Penname: Cali2mt406 [Contact]

Real name: Pam (Paw)

Member Since: September 13 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Born and raised in California, Until 2003 I moved to Montana!! Were  it is really cold I wonder often what I am doing here, other then the fact that it is beautiful here!! I love to read. Mostly romance novels. The authors on this board opened  my eyes to other storys beside the sappy ones I love and still will always read. However these lady's here write character with flaws and characters that love one antother dispite them. Lady's please continue to do your thing cause your doing it well.

 




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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 289157
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Great Chapter! Wonder if Valerie is really ready for Henry!

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Date: July 16 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Henry is a sweetie! 

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Date: July 21 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Just what Valerie needed! Yey Henry!

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Date: July 22 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

I never said I was the  good guy. I'm nobody's hero.

 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15545
Read Count: 8766
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: June 08 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The first time I met her

Already liking Morgan and Alicia, Will be interesting to see what developes between them.

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Date: May 11 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Chickens come home to roost and have lasting consequences.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 27
Read Count: 12910
Published: May 12 2013
Updated: May 15 2013


Title: Consequences

Great story! I loved Dana and Zane, so glad they made it, Although I am not sure Zane would have given up.



Author's Response:

Oh, I don't think he would have either.  He's stubborn

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Date: May 15 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Masks

 

“We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.” 
 Patrick RothfussThe Name of the Wind

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: The Masquerade
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6636
Read Count: 8479
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: July 08 2013


Title: Chapter 2: When One Door Closes

 Thomas has some issues, wonder how he is going to explain what was over heard!? Great start, cant wait to read more. Nice cast

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Date: May 14 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Grief Is A Complicated Business

Great chapter!

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Date: May 26 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53968
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 A Method to the Madness II

Brenda you did it again, awesome update! You are on a roll! I hope there is a method to Ophilias maddness cause she is scary me. I get that she had a tough life with a druggie mother and a grown man taking away her youth!  Beenie is right in what he told Margret Ophilia needed counsling. I Have to say I love how scared Raymond is and how determine he is to be the control freak that he is. His sister was right hard to feel sorry for him, Raymond just doesnt like being on the recieving end of what he created. Love Bennie and Keesaha. Now Bennie is a real man. Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

Raymond is scared and he's taken his sister's words to heart.  He made this mess now he has to deal with it and deal with it he shall.  More is coming!

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Date: June 04 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The Sour Taste of Revenge

Brenda your writting skills and the way you can tell a story just leaves me speechless! Not only is this story outside of the box its very well thought out! This chapter was off the hook! What Beenie said to Ophelia was sad to read but very on point, she did choose her revenge over him and wasnt truthful about her real feelings for Raymond! Yet what she said to Raymond had me cracking up! Love the indroduction of Bobbie nice little twist to this story! Man What is going to through Kevins head reagarding what Beenie said about being black. So cant wait for more. Great job thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

You know Ophelia is a little off when it comes to Raymond.  She still has her childlike fantasy of them being a family in her head.  Kevin is going to have to decided if he still wants Bennie for a friend or if he wants Bobbie for his woman.  More is coming!

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Date: June 03 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Deception and Lies

Great chapter! 

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Date: May 21 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Reviving Relationships

Love Kevin and Alicia!  Oh Bennie, Never wanted to slap someone and hug him right afterwards! Snap out of Bennie! Your going to loose yourself and a good woman. So loved this story from the start! Always to a happy dance when you update!

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Date: July 13 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Out in the Open

Hahahaha Marge go served and I loved every minute of it! She is probably making voodo dolls in her cell! Cant judge Ophelia, Raymond is all she has ever know, Raymond gotta a love hate thing going on for him :) Kevin knows he wants a piece of chocolate, so why is he acting scared. Thanks for sharing always look forward to an uypdate to this story!

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Date: June 11 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Baby Named Justice

Dayum didnt see that coming! What a emotional chapter! Cant wait to see what comes next



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I really struggled with this chapter, but more is coming!

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Date: June 13 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Facts

Wow you started off with a bang on this one! Very, very interesting. Look forward to more.

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Date: May 16 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Learning and Coping

what an awesome chapter!

