Penname: Cali2mt406 [Contact]

Real name: Pam (Paw)

Member Since: September 13 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Born and raised in California, Until 2003 I moved to Montana!! Were  it is really cold I wonder often what I am doing here, other then the fact that it is beautiful here!! I love to read. Mostly romance novels. The authors on this board opened  my eyes to other storys beside the sappy ones I love and still will always read. However these lady's here write character with flaws and characters that love one antother dispite them. Lady's please continue to do your thing cause your doing it well.

 




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[Reviews - 353]
Summary:

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82574
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chance Encounter

Glad Paris didnt fight her feelings! Looks like they both have the support of there fathers.

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Date: July 30 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

No wonder Billy is so awesome he is just like his dad! Good advice he gave Bily! As always I want more :)

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Date: July 30 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Uh oh! That trick Janie is going to make trouble for Paris and Billy! Well this will be a test for them I am sure more trouble will come there way! I hope they are able to get married and have ther HEA!   Love this story so addicting!

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Date: July 30 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Woo hoo Billy you tell that little witch! Glad he left Janie speechless, Trying to get what belings to Paris by means of blackmail. I knew she was a trick!!! Paris and Billy have to be really careful. Janie is going to be lurking everywhere.



Author's Response:

More Janie coming up in the next chapter and it wont be pretty (at least not for her)  LOL

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Date: July 31 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Dang I dont know who wants Billy more Janie or Charlie! WOW! Charlie is just a undercover freak!!! I hope Billy finds a friedn in Robert, Sound like they both need to watch there back! This keeps getter better with each chapter! Look forward to more



Author's Response:

Charles is a snake, but Billy has his eye on him.  I won't be able to update tonite, so I'm answering reviews!  More is coming in the morning.

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Date: July 31 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

So loved this chapter! I like the direction I think your going with Charles and Janie and I have to say Dont feel sorry for Janie one bit! So glad Billy and Robert are tight! As usual Billy and Paris are to cute together. More please!!!!!

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Date: August 01 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Dang Janie is going to play that fool! However Charles is a super freak so I hope she doesnt get to cocky and have it backfire in her face! There both such snakes and full of themselfs. Thats righ Billy protect your woman! I like him telling that guy he was Paris bodyguard! I will be fiening until the next update ! Not going to lie I check everyday all day :)



Author's Response:

Just like Billy and Paris are made for each other, so is Charles and Janie.  MOre is coming!

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Date: August 01 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

I was four when Martin Luther King got shot and I was born and raised in California! Didnt really know what our people struggle with until I got older. That is why I love this story so much. Romance with a little history= Awesome. Janie is pregnant and Charles was raped by his scum bag uncle! Wow! Well it was just a matter of time before someone caught Paris and Billy to bad it had to be an enemy!! Look forward to Janies reaction.



Author's Response:

I was a child when King got killed also.  I'm going back on the internet to research history for this story and what was happening during the timeline I give.  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Yes, Paris and Billy have been found out, but Charles and Janie have their own situation to deal with!  More is coming!

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Date: August 02 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Hmmm wonder if Billy or Paris for that matter can wait a whole year!? Will be interesting to see how Janie reacts to seeing Charles with her dad!

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Date: August 04 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Brenda I love how you make me feel sorry for your characters who I cant stand! Janie and Charles are both victims of aweful adults that prayed on the the young and inocent! Sheesh!  Wonder what Janies dad is going to do!?Billy sure is determined to get his way~ He maybe younger but he is defiantly knows what he wants. Dont think Paris will be able to say no to him. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Paris will have a hard time saying no, that's for sure.  As for Charles and Janie, they have bigger fish to fry than worrying about Billy.  More is coming!

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Date: August 04 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Love the character pictures! Glad Dewey got punched in the face, now Charles uncle needs to be punched in the face for not only doing what he did to Charles but the nerve to be drilling someone. The way Billy fights for his and Paris love for each other is good, thinking he is going to need it in the years to come! Interesting to see how Granmother Perry feels when she meets Paris I am thinking and it could be wishful thinking she may not like them being together but she will give the ring to Billy. Another great update Brenda. 



Author's Response:

Charles still has unresolved issues with that uncle.  More of that is coming up.

