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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

The authors on this site are amazing. I would be highly annoyed with the over critical opinions of my characters and incomplete story. Just enjoy the story or move on, it's not even over yet. Analyze the story more deeply when it's over.
This is why one of my favorite authors pulled all of her stories and will not post them to this site again until the stories are all the way done to avoid this reaction :(

People are double reviewing and jumping on I disagree/agree bandwagons because they don't like what other reviewers have said, reviewers who are entitled to their opinion by the way, it's not that deep. Give your opinion about the chapter and keep it moving.

Great chapter. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. I hope that Sasha will be strong. Writing was great, I hope that you will write over Thanksgiving break :) I also will be enjoying my break from school as well.

Best.

 Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18 2013
Undercover by Treale
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

23 year-old Tasha Jackson took her fiance throne in the drug industry when he was shot and killed at a gas station. After he died, she became a emotionalless cold-hearted bitch, and was all about her money and her son. She trusted no-one, but the people in her cricle.

Trent Collins a 29 year-old rookie police officer who was ecstatic when he was given the opportunity to go undercover for the first time. His main objective was to take down a woman named Tasha Jackson not to fall in love with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Tough and The Gritty
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4833
Read Count: 11576
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: October 07 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well. This is going to be fun. You have got my attention. Update fast because I have got to read more.

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Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!  My laptop crash last month. So it's hard for me to update as fast like I used to. Then on top of that all my stories got erase. So I have to start over from scratch basically. But I will trying to update as soon as I can. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!  ♥ツ

 Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I almost missed this chapter, so happy that I didn't. You have got to write more, I want to know more about Tasha she is already very fascinating to me.

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Author's Response:

Thank you. I will try to get the next chapter out as soon as possible!  ツ

 Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed
Date: October 07 2013
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Alfred by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 267]
Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50801
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013

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Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 A New Crisis

Cool story. I was worried that maybe Thomas wanted to get in between Selena and Alfred and that Selena was allowing that but I think I understand Thomas more now. Now that I know that he is dying, it is starting to come together. My theory is that he wants to somehow give his life force to a machine that will allow all the androids to become human this saving them all. Idk, it just seems like he is trying to find a way to give the androids and the people that care for them some real happiness.

I can't wait to see what is true plan is because a baby with Selena can't be it, I mean that would solve nothing, just cause problems for Alfred because he would not be ok with Selena having sex with someone else.

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Author's Response:

Well I will say that you ARE on the right track with your estimation.  Remember that Alfred is logical even though he is emotional.  He always wants whats best for Selena, but he wants whats best for the androids too.  One thing he does realize now though is that Thomas is genuine which is why he scanned his home and all his stuff.  He wants to intimately know him.  The only other person he intimately knows (im not talking about sex here) is Selena.  Thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2013
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Coming Together

So that is Thomas' plan, but would this mean that Alfred's body/looks will know longer be used. So in that case it is good that Selena is attracted to Thomas so that when Alfred takes over his body she will still be attracted to him. It's like the best parts of them both either way I hope that Alfred comes out on top, he is why I read the story, I mean it is named after him lol.

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Author's Response:

True, which is another reason Thomas wanted to be a part of their lives.  However the transference would only be done if all parties would agree to it. Right now though, Thomas is focusing on the Androids.

 Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed
Date: October 14 2013
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Trouble

Great update.
Loved the Selena/Alfred interaction, I have missed it. Anne.... there are no words, I am curious about what she will do next though at the very least, Anne is very entertaining lol.

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Author's Response:

Yes I love playing with Anne.  I'm trying to think of more outrageous stunts for her to pull.  LOL

More is coming...

 Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed
Date: October 17 2013
Escort Me by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

Denise is a young woman who is on the verge of giving up on love. Never having love in her life she is wondering what is wrong until she meets Issac. Issac has been avoiding relationships for the past few years to support himself but is ashamed of telling someone what he does for a living. Will he tell her his secret? But will she tell him hers?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 35052
Read Count: 29404
Published: October 29 2013
Updated: December 08 2013

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Very interesting concept. I like it normally the escort would be a girl. There is a double standard when it comes to prostitution, men are not bashed as much as women. All are offering a service though.
That however doesn't matter. Issac lied, and has been lying to Denise from day one, that is the issue. Issac did not give Denise the opportunity to say if she wanted to be with an escort past or present, he hasn't quit completely so that says something as well. She may have not given her gift (her virginity) to someone who was so loose with their body. He did not allow her to make these decisions with all of the facts, that I'm sure must hurt her the most. Sure Denise has problems, everyone does so that is not important. Denise was at least honest and upfront with everything, Issac was not, so now Denise has just been blindsided because her boyfriend, her only lover, and the man that she trusts is a prostitute and didn't tell her. I too would be pissed, he better be ready to grovel, take a STD test and quit before I take him back lol.

