Penname: Benedicte [Contact]

Real name: Benedicte

Member Since: October 24 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 163]
Summary:

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In the Sedetian Empire a Dashenka male rules with absolute power. While the female is taught submission and obeisance. And humans are nothing more than slaves. It is within this society that half-breed Aria Skal is born and must learn to accept if she has any hope surviving.  But survival seems nearly impossible when she discovers that her Vadar has sold her to the highest bidder, the son of the Ruling Male.

Oren Di-Lor is a cruel and overbearing male who hates the very air Aria breathes. He is her newly acquired mate and the bane of her existence. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 41889
Read Count: 31955
Published: August 23 2011
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i'm so sad such a great story is left unfinished

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: April 09 2016

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Terri Lawson, a middle-aged modeling agent had one job to do: find someone totally different then what the agency usually picks. When she runs into a young man way out of anything she'd ever consider...both of their lives change for the better.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back, On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Cougars
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 43892
Read Count: 64446
Published: January 04 2013
Updated: February 04 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Jump

I don't understand Terri reaction! Years ago while she was so tender hearted she could get reid of the jerome guy and now that she is such a bitter and stronger person she is scared ?

 Not very logical

Besides if you don't want the guy to know too much about your life, don't even meet him at your house. Don't let him him

Buy a dog , have security alarm installed; record any threat or conversation on your phone, go to the police have a restraint order and then it's done ?!!!

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: April 15 2016

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:


She left it all behind. Her past. Yet somehow here she stood in the midst of it.... forced to relive it. 




*ORIGINALLY my 500 word CHALLENGE* 


*Formerly titled a chance encounter with destiny*


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Drabbles , Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters
Challenges: Second Chances
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 2062
Read Count: 13718
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: June 23 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

NO NO WHY STOP THE STORY 

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: April 22 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12990
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

why this story isn't finished ? Too bad

it may be dark but above all it is a psychological one



Author's Response:

I lost the muse for it. I'm taking a hiatus from it at the moment... A long one. 

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: April 11 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Porter had been gone for while, traveling and moving on with his life. His father’s illness brings him home, but what he didn’t expect was to be drawn back in by the reason why he left—her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14802
Read Count: 11210
Published: December 28 2013
Updated: April 12 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Hello. Ok Avery is in my opinion not pretty physically, but the image sows a woman with grace and big heart and a mind. So it fits

I wonder if Porter is the father of her son

I bet he is and he doesn't know

Also with Jess he is not in love He is in love with the idea of having a clever goodlooking woman at his side. 

Really love the story looking forward to the follow up

Good job doll

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: April 12 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

You can never leave the past behind. It always manages to catch up with you. Charlotte has to learn that the hard way. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1325
Read Count: 1014
Published: January 03 2014
Updated: January 03 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

of course you should keep on

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: September 21 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40861
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

THANX FOR UPDATING I COULD NOT WAIT

SUCH A SWEET TURN OF FATE 

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: June 26 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

What happens when fame and forturne enters your life? What happens when your whole world is turned upside down? Grace and Poppy Arber are in for a whirlwind after a run in with the world famous Porter Taylor. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 12678
Read Count: 5568
Published: June 01 2014
Updated: June 23 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What a marvelous story So sad you just didn't keep on writting it 

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: September 21 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 573]
Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103525
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018


Title: Chapter 8: Meet the Fiancée

Why is she so impressed with that Macy girl ?

 A person acting the way Macy does shows more weakness than strenght actually

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: August 28 2016

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[Reviews - 470]
Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121646
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 31: DAY 56

awwww.

 They don't know it yet but they are creating a lifetime together

A love that will be strong and full of confidence 

I love the story

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: May 28 2016

Title: Chapter 35: DAY 58

AWW do cute

He's fallig in love

 Besides it's good to see that side of him

Like he is deep down like is dad but acts most og them like his mom

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: August 30 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

You will definitely be lost if you don't read "Lonely". This is a continuation...

What would you do if you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Kink, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Teacher/Student, Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8544
Read Count: 5368
Published: September 05 2015
Updated: September 10 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

For a so called 42 years old she really acts immature

The sad thing in that story is that you got a plot, and a good one, but regarding your charecters you just stay at the surface. They have no depth, you could use this to create a great story full of knowledge and helpful to people who have been raped and the mental consequences.

The nymphomania can be one of them but ( and I read the  part I) this JODY has no moral how can she have sex with a guy no string attached or what and then flirt and kiss his brother. This is not nymphomania it is having no moral. What image of a black woman do you send to people !

She has a job , responsabilities, a good income , but she throws tantrums all the way for nothing. Impossible when you have that level of responsability and that trauma. You thrown tantrums all the time, or you don't; Except if she has split personalities and this is what I was talking about for the lack of depth for the characters.

 

Oh and sex is not just about blowjob, penetrations and pussy licking. People thinking that really miss what sex is really all bout: another form of communication and sharing. Your whole body can make you orgasm , not just the genital parts

 

Her attitude with the shrink is just tipycal.

What I really wanna say is work haerder doll, you could do such a great stuff with the storyline you have 

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: September 13 2016

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 433]
Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301680
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021


Title: Chapter 19: Self Destruct

Is the original version for us to read somewhere ?



