Title: Chapter 5: Just a Little Closer
Nice promotion. But was it only because of her job performance or also because Vlad wanted to get her away from Joey. Cirico is sorta creepy; and did he get the scar on his face from Vlad being "annoyed?" If so, imagine what Vlad would do if he was really enraged. I like her meditation/martial arts teacher Yoshiro Kurosawa; he appears sensitive to the new pressures Bowie is facing. And finally, was that Vlad following behind Joey? Will Joey be able to defend himself?
Can't wait for the next update. This is developing into a really interesting story. Tell us more about this Russian Clan of the Pure Originals. Is Vlad the leader with absolute control OR is his power subject to the Elders? And is is possible to get another photo of Bowie and Vlad...please?
Nyeesha
Author's Response: you will definitely get to know more about Vlad's roots and his role in the Clan, as well as how the Clan works. more than like in the next chapter, actually, but of course not all at once. i like to change the "definition" of a Vampire/Vampyre, as i'm sure almost every author does when writing supernatural stories.
as far as more pics of Vlad and Bowie, Vlad is actually the face of Mads Mikkelsen ::swoon:: something about that man has got me. woo! and the woman i chose, i have no idea who she is. i tried researching for her, based on the watermark on the photo but couldn't locate her at all. sorry!
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
Date: January 26 2011