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[Reviews - 142]
Summary:

What do you do when your best friend you've secretly loved pops up and tells you about his pending nuptials to another woman? Kerri DuBois keeps it moving as if her heart hadn't been ripped from her chest. She's loved her best friend and will need to get over him and soon. And there is someone who can help her do just that.

 

Black sheep, Brandon Wesely, returns home after a long absence to hear of "Saint Kerri" and is instantly enamored. When he looks at her, he can see her pain and wants to help her get over his little brother…and he selfishly wants to keep her for himself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13930
Read Count: 26208
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 13 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm enjoying this story. Mark is a douche. He made his choice and now he has the nerve to try to c-block Kerri. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: April 11 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Secrets are hidden among the plush,moist forest of  Rio, Brazil in the summer of 1955. The Taluro's, a wealthy Afro-Brazilian family have kept to themselves for generations. Bobbie Taluro is the last remaining female in her family....it seems that past women in the families generation have only disappeared. No one knows the Taluro's mysterious secret...except Bobbie's grandfather.

 


But as the sun arises and shines down to the neigboring ocean by the Taluro house... a boat sinking Todd will quickly learn about the tragic and somewhat beautiful secret of the Taluro ancestry.

 

WARNING: MUCH SEXUAL CONTENT



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4320
Read Count: 4165
Published: April 14 2014
Updated: April 15 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Budding

This is an interesting story.

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: April 15 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

An event of neglect brought them together and led to an healing neither one of them could ever anticipate.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 12017
Read Count: 10981
Published: April 26 2014
Updated: May 07 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Blake

This is a good start. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: April 26 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Amelia

She needs to go earn her $120k salary somewhere else. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: May 06 2014

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[Reviews - 165]
Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 57825
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Professor Hammonds is a creep. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: July 15 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Camryn needs to find a meet up group or something. There must be meet up groups for young professionals in that city. Going out with two men from work in the same week is not a good idea. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: July 15 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Richard is definitely a creep. He's a creepy predator.

That Phyllis lady was straight rude. I wouldn't have sat with her. What gives her the right to be so rude? Even if Camryn was a freshman twit that didn't give her the right to be rude. Ugh.

 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: July 15 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111874
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017


Title: Chapter 11: Dinner and Dancing

Elise is just trying out her sexuality on Jameson. I don't think she really desires him beyond the physical.

 

They're progressing but it's slow which is okay at this point.

 

Bombard is the correct spelling.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the spell check my word acts up lol. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: October 11 2014

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Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103532
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018


Title: Memories Lost

I'm enjoying the story so far.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: July 29 2014

Title: Memories Lost

Macy's mother gave it to her straight. My cousin would call that "real talk."

I was surprised when Macy attacked Kelly. 

I was surprised Kelly didn't start crying as soon as she entered the house. I totally would've. 



Author's Response:

I would have been crying as soon as I got hit.  LOL but she did a good job holding it together!  

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: February 03 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 50]
Summary:

Jonah Ace gets a bright idea and offers to tutor Chanel Birladeanu in AP Calculus one afternoon. But there's a catch; for two months, Chanel has to 'fake date'  Jonah. This deal will get Chanel the grade she needs and give Jonah the girl he yearns for and the popularity he can only dream about.

But this isn't so bad. A full school year of tutoring for only a two month relationship? Easy. Plus, Jonah Ace might just be a real hottie underneath his nerdy exterior.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Books
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 8215
Read Count: 8653
Published: October 04 2014
Updated: October 04 2014


Title: Chapter 2: II

Teen romance is typically not my cup of tea. I read this story because of the rating. I thought it was an adult story with teen characters. 

Physical descriptions of the characters are vague. I was kind of excited when Chanel was eyeing Jonah as he stood in line at the food court. I thought, "Finally a description of what he looks like." Jonah's physical appearance can be a bit vague for now because Chanel is in her own world but I was expecting a more detailed description of Chanel since she is the object of Jonah's affection. There were a ton of details about the characters' clothing but next to none about their physical appearance.

The writing is fine.

Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Honestly, I wasn't even thinking about describing their skin color and whatnot while I was writing until someone pointed it out in an earlier desciption and I was like 'Oh... oops.' Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: October 07 2014

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[Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215435
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

That Elaine was something else. If she was truly concerned about Camille then she would've delivered the message not quite so nastily or publicly. I'm glad that Hiram reassured Camille not that someone out to take advantage of another would freely admit it. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: October 26 2014

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16

I have been enjoying this story but the Klan meetings and flashbacks to Klan activities are detracting from the romance/baby angle. It's more interesting to see Hiram and Camille react to confrontations with Klan members (and busybody church ladies). 