Author's Response:

Not at this time. The orginial version had been converted to a PDF file and transferred from my old computer to this computer. I would have to change the PDF into a document then upload it most likely into the Vault, but the orginial version is very incomplete. I never finished it. I removed it to revise it into this version.

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: August 28 2016

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Sometimes hurting the person you love is easier than showing them love, especially when you're hurting inside.

Saint-Luc and Naomi Adebayo-Roux aren't any different.

This is their story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 46514
Read Count: 375758
Published: October 14 2015
Updated: July 15 2017


Title: Chapter 4: 4.

Hun, I'm French if you want me to I can help you with the translation

 

For example : you should write: Mademoiselle

Pourquoi êtes vous si blasée and not " pourquoi êtes-vous si blasés

 

It is an amazig story. I gotta say I saw all the chapters but didn't read at the time

I started a day agao I was hooked and read it all in 2 hours. Another addict for your style :)



Author's Response:

Well as they say, better late than never. I'm so grateful that you've offered to translate but at the moment I already have a translator is just that because of how busy I am (and procrastination lol) I haven't edited all the French dialogue, but I will endeavour to find time soon.

thank you again for offering and taking the time to read the story. You're well appreciated.

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: September 11 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 316]
Summary:

It's gonna be a bumpy road!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 31436
Read Count: 43006
Published: February 08 2016
Updated: March 05 2016


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

what a cliff hanger 

 pretty sure this trouble mined lady is going to get down and dirty 

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: March 05 2016

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Two ex-lovers meet in an airport terminal years after ending their relationship. The fourth and final installment of my series of one shots based on a song. And to be fair, this one was inspired by three songs--Hello, Send My Love and These Days.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1554
Read Count: 3912
Published: March 24 2016
Updated: March 24 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very poetic and beuatiful

It is full of tenderness and advices for the young at heart

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: March 24 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 85]
Summary:

"You have thought about it, haven't you? How it would feel to be with both of us."

"If we do this...promise me that nothing changes. The thought of losing you both..."

Dante took a moment and then nodded. He shifted his gaze to her shoulder and Hope felt Emil grip her tighter, leaning further into her when his mouth brushed her ear and he said.

"This changes nothing."

 

Caution:

MFM Short Story!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4029
Read Count: 15465
Published: April 25 2016
Updated: December 25 2016


Title: Chapter 2: The Confession

INTERESTING BEGGINING



Author's Response:

thank you - more to come!

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: April 26 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

Friendship and love cross paths.  Deacon is VP of the Warrior Crusaders wondering about what the future holds.  Lonilla is drifting through life.  The two slide into a friendship that is more than the connection they feel toward one another.  Will he fulfill is promise?  Can Lonilla value the meaning of love? ADDED PROLOGUE



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 23546
Read Count: 23506
Published: May 27 2016
Updated: March 13 2018


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 11

wAOH § What a story at first I wasn't so interested to read it but now i'm hooked up. i JUST LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Hi Benedicte,

 

Well glad to know you are enjoying the story thus far. Happy to know you took a chance. Thank you for the feedback.

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: June 21 2016

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18591
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

brilliant



Author's Response:

Thank you, Benedicte.

 

K.

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: July 05 2016

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Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 47]
Summary:

The saga of a southern family rooted in forbidden love told through the eyes of the biracial daughter Beatrice.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Historical
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 18653
Read Count: 6371
Published: June 25 2016
Updated: January 21 2019


Title: Chapter 3: KIN 3

thanx for updating so fast :)

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: June 27 2016

Title: Chapter 1: KIN 1

AH OK. i UNDERSTAND THE PLOT BETTER AND IT IS AN INTERESTING POINT OF VIEW;

Waoh, Levi really had the stamina lol with twins with Salome and one girl with Eleonor or the girl Lilian is from Salome too

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: June 26 2016

Title: Chapter 5: KIN 5

Oh biy what an emotional twist. Levi could be more protective of Beatrice he could tame his wife too; 

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: July 07 2016

Title: Chapter 6: KIN 6

aww heartbreaking but I really like that family and hsitorical side you give

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: August 04 2016

Title: KIN: AN ANTEBELLUM STORY

Waohh I'm always so totally into this story

Thanks for updating

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: August 30 2016

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 78]
Summary:

When Wilhelmina "Mina" Porter comes back into thier lives after ten years; Wide reciever Reid Stone finds himself questioning who Blake McCarthy is as a person again. Mina was Reid's best friend and maybe even more. Blake was also his best friend, teammate and almost like a brother to him. However one secret that Mina has been harboring for the past decade could very well force Reid to pick one friend over the other.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9838
Read Count: 23326
Published: July 23 2016
Updated: September 08 2016


Title: Chapter 5: OLD FRIENDS REUNITE

A psychologist would have said Blake is gay but refuses to admit it

he is attracted to Reid and considers him as his this is why Mina pisses him off.

Besides to have sex to the  person your loved one loves it's  psychological logic- like having sex with the object of your desires yourself.

So you see, with jealousy on board, thruth and drama will soon comme rolling and dancing their ways into all these people's life.

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed
Date: September 08 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.