Penname: Treale [Contact]

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Member Since: May 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just girl. Trying to live in this big writing world. Lol. Im still in high school Class of 2014!! I been writing since I was nine. I was mainly writing poems but I lost my sparks. I just got my writing bug back so i decided to share my stories and share it with you guys! 


I love writing about interracial love stories and dark fiction.


Love has no boundaries. 


Perfect combinations are rare in an imperfect world. ♥


make sure you guys follow me on Twitter @Just_CallMe_PUD I will have info on the stories and things like that. 


 


                                           *Story update!*


Me and Ayoo_Joi are taking a break from working on Anybody Can Find Love. We feel like we lost our vision with the story. So we are going to be making some changes to the story. We are so sorry you guys. Hopefully you guys will like the new changes we are making. You will see the A new version of the story really soon we promise!




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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 345]
Summary:

College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.

You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.

His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing. 

Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126441
Read Count: 55756
Published: August 22 2013
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 34

Omg that was emotional for me. Please let Vic come back to me. Lol 

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Date: September 02 2013

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 35

Girl I'm at the edge of my seat waiting!!!  Lawrddddddd have mercy!!!!

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Date: September 03 2013

Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 37

Awwwwwww snap!!!! I'm sad to see it end!! I know the sequel is going to be the shit!!! TURN UPPPPPPP!!!!! LOL 

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Date: September 04 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

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LIES OF PROMISE

 

The best laid plans always harbor strange bedfellows... 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 5872
Read Count: 11303
Published: August 24 2013
Updated: August 25 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My bad she really looked like her. But anyway love your story! :)

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Date: August 30 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

 

The Lindor Kingdom and the Hattori Dynasty have been in a disposition ever since King William came into power over the Lindor Kingdom. His daughter Ava was bored with her princess title. That is until the day her trip to the bathlands is ruined and she's kidnapped by the Hattori army and taken back to their palace by orders of General Kuroda Ren. All of a sudden, she's missing the heavy guard detail she once took for granted.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 3905
Read Count: 6028
Published: August 26 2013
Updated: September 15 2013


Title: Chapter 4: two.

Loving this story!!  More please!! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2013

Title: Chapter 1: prologue.

Ohhhhhh me likely!!!  Please update ASAP!!

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Date: August 26 2013

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

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"Your presence still lingers here and it won't leave me alone
There's just too much that time cannot erase
And I held your hand through all of these years 
But you still have all of me 
These wounds won't seem to heal this pain is just too real
When you cried, I'd wipe away all of your tears 
Who would knew  such pain could be held by three simple words could hold such much pain in a simple letter.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5063
Read Count: 16503
Published: August 27 2013
Updated: November 09 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Familiar Spirit

I have been waiting forever for this update. Lol. I was so happy when I saw this. I just wanted to dance. Lmao.

Awesome update!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2013

Title: Chapter 2: You Promise

I love it!!! What she promise! Loving this story can't wait for the next update! 

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Date: August 27 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 47]
Summary:

He was exactly the way she designed him...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 4747
Read Count: 24166
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 19 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

He is to cute!!! Now I want one!! Loving this!!

Keep them coming!!  

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Date: September 01 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Awesome update!!  I don't like Callie I understand that she is just trying to look out for her, but she doesn't have to a asshole about it. but anyway Adonis is so damn cute!!

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Date: September 08 2013

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Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37786
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Pearl. That Pearl.... That Pearl! Smh. Lol. I can't deal with Pearl. 

Why she keep calling Sahirah, Shakirah? Lol. Yep she is definitely like my mother. Lol.

I'm so in love with Eshan. Lol. I respect the fact that he values his religion the way he do. He love his Allah and I love me some Eshan. Lol 

I'm happy that Sahirah and Joss are getting back to normal. Even though I still think Sahirah is dumb! Lol.

Awesome update!! 



Author's Response:

Lol.  I'm so glad to know my family isn't the only one harboring a Pearl.  Eshan is pretty adorable with his devotion, and Sahirah is ridiculous with hers to Chris.  We'll see what it costs them both.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Treale! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

J.J!!!!!! I told my self that I wasn't going to talk about 'Who Shall Not Be Name' but that BITCH is so so so soooooooooooo fucking DUMB!! LIKE SERIOUSLY!!!! You are going to snitch on your cousin for that asshole!! Who don't give two shits about you!!! And who clearly wants to fuck yo friend!! Damn how stupid can this girl get!! I am SO DONE with that creature!! I can't.... I can't!!!!!! 

NOW Chris is so soooooooo pathetic. He's not even human. You know What he's now even a man. He is a lil ass boy who wants to throw a hissy fit because he can't get what he wants.  You know what him and that creature need to be together. Both of them are so screwed in the head. they are perfect for each other. 

I love Joss that's all I have to say about her. 

I love Eshan that's all I have to say about him. 

Awesome update J.J!!! 



Author's Response:

I have to agree with your assessment of Hirah and Chris.  They have to be my most hated characters ever.  And I can't certainly understand why.  But I'm so glad you like Joss and Eshan.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Treale!

 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm not even going to start on 'who shall not be name' (Hirah) ..it takes to much out of me to talk about how dumb ass hell that person is!! I can't....I can't!! 

Lord Jesus Joss!! I don't know what to say! She love Eshan and she told him. My heart hurts for her. it really do. 

Eshan a lil freak. Owee wee wee. Lol. but for real though This love affair is taking a toll on me Lol. I want them together so bad!! Lol.

Awesome update!!  

