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Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 43957
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 (continued)

Only 6 mistakes mostly commas misplaced. Great middle and end of chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks Angelbaby for reading. As I have stated in my table of content that this is a un-betaed work of fiction. It has not been professionally edited. But it's something that I'll work on to make your reading experience more enjoyable. Right now I'm working on character development, plot, pace and content. 

But please stay tuned.

Yevette

Reviewer: angelbaby Signed starhalf-star
Date: July 10 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I counted 9 mistakes but overall I really enjoyed this chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: angelbaby Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: July 10 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awesome plot and story



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! Stay tuned. 

Reviewer: angelbaby Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: June 08 2014

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