Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The Sour Taste of Revenge
Brenda your writting skills and the way you can tell a story just leaves me speechless! Not only is this story outside of the box its very well thought out! This chapter was off the hook! What Beenie said to Ophelia was sad to read but very on point, she did choose her revenge over him and wasnt truthful about her real feelings for Raymond! Yet what she said to Raymond had me cracking up! Love the indroduction of Bobbie nice little twist to this story! Man What is going to through Kevins head reagarding what Beenie said about being black. So cant wait for more. Great job thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: You know Ophelia is a little off when it comes to Raymond. She still has her childlike fantasy of them being a family in her head. Kevin is going to have to decided if he still wants Bennie for a friend or if he wants Bobbie for his woman. More is coming!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed
Date: June 03 2013