Penname: marchbabe [Contact]

Real name: aline

Member Since: May 06 2013

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What can I say? I love reading a lot, I'd like to think myself as quirky, I am a bit old school when it comes to music except when it comes to Sam Smith,man I love his songs! Anyways that's me and I hope you'll enjoy my story(ies) :) I welcome feedback whether good or bad as long as it's constructive.



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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196756
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Boy am I glad to have this story back! first of all,i love that sasha is working on herself and that she had the courage to confront dmitri and breakup with him properly,the old sasha would have begged him to take her back. with that being said, i don't see Dom going after sasha,especially when he is aware that his brother still loves her. I picture him befriending sasha and play mind games with Dmitri just to force him to go after sasha. Dom and sasha can be attracted to each other,but hers comes from the fact that he reminds her of Dmitri. and as for carter,i don't know...i don't mind her being with him but she should not use him,because if her reaction at seeing Dom and thinking it was Dmitri is any indication, she is so not over him.and sasha need to make dmitri work for her forgiveness and bratty nadia has to apologize. it's not enough to apologize to Dmitri,nah uh,she also caused sasha serious emotional distress.

I totally love this story!can't wait for Dmitri's next move:)

 Reviewer: marchbabe Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: January 19 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

sasha sweety, I am so sorry for you but I am finding it hard to totally feel sorry when you're letting people walk all over you like used tissue. and Id love you to stand up to dimitri,what the hell are all those "I love you"'s while he's giving you the boot?I really hope that you grow in a confident woman and make it very hard for dimitri to get back with you . And I am tired of you dimitri,deal with whatever problem you have or you'll end up just like your father and I hope you realize that you lost the best thing that you ever had!
ugh!nadia die already!and may your father join you!and sweet Dominic please rescue sasha and show dimitri how to treat a lady!

love the story

 Reviewer: marchbabe Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: November 18 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

finally you're back;)ive been on the lookout for this story for a long time;) great chapter as usual;) I wouldn't mind Dominic/Dina,hehehe. Dimitri's father is just downright cruel but I love how you write all characters XD I can't wait for Dimitri to say the three words back ;D

 Reviewer: marchbabe Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 02 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

great update!!!and with that, I gotta say that I don't want to see sasha revert back to her old self!She should hold her own in front of Dmitri,especially next to a man like Carter!I know she isn't over Dmitri but she doesn't have to react the way she did,come on Sasha, you're doing so well...show him how confident and strong you have become...

And I'd love to see Sasha not cower in front of the two sisters of gloom(faye and jaelynn)and show them what they deserve. Can't wait for the next chap;)

 Reviewer: marchbabe Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: January 30 2014
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

wow you don't know how many times I read and reread this story! I love it and I can't wait for you to come out with a new chap! and I would love to c more of Dominic:)

 Reviewer: marchbabe Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: September 05 2013

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