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Date: May 17 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A Method to the Madness

 I am a little worried yet intirgued by Ophelia's sceme. Worried only because she wants to have a baby and use it to make Raymond pay. But I do love the fact that even though she is phyiscaly attracted to Raymond and loves him. She knows he is no good for her and she wants to make him pay dispite her feelings. That fool needs to pay his so smuge and full of himself and thinks he can still control things. Raymonds down fall is going to be thinking Ophelia is still a naive little child. Look forward to reading about Keshia and Bennies movie date, the way he was checking her out me thinks he is attracted to her. As usual awesome chapter I just love reading story's that are out side the box.



Author's Response:

Raymond cannot be redeemed and when you dance with the devil, he changes you.  You can't change him.  Ophelia needs to remember that.

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Date: May 30 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Playing With Fire

Wow Ophelia has Raymond panting aftrer her! Good for her. Keisha and Bennie are way to cute! I love Keisha's Character, She is upfront and very direct and had Bennie all excited. Dang is this the end for Raymond?! I hope not I will miss that villian. Awesom chapter! I love this story!



Author's Response:

Nope, not the end for Raymond.  LOL  My readers want him to pay.  Well it's coming.  LOL

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Date: May 30 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Moving Forward...Moving Backward

David is just plane wrong for treating Benjamin like he did something wrong! ISo what is Raymond up to! He is such a controling A hole I think in the end,He will be the one getting played! He wont even see it coming his ego is so big. Great Chapter Brenda, love your imagation :)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you can see the setup coming.  I'm playing James Brown, "The big payback...REVENGE!"

Stay tuned.

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Date: May 29 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Turning the Tables

Love the cast pictures! You fight them very well with there characters! Well Raymond is back! He better take care of Opheila and baby Justice or Bennie is going to get him. Margie man she is the worst mother ever! She was just out for herself and her next high! So glad Kevin is down with the swirl. Keisha and Beenie sure are heating things up! Bennie better watch Keisha dont want no minute man and she doesnt mind telling him so! Just love Keisha's character. Thank you for another great update you rock!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  LOL at Bennie and Keisha.  No she doesn't want a one minute man so Bennie better step up his game!  More is coming.

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Date: June 06 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Pain and Healing

That chapter was awesome! Poor Bennie! So lost! Wow Raymond did a big turn around! From wanting to kill himself, Sounds like seeking help was the best thing for him. I hope he doesnt give up on Bennie!

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Date: July 09 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

There's love and then there's everything else.  Answer to  the Through His Eyes challenge.

 

 

 

 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6851
Read Count: 4006
Published: May 19 2013
Updated: May 24 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 All I need

I really enjoyed the start of this story! Look forward to reading more,

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Date: May 21 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

For Jamie Watson, raising Alex was supposed to be a short time gig, a means to an end before starting her new life. But with it brings a type of love she never could have imagined with Alex's father Mitch. While caring for him brings them together, will doing what's best for him tear them apart? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20139
Read Count: 54967
Published: May 20 2013
Updated: October 25 2013


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great update! Mitch and Jamie are defiantly falling for each other! The sexy stuff was good :)  Wonder if Alex's mom will come back and try to mess things up for them?! Look forward to more!

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Date: June 07 2013

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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196764
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Proud of Dmitri in this chapter he not only claimed his woman he stood up for her with his awful sister! Wonder what Dmitri's father doing there?! Great update ! Look forward to more.

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Date: August 15 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Greart job on writing this chaper. I loved it. Loved that Sasha told Dmitri off and slapped him, He deserved that. Who is he to tell someone's short comings and then cant handle hearing about his own. I have a feeling Dmitri is fooling himself and is starting to develop deeper feelins for Sasha. So look forward to reading more. Love the pic of Dina Thank you

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Date: June 04 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Yeah Sasha for saying something to that witch Faye! Another thmbs up for Dina! Teagan is her friend but the other two heifers need to go. Glad she went to Dimitri, him cuddling up with Sasha was so sweet. Great update.



Author's Response:

Yes, I absolutely loved writing that scene! Faye needed that and much more. Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 15 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.