Author's Response:

Thanks JFJD the reason I show flashbacks and meetings is to show where and how Hiram and Camille grew up. It

explains why they act the way they do now as adults. The Henderson sisters will be making a future apperance for sure.

Since I have to show the whole year through out the story I figured that I'd have things leading up and supporting the 

budding romance between the two of them. Trust me the sexual tension is starting to get high something will happen

soon I promise.

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: November 09 2014

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[Reviews - 298]
Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69614
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Dean is right; he can find someone who will treat him way better. Her behavior at the party still doesn't make sense to me. I like that Dean is willing to allow her to redeem herself. I question her invitation for "dinner" at her place. 

The expression is to sow her wild oats.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the correction. I fixed it. Dean is definitely being nice (as usual), and when Elle says dinner at her place then it's safe to it's just that. Now whatever happens at dinner is soley based on how they act toward one another. Their first outing was pretty innocent. So who knows how this dinner will go? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing JFJD.

CG

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: November 05 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Anika Williams is use to people she love being ripped from her life. Whether by death or choice. When she was sixteen years old she and her mother were kicked out the only family they ever known. Now twenty-one years old, pregnant, and alone, she doesn't have time for the same family trying to make amends.

Anika would love nothing more than to give them her back like they did her all those years ago. Well that was the plan until the man who's responsible  for the life growing inside of her thinks she was the reason he was sent to jail and tries to get revenge. Now she must put her faith in this family to not only save her life but the life of her unborn child.

Take a ride with Anika as she finds a family,  love, and a chance at true happiness.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 4902
Read Count: 6223
Published: November 17 2014
Updated: December 02 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Four years?! If he really loved Anika's mother he would not have allowed Regina to return. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: November 21 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

He was stuck, having a midlife crisis before the ripe age of fifty. But then he met her. And she became much more than life. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 29164
Read Count: 30528
Published: November 28 2014
Updated: March 13 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like this story but I hope Jamica won't be his emotional Kleenex.



Author's Response:

Maybe she is his emotional kleenex. Haha. I am playing. I will not do that. I would like to think of her as being more like a white out. Take out the things you dont want and replace them with what you do. :} I dont know if thats any better though. Haha. But thank you for your review!

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: November 29 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Daniel has always been late for everything in his life. He's been late for puberty, dating girls, and even the "monkey in the bush". When he discovers his new neighbor next door is a woman, a very pretty woman, will he take a chance and ask her out? Or will his former bully, Nick Young, beat him to it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 7978
Read Count: 10467
Published: January 23 2015
Updated: May 12 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Calling a woman shawty and miss are definitely deal breakers. 

 

Looking forward to the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: January 25 2015

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[Reviews - 239]
Summary:

Not everyone gets a happy ending...

Hey guys,

Heart of Lies Book 1&2 have now been published under one of my pennames Alma Muerte.

FB Author page: Alma Muerte.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2951
Read Count: 32564
Published: January 27 2015
Updated: September 10 2015


Title: Heart of Lies

I enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: April 04 2015

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Summary:

Despite the absurdity of bargaining with the Almighty while topless and bound in the bedroom of a man whose last name she can’t remember, Diya De la Roy gives God an ultimatum:  Send her a man and a love worth having by next Valentine's Day, or she would give up on both.  Forever.  

Unbeknownst to Diya, she'll get that and more, along with a lesson in how perfectly wicked divine humor can be.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13212
Read Count: 11188
Published: May 02 2015
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Beginning

I like this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks JFJD!

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: May 03 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Enter the Bachelors

I'm enjoying this story. I laughed out loud several times.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it.  Thanks JFJD!

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: May 03 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

I really, really like this story. I loved that she started developing and enriching her hobbies. The comedic yet insightful narrative tickled me. 



Author's Response:

Thanks JFJD!  So glad you like it.

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: May 03 2015

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[Reviews - 316]
Summary:

It's gonna be a bumpy road!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 31436
Read Count: 43010
Published: February 08 2016
Updated: March 05 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Amelle is on the spectrum as in autistic disorder spectrum?

Reviewer: JFJD Signed
Date: February 27 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.