Penname: Cali2mt406 [Contact]

Real name: Pam (Paw)

Member Since: September 13 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Born and raised in California, Until 2003 I moved to Montana!! Were  it is really cold I wonder often what I am doing here, other then the fact that it is beautiful here!! I love to read. Mostly romance novels. The authors on this board opened  my eyes to other storys beside the sappy ones I love and still will always read. However these lady's here write character with flaws and characters that love one antother dispite them. Lady's please continue to do your thing cause your doing it well.

 




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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196764
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Awesome update! Sasha is really growing into her own, so glad to see that. Dmitir is falling big time. Cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Yup. I have to say writing him as a lovesick puppy afte being such an asshole in the beginning is very satisfying. lol Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 19 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Great update!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: June 27 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I enjoyed this chapter, this story is coming along nicely.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: June 02 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Why is Sasha even friends with these woman!? They kinda of treat her like a after thought. Teagen seems to be the better of the bunch.Hmm Dmitir is really attracted to Sasha. Hope he knows what he is doing he just may fall for her and forget about having that trophy wife. Great update.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: June 02 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Wow  Sasha so called friends are to much, I see they to think of her as a wallflower and dismiss her as any compation, and whats up with Dmitri's tude!? Poor Sasha. This should be real interesting. More Please



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! Please, keep reading!

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Date: May 31 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Hmm wonder wy Dimtri doesnt have the attitude with Sasha?! Very interesting! Tegan is funny she thinks if a man doesnt want sex with he is gay! To funny and what a bit of a ego! Jaelyn doesnt seem like a very good friend to demanding and full of herself. Sasha should tell Teagan she is attracted to Dimtri! Look forward to more! Thank you



Author's Response:

At the moment, I don't really want Teagan to come off as a bad friend. Just a really self-absorbed one. That may change though...Thank you for reading!

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Date: May 31 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Awesome chapter! I knew Dmitri had it in him! Glad he isnt running away from his feelings for Sasha and is putting it out there. Yeah for Slade for opening his eyes. Also glad Sasah is going to start being friends with Dina! Are we going to read about Dina and Slades date? Look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes, there will be more of both Dmitri and Sasha as well as Slade and Dina in future chapters. More coming soon!

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Date: June 07 2013
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Awesome update!  Nadia is not only a hot mess, she is going to be trouble! I hope Dmitiri wont let her use his love for her mess up things with Sasha!  Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

I hope so too! More coming soon! Thank you for your review! :)

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Date: July 03 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I thought Dimitri and Sasha together was hot! Nadia needs to be bitched slapped and I hope Dmitri doesnt fall for her games , she is not a nice person.



Author's Response:

They're just so cute together- I can't stand it, even while I'm writing. smh. Thank you for your review!

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Date: July 05 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

That was a hawt chapter! For a min I was liking Domonic better then Dmitri! Domonic did break it down to him real good! Hopefully Dmitir listened to what he said concerning Sasha. Dmitiri better wise up to Nadia real fast before she ruins a good thing! This chapter was so worth the wait. Awesome job!

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Date: July 24 2013
There's No Crying in Baseball by Thewayiam
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

No matter what happens, there's no crying in baseball. On the field that is. Skylar Rose Lansing tries her best not too anyway. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10984
Read Count: 6914
Published: June 04 2013
Updated: June 14 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Some best friend! Well at least she knows her friend is a looser and she needs to drop her. As for the boyfriend from the discription he sounds imature and she shouldnt be surprised her insticts were correct. As much as it hurts move on find someon else. Wonder why Brian told her were Chandler was!? Wonder if he has a secret crush on her!? Great start look forward to more

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Date: June 04 2013
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Bloody Wrists and Broken Hearts by shyangel
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

 

10 years went by in the blink of an eye. Now eveyone was gathered in a tiny town for there highschool reunion. Sparks will fly as old 'friends' meet again.