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Author's Response:

Yes it is out of the norm that a man would be an escort you would usually think a woman. As for Issac he dug himself in a hole. Denise on the other hand is really blindsided.

Thank you for reading and keep enjoying I love your comment.

 Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2013
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Across Borders by kwajeraspen
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 120]
Summary:

 

 

 

 

Simone Alexander was not adventurous by nature but she was a go-getter. When an unbelievable opportunity comes her way, she does not hesitate to seize it. Now, she finds herself half way around the world immersed in a culture completely different from her own. Here she faces challenges that push her grow in every aspect of her life; the most unexpected of them all......love.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 38379
Read Count: 34598
Published: November 11 2013
Updated: June 28 2017

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Great start.
I already like Denise and Ryu. Love is not always at first sight lol.
Jiro is a little flirt, I hope he doesn't get in the way of Denise and Ryu.
Great concept I look forward to reading about something different.

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Date: November 11 2013
Sugar Baby Love by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111872
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017

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Title: Chapter 4: Clause

Very interesting clause, I was not expecting that at all. I wish the chapters were longer. I need to know more.

 

Update Soon!!

 Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love it. Women have babies for even dumber reasons then this lol. This is going to be good. I want to know why she doesn't want to ever get married that seems to be common with black women is it because she feels like no one wants to marry her?

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Date: August 16 2014
Out of Bounds by littlemisspurplewriter
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 149]
Summary:

 

 

Neymar Jr was used to getting everything he wanted and he had everything...except Jourdan Morris



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femdom, Femslash, Fluff, Gimp, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Incest , Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Teacher/Student, Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 34990
Read Count: 30343
Published: July 27 2014
Updated: October 13 2014

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Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I sure hope to see some growth in the future. Jourdan is a liar and a user and I feel bad for David and Neymar for being used and strung alone by this little girl. Someone like her needs to by themselves and not messing with other people's feelings since she is so "confused" but not confused about lying. Her age is not an excuse and that is such a tired excuse that causes me headaches. Maybe I was just raised in a different way because I was an independent college student, a grown woman at 19. Not much has changed for me from 19 till now being 26. 

And her personality is atrocious so no I still don't see what they see in her. All that other stuff would become irrelevant after spending a day with her lol.

Right now I am not a fan of Jourdan at all, trying to find something to like about this girl....... :( nope nothing.

 

 Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: August 13 2014
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I still don't like Jourdan and it would do her good to lose them both because she needs a serious wake up call. She is stringing these 2 guys along and deserves all the bad Karma that she will get. Neymar is so childish and David is just being used.

You don't have to compromise your story but don't bash those who have taken the time out to read your story. If you didn't like what I said or others then just address me or them but the ending note was not neccessary and  I found that to be "annoying". You should be happy that people are feeling any kind of way and not just blah about your story. Any feeling is better than nothing in my oppinion. 

I could wait for the ending to review but you are posting it chapter by chapter and not as complete so I can only talk about the now because that is all that I can read. Bashing characters in your story has nothing to do with you as a writer but I was tired of the age thing because that is not an excuse for her behavior, nothing is because she is an adult. I am looking forward to the next chapter and I will be here to call Jourdan out on all of her crap.

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Author's Response:

I wasn't bashing people. All I said was give constructive feedback. Most of what I got wasn't constructive at all. I just wanted to remind the readers that Jourdan hasn't finished growing yet, so keep that in mind when you review.

 Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed
Date: August 16 2014
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Love Games by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Renay is one of the hottest music performer's rght now. With her ex famous-boyfried out of the picture she is newly single. She has a unique opportunity to find love on her own dating show. The catch is she is in a remote location and her family members get to have their own picks of men for Renay to choose from. 

Will Renay find real love or real drama?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4675
Read Count: 4761
Published: July 29 2015
Updated: October 01 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Tour Opportunites

Well....... Chocolate1lover took care of all of the work!!! Pics and all, I love her pics so I second her whole list. Some gorgeous men are pictured here!!!

Whoever this Roman Reigns guy is lord he is hot and his wife is black in real life.

 Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed
Date: July 30 2015

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