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Retired
Lonely by daughter
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143288
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have enjoyed your story so far. There are some editing issue. I think you have enough info for a part two story. Maybe cut some flashbacks.

I like the slow breakdown of the character but I did skip some of the repetitive everyday stuff in the beginning.

PS. I don't get the complaints about the sexual nature of the story when it is rated 17 and up. And there was a warning in the first chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review Sascie88.

They are greatly appreciated. Yes, there are a lot of flash backs- which I admit can be submitted at different times and your suggestion of a part 2 if also a great idea.

I know my scenes involving sex are explicit to some, but like you said the ratings and warnings have been there. I honestly haven't had any complaints regarding their content. Everyone enjoys a hot torrid sex scene and I love writing them! LOL!...just saying.

I believe their main complaint is how the sex comes about and the simple fact that it's Jodi "at play" again. :)

Thanks again for your comments. They were helpful. 

 Reviewer: Sascie88 Signed
Date: June 03 2014

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