilla relationship) there is almost nothing that is taboo, and things like limits, safewords etc. nearly become superfluous.

Anyway, awesome chapter!!

 



Author's Response:

Alex is very stubborn lol, and that wont be a good thing in this situation. Thanks for reading! 

 Reviewer: Miki Signed
Date: November 04 2012
Title: Chapter 6: Cold Shoulder

*Takes out a switch and stripes Lily's ass for her idiocy!*  LOLOLOL!

All right when the chapter first started all I could think was "Please don't let Alex see Blair in Aiden's office..."  But of course I knew that wish was in vain.  *sniffs dramatically*

Great chapter.  Loved how this is set up to explode.  I sense a subsequent punishment occurring.  Nearly quivering in anticipation now!

I thought keeping the punishment fairly light this time was a good move.  A submissive shouldn't be frightened by her dominant.  Usually it is a poor dominant that is unable to gauge what is appropriate.  Excellent job!

Thank you for a great chapter!! 

 Reviewer: Miki Signed
Date: November 10 2012
Cheung's New Sub: Lydia by swirly_girl
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Lydia Michaels is an excited young new intern heading off to build her resume working for Okada Trading Corp. She's eager to learn all she can from the international business world.

Toshiko Okada and Yaunlong Cheung are best friends that met their freshman year attending UCLA in the States. Now they both work for Toshiko's not so eccentric uncle, Rin Okada in Japan.

Neither young men are prepared for their OTC new intern. while Toshiko believes a woman's place is in the home, Yuan believes Lydia's is in his dungeon.

Two problems exist, one, Lydia is not hearing it... and two, both men are as equally determined to put her in her place.

Amid obsession, lust, conniving, deceitfulness... Could love possibly emerge?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Dubcon, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4334
Read Count: 19124
Published: August 05 2014
Updated: January 29 2017

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'd prefer not to review the story at this time.  However, as someone in the BDSM lifestyle for several years, just a question and one pointer.  Is Yuan simply upset that Emi did not use his assigned title for the scene, or that she ordered him not to stop, and cursed as well?


Also, there are no such thing as Jabari knots.  They are called "Shibari Knots".  Here is a link that gives a bit of history on them.  http://www.hikarikesho.com/eng/shibari.php



Author's Response:

You are right, my only excuse (which is kind of sad in my own opinion), I was writing this late at night and was too lazy or sleepy to stop my flow to click over to google it for the correct spelling. Sorry. 

Yuan was pissed because Emi likes to disrupt his control during their scenes. He likes complete control and the fact that she defies him annoys him. He wants to control his sub's pain and pleasure, not for them to inject their own form of control as Emi does. And yes 'forgetting' to call him Sir was yet another instance of her defying him. 

 Reviewer: Miki Signed
Date: August 08 2014

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