 



Author's Response:

Lol. Hang in there, Treale.  Only a few more chapters to go and the torture will end...one way or another.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: October 13 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I KNEW IT!!! I knew something like that was going to happened. I knew Chris dumb ass was going to do something stupid to Joss and Eshan was going to have to put the PAWS ON HIM! and Hirah retarded ass was going to snitch on herself.  Damn!! 

Hirah ass really need to get a clue! Chris has no respect for her clearly! He's feeling up another girl in front your face. Yo ass wanna cry! Then when Eshan beating that ass you wanna play captain save a hoe! Ugh!! I can't....I can't with her!! 

Eshan is a virgin!! OMG I love him even more now!! Joss and Eshan are just so cute to me.  They situation is horrible but they are happy well kind of. But for some reason I think they can make it work. Somebody gotta give!!!

Awesome update as always!! ♥



Author's Response:

You called it, Treale.  Chris has collapsed their little house of cards, and Hirah is still willfullly blind to who he is.  She is starting to look like a lost cause.  There's a little ways to go, so maybe she'll redeem herself...maybe.

I'm so glad you're enjoying Joss and Eshan as a couple.  They were sort of cruising along in their anomalous little relationship.  But this is a major roadblock.  We'll soon see the resulting fallout.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Treale!!!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I freaking love her mother!  Her mother reminds me of my mother. Lol. 

Now here comes me being sad!! I really hate that they are going through all this. From Eshan to Shahira how much more can she take before she breaks. I like that she moved her bed back. Its like their own little secret place besides the backseat of her car. Lol. 

I really hope Shahira get a clue before she ends up with her feelings hurt. Girl code number 1: Never choose a man over your friend!! and she is breaking it big time!!!

LORD GIVE ME THE STRENGTH!!!!

AWESOME UPDATE AS ALWAYS!!!  ♥♥



Author's Response:

Lol.  I'm glad you get a kick out of Pearl.  You haven't seen the last of her. 

Sahirah has burned the girl code in effigy.  Between her, Chris, and the feelings she has for Eshan, Joss is definitely on an emotional slippery slope.  We'll see how far she falls before she decides to save herself.  Or if perhap an Arabian Knight does the saving.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Treale!!!

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Date: October 02 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This chapter mad me so sad!!!  I hate that for them. But I understand Eshan reasons. They need to be together!!!! They can ran away and never look back. I love them two together. Awesome update as always. ツ



Author's Response:

Aw, don't be sad *cyber hug*.  Their circumstances are difficult.  But we'll see if they can find a way to get over that, or each other.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Treale!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This story is my addiction!!! Every time I see this story update I be in class and my teacher always think I'm having a seizure. Lol. 

But Chris is an asshole!! Ugh!! Then he gon txt her 'no hard feelings ' .......Really??????  After he made her cry!! Really!!!  I can't... I can't Chris!!! 

Now Eshan!!!!  Is so cute!! I love him even more now just because of that note. That's so Eshan!!!  Awesome update!! 



Author's Response:

I agree.  Chris is an asshole.  The fact that his "no hard feelings" text ended in a period and not a questions mark is proof positive.  I really like Eshan.  We'll see if that changes next chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Treale!  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story enough to send you into pseudo-convulsions. : )  Now that's a compliment.

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG!!!! I KNEW IT!!!! NOW YOU KNOW J.J I HAVE THAT OLIVIA POPE GUTT. LMAOO!! YES I'M SO HAPPY IT'S MAKES NO DAMN SENSE. 

karma is a bitch!!  I know its mean but I'm happy as hell that 'who shall not be name' got everything that came its way.

This story was absolutely amazing! I never been so emotionally in story till I read this one. You have such an amazing talent. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us all.

But this can't be the end. Can you give me a epilogue??  Please J.J 



Author's Response:

LOL!!!  Thanks Liv!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for faithful reading and reviewing.  I really appreciate it.

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Date: October 17 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

My emotions is all over the place. I cant even write a proper reveiw. Lol. 

I am so sick of 'Who shall not be name' like what the hell is wrong with that creature!!! I can't deal with that thing!!! Can it just get hit by a bus then burned alive!!! Ugh!!

My heart hurts for Joss. But something is telling me That something is about to happen. Something very unexpected. 

Awesome update J.J. ♥



Author's Response:

Lol! You have zero tolerance for Sahirah, and you're not alone. 

You and that gut of yours, Treale.  Has it ever been wrong?  Let's see.  Update posted.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

J.J now you know I'm about to start!!!  Lol.

All I have to say is this....I LOVE ESHAN!!!!! That is all!! Lol. 



Author's Response:

Lol.  Treale, whatever comments you have are always welcomed.  I happen to think Eshan is pretty damn adorable myself.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love it. Chris is something else! But something telling me that Chris didn't do it. OWWEEEE cant wait to see what's next!



Author's Response:

Thanks Treale!   You might be right about Chris.  Then again... 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Im school and when I saw this update. I was jumping up and down in my seat and my teacher thought I was having a seizure. lol 

But Noooooooooooo why end it there!!!! Lol. 

Who was the familiar face!? I bet it was Eshan!

The interception killing me!!



Author's Response:

Lol!  We'll see if your prediction is correct next chapter.  But just remember, a face familiar to her might not be familiar to you...  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Treale!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW IT!! I KNEW IT!!!!!!! Lol awesome update!!!!!  



Author's Response:

Lol!  Yes you did.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Treale!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12 2013

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10916
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Perfect Stranger

I like this one too. Can't wait to see how all this happened. 



Author's Response:

Thank you Treale your going to love this story even more.

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Resentment

I missed this story so much!!!!! I freaking love Ethan!! I don't know why, but I do!! Can't wait for the next update!! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30 2013

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