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Date: August 05 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Great update! I love the fact that Billy is sticking to his believes. Thank you for the insight on why Billy believes they way he does, Men like Billy are very rare! My son is almost 20 and he has the same believes. As for Paris if her body is on fire she just better marry her man so she can get some :) What Janie told Charles is true they both need to get help and he needs to face his demons. His uncle needs to knocked of his high hores. I hope Charles tells his dad. This was a very emotional chapter loved it.



Author's Response:

I am glad to hear about your son.  More men need to realize tht sex does not equal manhood.  My son is 23 and while he's admitted to have made mistakes in college, he tells me now that he wants to wait for the right girl.  I am a happy mom.   

Yes, Paris is suffering a little, but she'll be alright.  Hee hee! 

Charles uncle is going to pay for his sins.  Now that the two of them have a baby, being parents makes them want to become better people.

More is coming soon!

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Date: August 06 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Loved the humor of Billy thinking Annie was a man and Paris was cheating on him, to funny! The way he charged into her aparment was priceless. Yeah Milton got knocked out! Good for Charles him and Janie have come along way together. Look forward to a summer wedding and the explosive honeymoon :) Great update! Thank you



Author's Response:

Yes Billy jumped to conclusions and then got an eyeful for his trouble!  Yes the marriage is on the horizon.  More is coming!

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Date: August 07 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Love to see that Paris can be just as stuborn as Billy! They will work out just perfect! Charles should know better then anyone that if you love someone the struggles that Billy and Paris will have willbe well worth it! I will be sad to see this story come to a end its been a wonderful story full of surprises. Hopefully one day you will publish your work and I will be right there. 



Author's Response:

Charles is still somewhat insecure.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: August 07 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Loved what Janie told Charles, I hope he will think on what she said.What the store clerk said isnt surprising at all. A lot of my friends who arent black think that things were better right away when actualy it hasnt really been that long and there are some dark roads in the south no person of color should drive! Candace has a right to be scared, however Millie said it best  Paris and Billy are grown and being they chose to love each other have to find strenght deep down when hate comes there way. Great chapter as always. Thank you



Author's Response:

You and I know that we are still dealing with stuff today.  Things have gotten better and people don't speak out anymore like Mrs. Harris, but a lot still feel that way.  thanks for the review.

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Date: August 08 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Loved both point of views! Cant believe Grandma Perry held out so long on the ring!Looks like in the end Robert was the one who is Billys real friend! I think together Billy and Paris will weather the storm, after awhile you grow a thick skin! Plus they both have great parents to suppor them!

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Date: August 09 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Dispite the bump along the way! The honeymoon was awesome. Thank God for Big Willie! Great chapter!

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Date: August 11 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Thank you so much Brenda for a wonderful story! I looked forward to reading each and every chapter. There wasnt any part of this story I didnt love and that is hard to find! You kept it up beat through out. Loved each and everyone the characters. Especially Billy and Paris. Those 2 prooved what true love was all about. I look forward to reading the epilogue. Again thank you for sharing.

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Date: August 12 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Those partners are pigs and narrow minded! Billy needs to be the best lawyer ever and leave and when he leaves it will hurt them. I love Annie, great advice. This has been my favorite story! I hope you write another like this, you do it so well. Cant wait for the eighties. Brings back memories of my jeri curl :)

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Date: August 17 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Brenda,

Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story with us. I enjoyed it so much! Billy and Paris what a couple! They way you wove there lifes from one time period to another was just simpley great writting! You Rock! I look forward to reading antoher one like this from you! Now I am ready to stalk you for updates  the other to favorites of mine :)



Author's Response:

LOL at the stalking.  I know I need to updte my old stories and I don't plan on starting another until I do.  Thanks for your review.

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Date: August 27 2013

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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

BOOK 1

 

 

It's Nicole Brown's 10 year high school reunion. After the unfortunate events that have lead up to this day, she very reluctant to go. Mainly because she didn't want to run into Rich Machima. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Hollywood Gems
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6414
Read Count: 11875
Published: July 19 2013
Updated: July 23 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue: Three Months Later

This was a very nice story! Ienjoyed it a lot.

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Date: July 24 2013

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Summary:

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A collection of romantic/erotic short stories based on black women and the men that loves them.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5911
Read Count: 4810
Published: August 05 2013
Updated: August 07 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Baby, I'm Home (chapter I)

Love your writting style and this didnt disapoint! Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. That means a lot.

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Date: August 06 2013

Retired
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Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50809
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

I love the way your mind works! I hope this isnt all!?

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Date: September 11 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.