Then enters two guys who have come with the intention of wooing the one girl they shouldnt have let go of in the first place. The only problem is there after the same girl.

On this unlevel playing field where hurt, love and jealousy run wild everyone is playing for keeps



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15228
Read Count: 10431
Published: June 22 2013
Updated: November 16 2013

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Top of the Stairs

Read both chapters! Grear start to what looks like to be a very good story! Loved that Melody had those snobs pretty near speechless and as for Mark, he is a tool and glad his marriage ended in divorce. Look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

the whole twon will be a buzz. Mark got what was coming to him.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: June 24 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Telling my Story

This chapter was great! Hahaha at Mark for not only getting cussed out but the door slammed in his face!  The nerve to show up! He did a lot of damage to Melody emotionaly and he needs to suffer :) Not sure I even want him to turn out to be the good guy and that is a first for me. Look forward to more! Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Nobody want him to be the good guy. i think i made him a little too mean during his teenage years but alas he is the main guy. I will have to make it work some how.

 

Always wanted to slam a door in someone's face and there are more than a couple guys i would like to practice on. More is coming soon.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: June 26 2013
You Make Me Wanna by TheDoll
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 36]
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Beck hates his job. His model boss, Heather, is a complete bitch. The only upside to working there is looking at her in the little shorts stomping around the house. However Beck's luck on the job just may change when the opportunity arises to tame the beast. 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: Hollywood Gems
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9431
Read Count: 8435
Published: July 15 2013
Updated: July 19 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Well isn't this a surprise...

Nice! Look forward to more.

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Date: July 16 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Lessons to be taught

I Just love your Characters! Beck dont play I love what he is doing to Heather and I am glad Cameraon has his back! The bathroom scene was priceless. I love this story!

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Date: July 18 2013
Chance Encounter by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 353]
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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82574
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013

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Title: Chance Encounter

Super excited when I seen and update to my favorite story! Loved this! Its funny how Harold Williams had to change his tune when it hit home! Glad Paris and Billy are going to have a baby! Dispite there road blocks there love held strong, Good for them.

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Date: August 21 2013
Title: Chance Encounter

I just love Billy! They way he is courting Paris through letters how romantic is that! On top of that he shows up with flowers on his prom night! So exctied for more!

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Date: July 27 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was an awesome tease and I want more! But understand its a challange :(



Author's Response:

I can't seem to let it go...

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Date: July 18 2013
Title: Chance Encounter

Billy has more game then most adult men! Good for him! As always look forward to more of this story. Had a lazy saturday so I spent the day reading some of your finished storys. Loved Appalachia,Acceptable lies was off the chain and I finished up with twice the fool. Would love a story on Gretchen and Julius I loved the way she went after him. Your an aweoms story teller never a dull moment with your storys.

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Date: July 28 2013
Title: Chance Encounter

Hmmm not sure Billy should tell his dad! 

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Date: July 24 2013
Title: Chance Encounter

For a high school guy Billy sure knows what he wants! Him telling Paris how he felt was so sweet! Loving this story, glad you continued it. Cant wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It's so hard to stay within 500 words with my longwinded self.  But since I'm on vacation it makes it easier to update!  Thanks for the review

 

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Date: July 26 2013
Title: Chance Encounter

Love Billy! Wonder what Paris is going to do!?

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Date: July 29 2013
Title: Chance Encounter

Love the Banner! Paris might as well stop running, Billy isnt giving up. That boy doesnt give up.

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Date: July 29 2013
Title: Chance Encounter

Glad you muse is in high geer cause I love this story! The mention of the house burning, wow in those days its hard to believe that crap happened. Poor Paris!

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Date: July 29 2013
Title: Chance Encounter

Come on Paris you know Billy's your man claim him the way he is claiming you! Scary stuff for those times, However she is right Billy would hunt her down and who could fight the way he makes her feel. Great stuff Brenda. Keep it coming.

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Date: July 29 2013

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